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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have been thinking about posting this poem. Hope you all will be able to make the connection and will like it. Ok if u don't then the house is the metaphor for Radhika and the person walking up the hill is Dev.



The house on the hill

I was walking up the hill

Deep in contemplation

And came across a house

In the throes of demolition.

Completely desolate

With the walls covered with vines

Griping each other

Overpowering the spirit to live

To breathe and to thrive.

Sitting desolate on the hill,

Crying out to wanderers,

To lessen their load,

To make it a home.

To fill it with joy and compassion,

Which was the hearts desire

Of the house on the hill.

Alas, it was left alone,

No one heard the silent cries,

The tender pleadings of compassion

The rapacious tentacles of destruction

Drained it of its energy.

No kindness was shown,

No sympathy given,

All that was left, was an empty shell,

Of bricks, mortar and cement.

The house stood silent,

Maintaining a facade of tranquillity,

The silent hurt, of loosing itself,

That have flown like the winds of change.

But the black omens

Could not break

The spirit to live and to make a home,

Which is the heart's desire,

Of the house on the hill.

As I came upon the house on the hill,

It cried out to me,

Tired of it's lonely existence.

I decided to rest my weary feet,

To soak in it's quiet strength, it's compassion.

Together we will grow old,

And built a home,

Fill it with joy, with happiness.

And will welcome strangers

Who come across the house on the hill.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Misti the poetess...its really beautiful... 👏👏
Keep it up dear..😊
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Originally posted by: set_raj

Misti the poetess...its really beautiful... 👏👏

Keep it up dear..😊



Thank you Raj. Today is no sarcasm day for me😊
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Originally posted by: misti73



Thank you Raj. Today is no sarcasm day for me😊

Ohhh..something special today?..or Sarcasm Day Off today?..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That's so beautiful fitting the circumstances. Wonder what Raj is upto. No sob sob Radhika.....
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It may not be a day of satires and sarcasms, but it sure is a day of beautiful poetry! Enjoyed the verse. I hope you continue to write and post more.
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Originally posted by: Minajay

That's so beautiful fitting the circumstances. Wonder what Raj is upto. No sob sob Radhika.....

Raj was busy posting on my thread! His parody is a Raj classic!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: set_raj

Ohhh..something special today?..or Sarcasm Day Off today?..



Its sarcasm day off today😊
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Originally posted by: gardes

It may not be a day of satires and sarcasms, but it sure is a day of beautiful poetry! Enjoyed the verse. I hope you continue to write and post more.



Thanks Gardes.......I like writing poetry so there will be more from me.
Edited by misti73 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Misti, what a beautiful poetry. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for helping us connect that rads is the house and Dev is the person walking on the hill. 👏

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