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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u for filling my request😉... really nice update ................ 👏loved radev part.... plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god no one disturbed radev this time😉... grt prt... cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Palak for another nice part , finally they got some cute moments .
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u to those who commented

@DEVIKA8: arrien arrien di dont cough to much it looks like i have to give u a medicans which is part 19 lol glad u liked it so still struggling to remeber all the charachter lol i guess it will take u some time.

@nycsweetie: hey thanks alot glad u liked part 18 hope u like the following update coming up

@melissa05: thanks glad u liked the part especially the kiss between radev 😉

@chalhov:thanks im glad u liked the rade part and also the introducing bir of everyone phew i was scared thinking of getting tomatoes thrown at me lol

@chipak:hey thanks glad u liked the scenes hmmm u hate misunderstanding and stuffs but sorry it was my mistake i didnt put that note up clealry i meant that there willl be misunderstanding betweeen radev and also probz with there friends but who u never know anything vould happen or be planned 😉

@imarti_rubi:lol i hadd to fill ur reauest all i could see was from everyone hope rade get some time and no one spoils that moment.

@sonia122: yep no one did this time glasd u like it

@DAIRY25:ur welcome glad u liked it and enjoyed the cute moment.

and thanks to those who liked the part
kscjk, SPNAS, mich, Nabesa, sonia122, shalinikanagu, Priya46, sugarandspice, DAIRY25, DEVIKA8, billo77, nycsweetie, chalhov

a clear note i want to make i typed it a bit wrong i know i metioned that there will be misunderstading, arguments and sepereation between radev but i also forgot to add that it could happen between friends and family but u never know anything can happen 😉😊 u must be thinking y im smiling well u will get to know the answer to ur question when the right times come just remeber nothing can come between any of them luv u all thanks 4 the love and support tc will update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


Edited by palak13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmmmmmmmm wonder where the others have gone not much comment this time i dont know if i should update the next part now i think ill wait till i get more comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hey,
please update ASAP. update now if you can. i really love this ff. greaet job
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey palak, sorry for replying late. Had been busy so wasnt coming to forum much. But now finished up all parts. 😃 And loved it all. Thank you dear for all these beautiful parts.......

Ok to begin with the cooking part.......hehe the boys were so badly trapped in to cooking and cleaning chores. But i loved that line where Padma said, that if the girls dont go and help how would the boys realize that they need women in all steps of their life. good one.👏 👏 👏 And then.......Oh god.......Such romantic parts😳 😳 😳 😳 I was blushing totally reading those little cute romantic parts. The one in the room where Dev kisses everywhere but her lips😳 😳 Cute😳 And then slowly thinking whether he actually loved her or not? Good he's atleast coming to the right path now.

Coming to next part. I hate this Sneha. Why is she forcing herself on Dev? Crazy! 😡 Even Dev told her that he doesnt love her, yet she thinks that he loves her?? And now i am sure, she's up to some plan!!! 😕 But the Romantic Date in the ghat made up for my anger......that was so sweet and beautiful. How nice of Dev to take her to dinner date😳 and romance her. 😉

Hehe......loved everyone teasing Radhika's anger. Especially Dev......she was hurt by it. But then he did mend it. 😉 Loved the way he was blocking her from going away from him. 😳 😉 Naughty Dev 😉 And then the Diary part was touching......and the part where Dev plays with her dairy was even more 😳 😳 ahem....ahem......God....why did Nikki have to come now? Couldne she have come after some time. Dev was quite busy na here😉 hehe

And Gosh........the store room romance was 👏👏👏 I was literally 😳 😳 😳 Loved the way you described the ahem.......wild kiss😳 Thanks a lot for that 😃😳 And yes, i also enjoyed the little fights between Rahul-Muskaan😆 Nice one, Muskaan took a good trick to beat up that poor guy!! And yes the part where everyone tells about themselves was also good👏

Thanks a lot.......


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sugarandspice

hey hey,

please update ASAP. update now if you can. i really love this ff. greaet job



ok ok i will update still writing but it wont be long as it usually is
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely


Hey palak, sorry for replying late. Had been busy so wasnt coming to forum much. But now finished up all parts. 😃 And loved it all. Thank you dear for all these beautiful parts.......
its ok i understand i was just waiting i knew u would reply one day 😉

Ok to begin with the cooking part.......hehe the boys were so badly trapped in to cooking and cleaning chores. But i loved that line where Padma said, that if the girls dont go and help how would the boys realize that they need women in all steps of their life. good one.👏 👏 👏 And then.......Oh god.......Such romantic parts😳 😳 😳 😳 I was blushing totally reading those little cute romantic parts.
yep they boys had to realsie so i thought y not make padma say that.im happy how u loved the romantic parts
The one in the room where Dev kisses everywhere but her lips😳 😳 Cute😳 And then slowly thinking whether he actually loved her or not? Good he's atleast coming to the right path now.
lol i had to make dev think fast probably radhika closenes gives him more energy
Coming to next part. I hate this Sneha. Why is she forcing herself on Dev? Crazy! 😡 Even Dev told her that he doesnt love her, yet she thinks that he loves her?? And now i am sure, she's up to some plan!!! 😕 But the Romantic Date in the ghat made up for my anger......that was so sweet and beautiful. How nice of Dev to take her to dinner date😳 and romance her. 😉
hmmm sneha is upto some plan but even i dont know what lol phew happy that the romantic dinner at the ghat too ur anger away.
Hehe......loved everyone teasing Radhika's anger. Especially Dev......she was hurt by it. But then he did mend it. 😉 Loved the way he was blocking her from going away from him. 😳 😉 Naughty Dev 😉 And then the Diary part was touching......and the part where Dev plays with her dairy was even more 😳 😳 ahem....ahem......God....why did Nikki have to come now? Couldne she have come after some time. Dev was quite busy na here😉 hehe
i thought i should a bit of that in it i didnt know what others would think but glad all of u liked it. yaar nikki had to come as she is dev sister and radika friend so probz she thought lets be kabbab main haddi 😆 afterall she is dev purohit sister lol. so if brother is naughty then sister would be abit naughty

And Gosh........the store room romance was 👏👏👏 I was literally 😳 😳 😳 Loved the way you described the ahem.......wild kiss😳 Thanks a lot for that 😃😳 And yes, i also enjoyed the little fights between Rahul-Muskaan😆 Nice one, Muskaan took a good trick to beat up that poor guy!! And yes the part where everyone tells about themselves was also good👏
finally the store room as i was reading along ur comment wanted to read what u put for the store room and i loved it glad u liked it even rahul and muskaan fight well. and glad u liked how people talk to eachother/

Thanks a lot.......
i should be saying thank u to for this lovely comment really touching im happy how u commented on each and every part tha nk u so much and and glad to know that u rember all the charachters name

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Posted: 14 years ago

Recap: dev confesses his love to radhika and kiss each other passionately abhi tells everyone since its there last day they should talk about themselves so that the others get to know each other and everyone agreed to this idea.

part 19

radev broke away from the hug. Dev held radhika close by her waist and kissed her forehead to he was about to move and kiss her lips when he got a phone call. He took the phone out of his pocket and then looked at the caller ID and was shocked to see sneha calling him.

Dev: OMG what shall I do now radhika is standing in front of me and sneha is calling no I cant take the call otherwise I would blast on sneha and radhika will find out.

Radhika: kya hua dev tum apna phone kyun nahin utha rahin ho (what happed n dev y aint u answering your phone)

Dev: wo radhika actually its one of my friends call from the USA he likes to annoy me so i wont answer his call and he switched it of.

On the hand sneha was angry that dev cut her phone.

Sneha: main phir se try karti hoon (I will try again) but now she cant call as dev phone is switched of damn it she said and threw the phone on the bed.

Back 2 the terrace

Radhika:dev u still seemed 2 be worried wt the matter

Dev tried 2 cover it up: no no its nothing like that and gave her a peck on the lips. Radhika just cuddled up into him never wanting to let him go they stood there 4 ages god knows 4 how long

Radhika: dev this is all seems like 2 be a dream but I don't knw y I feel like asking will u suppot me 4 everything even though I no the answer.

Dev: of course I will but y are u asking this.

Radhika: I don't know I was just thinking what if one day someone comes and says something about me with proofs about me then even though I haven't done anything.

Dev: radhika I trust u completely and your eyes always tell me the truth but even if this situation comes then we will have 2 face it remember u say that anything can happen in destiny and ur eyes tell me the truth and as long as im alive no one can harm u

Radhika: dev don't u dare even say that again she said breaking the hug and was pointing her fingers at him, dev could notice she was angry and decides to tease her a bit.

Dev: see radhika I was right anger stays 24 hours on your nose.

Radhika: dev that aint true ok

dev: radhika that is true see ur nose has gone red by ur angriness like this and he made a funny face.

Radhika what so u r trying to say that my face looks like this when im angry

Dev: yes he said and started 2 move back as sensing what gone happen next.

She then started chasing around the terrace radhika tries to get him but couldn't as he always moved away after a while she felt tired and sat on the swing he came and sat down next to her a bit close she put her hands around his arms and put her head on his shoulder. And dev rested his head slightly on hers.

Dev: im happy that we came to vrindavan otherwise we wouldn't have met each other.

Radhika: but we had to because it was all planned in destiny.

Dev: hmmmm and all this happened because of kanha. Looking a the sky

Radhika: ye this all happened because of him. And looked up at the sky both were lost in their own thoughts in each other arms. Slowly slowly radhika started to close her eyes as she was feeling comfortable in devs arm and fell asleep

Dev: radhika when is ur internship starting he asked still looking at the sky. But didn't get any answer he slowly lifted his head up and looked at her and saw her sleeping peacefully. He smiled and the kissed her head he saw the time it was 9:30. he slowly picks her up in his arms and walk to her room. He looked downstairs a bit to see is everyone sis still there he saw all the girls are then and quickly took radhika to her room otherwise if they see her like with with him they would tease them he reached towards her room and put radhika on the bed and put the quilt around her. He looked at her for the final time kissed her forehead and left. He went downstairs where the others were . vishaka came back by then.

Dev: hi guys what r u all taking about he asked walking down.

Riddhima: u r here but where is my radhika.

Dev: ummm how would I know where she is. She might be in her room.

Riddihma: ok she then called her radhika, radhika where r u but no answer.

Muskaan: riddzi this is my job let me do it watch she will come running down.

Nupur: arrein muskaan when riddhima shouted out her name she didn't answer then what different will it make when u do.

Muskaan: u just wait and watch. She turned to riddzi, Armaan, atul, anjali, abhi, nikki, rahul and sapna and said read guys they all put hands on their ears and got ready 4 the blast whuile the others were curious to knw y their hands were on their ear.

Dia: y r u all putting ur hands on ur ears.

Nikki: dia u will get the answers to ur question soon just wait after all thery could here was muskan

Muskaan: BASKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET WHERE R UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.. the other shrieked when muskaan and screamed and put their hands on their ears and finally got the answer to the question. Where on the other hand radhika got up as she heard muskaan scream. She saw herself alone in her room but she didn't think and just ran downstairs.

Muskaan: le here she comes and went towards her and put her hands around her shoulders.

Radhika: what happened y did u scream.

Angad: she screamed because u were not coming downstairs while riddzi called u many time.

Radhika: oh she said she still felt like sleeping she didn't bother to look around who is in the hall. She walked to where near kripa and Angad was sitting and sat in between them and put her head on kripa shoulder and closed her eyes. Angad stroked her head.

Angad: bacha if u r feeling tired then go and sleep.

Radhika no im not tired after muskaan called me I felt like something happened that y I came running but if I knew she called me like that then I wouldn't have bothered to come. Anyways I will be back in a min need to change.

She then got up and walked to her room and got changed into her pyjamas

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came back down and stayed a bit far away so no one saw here except dev then dev signalled her to sit with him she signalled him saying no. but he didn't agree he pleaded her but she sad a final no he didn't give up and then texted her saying

radhika

come and sit next to me now.

Radhika saw her phone vibrate and saw a message from dev she opened it and read it and thought is he demanding me. She texted him back saying

Mr dev purohit r u ordering me.

Dev then looked at his phone and texted her back

Think whatever u want now come and sit next to me.

Radhika text back saying what if I don't

Dev texted her back saying radhika think about it if u don't then im gone tell everyone that u were on the terrace with me and also tell them about our lovely kiss that happened in the store room now think about it. he smirked and sent the message as radhika read it she was shocked and looked at him angrily. With his eyes he signalled her to sit next to him. She walked up sitting next to him but a bit far away. Everyone was bust talking and there back was facing radev then dev came a bit near radhika and leaned her and whispered in her ears

Dev: so u had no options isn't it well no one can say no to me

Radhika: shot him a glare and the whispered back to him. if u think that I cant say no to u then forget but I had to say no because u blackmailed.

Dev: well u don't leave me with any options so I had to do this.

Radhika: well if I didn't come and u told them then do u think that they will only tease me and leave u.

Dev: of course they will only tease u.

Radhika: dev shut up and be quite.

Dev: make me infact u knw I could close my mouth if u give me a kiss.

Radhika: what r u mad.

Dev: yes madly in love with u.

Radhika: looked away and blushed.

Dev: now stop blushing and give me a kiss.

Radhika: and y shall I give a kiss.

Dev: because I made ur anger go away and u blushed I deserve something for making u smile.

Radhika: u know what u sit here im going to sit there. And was about to get up dev sat closer to her and held her hands.

Dev: first a kiss then go where ever u want.

Radhika: dev

Dev: kiss radhika.

Radhika knew he wouldn't let her go so she said: ok flirst close ur eyes and lave my hands

Dev: y? asking suspiciously

Radhika: dev if u want a kiss hurry up and listen to me before anyone see it.

Dev: ok ok and he closed his eyes and lets his grip go from radhika. Radhika smiled wickedly. After a few minutes dev whispered again. Radhika what is taking u so long. Hurry na. but no response radhika listen if u don't do what I told u then u r gone pay for it.

Atul: pay for what dev.

Dev opened his eyes as he heard atul he looked that at everyone and saw dew r looking at him while the others r busy speaking.

dev: oh nothing I was trying to remember something from a letter but can.

Samrat: oh ok so u were trying to remember it but what letter did radhika give u. hmm it might be a love letter isn't it guys.

Atul: hmmmmm

Dev no it aint it was some important papers that it now stop this. He then scanned his face and saw radhika sitting next to Angad and kripa surrounded with the others. He moved up a near a empty couch and sat there facing radhika. Radhika got buys talking to others but then she felt someone gaze on her and saw dev looking at her. She gave him a winning smile. He looked at her angrily.

Dev texted her

What do u think of urself.

Radhika:um smart, intelligent, and may more cant list it out u knw.

Dev: radhika how dare u fool me like that no one has ever fooled me and now u r gone pay for it he smirked.

Radhika: god dev this is the second time I fooled u first in the storeroom remember and then later in the afternoon u gave me a u have to pay for this look remember I guess u r forgot. Dev I think u r getting old u knw what eat almond that will make u refresh ur brain,

As dev was reading the message he was fuming no one has ever answered him back except this girl.

Dev:radhika u know that no one has ever spoken to me like this,

Radhika: but I have the right to she said with a smile.

dev read the text and all his anger vanished radhika saw the smile on his face she slowly got up before disturbing and told everyone in a signal she is going to sleep she walked passed dev and saw him just staring at the text and smiling and ran to her room. She then text him again saying I love u gone miss u so much and stop staring at the phone now good night xxxx

dev came back to he sense when he felt the vibration he saw the text and smiled love u to good night xxxx dev wanted to go to radhika before she sleeps but got stopped by the other talk and no one allowed him after an hour or so he finally he made up an excuse saying he wanted to change he slowly went to radhika room and closed the door behind. But stood at the door when he saw his angel sleeping so peacefully cuddled up with her teddy and smile on her face he went near her and put the quilt around her properly and kissed her forehead.

Dev: good night radhika

Radhika: hmmm she said in her sleep. Dev kissed her forehead and was about to leave when he saw a note near her it said his name that's y he took it.

It read

Dev

Really gone miss u I know u would come here to check on me now don't ask me how I knw I just guessed it tomorrow we will be going back thanks a lot dev for coming in mu life and thanks for taking my confusion away now I don't care about anyone as long as ive got ur support no one can harm me as my dev is gone be beside me. Ok ok stop staring at me now and go an sleep otherwise if someone come here then they would start teasing u.

Dev was surprised he was actually thinking how would radhika no all this would happen. He kissed her forehead and went to his room. Slowly everyone started go to bed as they were leaving yesterday.

Everyone came down at 7 as they were gone leave at 9.

Dev was looking for radhika and saw her coming down

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he looked at her and smiled and she smiled back at him and they both didn't say anything 2 each other just sat on the dinning table and ate while the other spoke and chatting about various things.

It was about 8 now and everyone finished eating rasdhika went to the terrace and dev went behind her

Precap: still the same as last time dev and rahika look at each other the final time at and sit in the car.

link to the next part

Going back to delhi

Edited by palak13 - 14 years ago

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