Thoughts(poems)4th August2011-Radhika page 55 - Page 8

Originally posted by: bee5

Arre, why I always find something to disagree with you ... 😲
In just 1 sentence of yours, the part highlighted in Red, I disagree and the part highlighted in Blue, I agree.
Next sentence highlighted in Fuchsia, I think will not happen. You already know I am of the opinion that creatives are just playing this game with the viewers to making believe that Vishaka is bad. She is their trump card to take the story forward (or in your words showing "silliness") and you also know that I believe that someone from the creative team likes her 😉, I was glad to find that in Mishti's post some time back and said to myself BINGO!! 😆

bee5 even I agree to ur point that Rad's is not helping Vish b'coz she thinks Vish has helped her in getting married but only as she thinks she is her sister and it is her sisterly duties.... I don't think Rad's has started to see Vish as other's see her b'coz if she would have she would not have mentioned on that night to Dev that there must be some reason behind it, she would not have had any other optionn left " She would not have pitied her and completely ignored other's anger and furious remarks...

Originally posted by: rajsri

Rajsri, go get an aasan and sit at my feet, with hands joined in namaskaar!

😆 😆 Gardes ...anything for you ... as long as the squirrels that you chase dont get on my lap!
😆


Regarding Rads and her behavior the past few days ... I definitely think it is a mixture of not wanting to get him involved in maayka and also her stubborness in wanting to do what she thinks is right. I think she believes that the right thing to do is to help her sister and by asking Dev for permission she may not be able to do it if he refuses. I also think her faith in God is so strong that she believes kanha will always be there for her and will help her do the right thing

My guess is that Dev is on to her and will ask her something that will indicate that ... there were too many things today ... going out, asking for money that are uncharacteristic of Rads ... he let it go but I thought I saw a flicker of something in his eyes ... maybe it was a mosquito passing by his eyes while they were shooting ... but I thought he was on to her.

Rajsri, your Dev faced saanps in the gufa. You cannot do this much for Gardes Ma? Darpok! Lots still left to learn to be called wise. Misti is hopeless, but I have hopes for you still!

Nancy Drew is Radhika..........I used this name because according to Rajsri she always solves problems on her own. Started too write a funny poem but ended up writing this..............sorry it's a bit too long.

From a friend whom she could recall

Asking her for desperate aid

Because the friend thought that she was her maid.

Nancys Drews friend was in a mess

That was her own creation but she won't confess

She blamed Ms. Drew for her plight

When it could have been avoided, if she had forsight.

The friend had lived a life of luxury

While Nancy Drew wallowed in misery

She did not have to lift a finger

When Ms.Drew was there mop up all the clinker.

All the loved ones told Ms.Drew

To let her friend deal with life that she blew

It was for Nancy Drews own good

That she didn't give her friends mind any food.

But Nancy Drew had mind of her own

That was difficult for her to disown

All her life she was taught to look out

For her friend who was always in a bout.

She hoped that someone will hear her confusion

That how could she forget her lifes compulsion

Why do people expect her to change in an instant

When they themselves want to remain constant.

Does she always have to be Ms.Perfect

All the time thinking of others respect

Will she ever be free of people's expectation

That sometimes reminds her of suffocation.

She knows that her love is always by her side

To help her survive with nothing to hide

But her fear of rejection keeps her mute

Even when she knows that there is nothing to dispute.

She is afraid of the secrets that's in her soul

That might make her love cry foul

Although it was not her make

But where will she go if he forsake.

So Nancy Drew continues to blunder

Because of the fear that she is under

She continues to fight a lone battle

Unmindful that it can cause the snakes to rattle.

In her obligation to lifes past

She stands alone facing the blast

When one fine day she finally realizes

That her silence is going to harm someone whom she prizes.

Hope she learns from her mistake

And accepts it is cowards way to let others forsake

Their sense of pride because she could not tell

For it will land her soul in pure hell.

Hopefully she will rise to the occasion

And not fall for others persuasion

Wish she understands that it is futile

To live a life that is a lie.

Hope you all liked my version of Nancy Drew

Originally posted by: misti73

Does she always have to be Ms.Perfect

All the time thinking of others respect

Will she ever be free of people's expectation

That sometimes reminds her of suffocation.

She knows that her love is always by her side

To help her survive with nothing to hide

But her fear of rejection keeps her mute

Even when she knows that there is nothing to dispute.

👏 👏 👏 Wow ... Misti ... oh cool one 😎 ... awesome poem ... loved it

so you changed it from funny based on today's episode ... in such short notice ????? 👏

i specially love these 2 stanzas ... i feel sorry for her .. the expectation of her is always to be perfect ... perfect daughter, sister, wife, CB ... and I think a huge problem for her is the pedestal that people who love her unconditionally continue to put her on

Originally posted by: rajsri

👏 👏 👏 Wow ... Misti ... oh cool one 😎 ... awesome poem ... loved it

so you changed it from funny based on today's episode ... in such short notice ????? 👏

i specially love these 2 stanzas ... i feel sorry for her .. the expectation of her is always to be perfect ... perfect daughter, sister, wife, CB ... and I think a huge problem for her is the pedestal that people who love her unconditionally continue to put her on

Thanks for liking the poem.

Rajsri I started writing a funny one and wrote two paragraphs yesterday but my heart was not in it........and I was struggling to get the correct words. So left and came back to it today hoping that can write a fuuny one again. But then when I started to write, this is what came out. So I decided to go with the flow.

I feel sorry for Radhika because every one wants her to be perfect..............it is very difficult to be perfect some time and this 20 year old girl has to be perfect all the time? Can't she make misatkes like other people? Why are people after her all the time...........for her to be the adarsh bahu, daughter, wife, sister.........let her make mistakes..........after that it is her choice wether she learns from the mistakes or doesn't learn.........if she doesn't learn and still goes on as before then she will deserve whatever is in store for her.

Originally posted by: dg86

Yessssssssss!!! 😎 Misti, you are the coolest one 😎. I don't get a chance to applaud you everyday (for some reason I cannot log into IF from my iphone 😔 so cannot post) but here I am today 👏. You are very talented...... I enjoy all your post - humor, poetry, parody, science lessons, etc. Thanks to CB I found you and a lot of other talented members on this forum.

thanks dg86.........sorry could not respond earlier

misti ur poem simply toched the soul... I suppose this is what is Radhika going thru righ now.. The inner turmoil of her's of losing Dev...

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

misti ur poem simply toched the soul... I suppose this is what is Radhika going thru righ now.. The inner turmoil of her's of losing Dev...

Thanks Abhilasha...........this is what I feel about Radhika......she can fight others if they want to take him away but what will she do if Dev himself leaves her alone?

Originally posted by: misti73

Nancy Drew is Radhika..........I used this name because according to Rajsri she always solves problems on her own. Started too write a funny poem but ended up writing this..............sorry it's a bit too long.

Lifes truth

Nancy Drew got a call

From a friend whom she could recall

Asking her for desperate aid

Because the friend thought that she was her maid.

Nancys Drews friend was in a mess

That was her own creation but she won't confess

She blamed Ms. Drew for her plight

When it could have been avoided, if she had forsight.

The friend had lived a life of luxury

While Nancy Drew wallowed in misery

She did not have to lift a finger

When Ms.Drew was there mop up all the clinker.

All the loved ones told Ms.Drew

To let her friend deal with life that she blew

It was for Nancy Drews own good

That she didn't give her friends mind any food.

But Nancy Drew had mind of her own

That was difficult for her to disown

All her life she was taught to look out

For her friend who was always in a bout.

She hoped that someone will hear her confusion

That how could she forget her lifes compulsion

Why do people expect her to change in an instant

When they themselves want to remain constant.

Does she always have to be Ms.Perfect

All the time thinking of others respect

Will she ever be free of people's expectation

That sometimes reminds her of suffocation.

She knows that her love is always by her side

To help her survive with nothing to hide

But her fear of rejection keeps her mute

Even when she knows that there is nothing to dispute.

She is afraid of the secrets that's in her soul

That might make her love cry foul

Although it was not her make

But where will she go if he forsake.

So Nancy Drew continues to make blunder

Because of the fear that she is under

She continues to fight a lone battle

Unmindful that it can cause the snakes to rattle.

In her obligation to lifes past

She stands alone facing the blast

When one fine day she finally realizes

That her silence is going to harm someone whom she prizes.

Hope she learns from her mistake

And accepts it is cowards way to let others forsake

Their sense of pride because she could not tell

For it will land her soul in pure hell.

Hopefully she will rise to the occasion

And not fall for others persuasion

Wish she understands that it is futile

To live a life that is a lie.

Hope you all liked my version of Nancy Drew

Mishti,
I liked the lines I highlighted in blue. Thats a very good point/observation!
I loved the way you played with the word from the 2nd half till just before you ended. Those were the words picked from this very thread, some from your own comments and some from others. Beautiful adaption of sentences into lines in poems ... Too Good!!
The first half of the poem was just Rahika and I was thinking when did Nancy Drew become so weak?! But the second half of the poem was absoultely brilliant. 👏👏Kudos. 👍🏼

Thank you Bee............the funny poem became this. Actually until you pointed out regarding words from this thread........I did not even realsie that fact. Must have been doing it subconsiously..........I think all my feelings regarding Radhika came out in this poem........I mean all the things that I have been feeling about her for the past week.