Thoughts(poems)4th August2011-Radhika page 55 - Page 19

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

misti

i read ur mrs Pansy about Mrinalni and it was simply superb dear ..

JOkes apart , Misti you are immensely talented and creative . iF u ever can , do a course in creative writing in poetry and ur talents will come up to the fore . Truly .

Thanks Kools...........actually I have been thinking about it for some time..........I have been writing poetry and small satires for a long time and now I think some sort of guidance will be of help........I have an aunt who is an author, but I always feel that it is better to have an impartial guide in these matters.

Originally posted by: misti73

Thanks Kools...........actually I have been thinking about it for some time..........I have been writing poetry and small satires for a long time and now I think some sort of guidance will be of help........I have an aunt who is an author, but I always feel that it is better to have an impartial guide in these matters.

Guide? Hume to itni jaankari nahin hai, But I think you are way too good.
Guide to bann nahin sakte, creative criticism to zaroor karenge, if you need. 😊

Originally posted by: bee5

Guide? Hume to itni jaankari nahin hai, But I think you are way too good.
Guide to bann nahin sakte, creative criticism to zaroor karenge, if you need. 😊

Thank you Bee..........why do u think I am using u as a guinea pig 😉😃

Originally posted by: misti73

Thank you Bee..........why do u think I am using u as a guinea pig 😉😃

aap hamare bhare mein aise sochthi hain to hum kyaa kar sakte hain?!😭

Originally posted by: bee5

aap hamare bhare mein aise sochthi hain to hum kyaa kar sakte hain?!😭

Guinea pigs experiment ke leeye bahut hi important hai...........unke bina shayad kuch bhi nahi ho sakta ahi..........waise hi aap bhi hamare leeye bahut important hai.............kya kare hum sciene ke duniye ke log hai, isleeye guinae pig jaise shabd use karte hai.

Originally posted by: misti73

Guinea pigs experiment ke leeye bahut hi important hai...........unke bina shayad kuch bhi nahi ho sakta ahi..........waise hi aap bhi hamare leeye bahut important hai.............kya kare hum sciene ke duniye ke log hai, isleeye guinae pig jaise shabd use karte hai.

science ke duniye se ya kisi aur duniye se .. baate banana to koi aap se seekhe 😉

Originally posted by: bee5

science ke duniye se ya kisi aur duniye se .. baate banana to koi aap se seekhe 😉

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Today it was all about Vivek..........I just loved his attitude and hope that he will continue to deal with his wife in this manner. So todays poem is to him. The word love that I have used here does not mean that he loves Mrinalini, I have used it as a replacement for wife.

The Rise of a Hurt Soul

On rid of his own weakness and pain

He wakes at last from deep slumber that was in vain

For an incident had shattered his life when his love was new

He finally arose to face the facts that winds blew.

No kind words were said, no songs were sung,

And all he got were the abuse that his love flung

That wove around his soul like a poisonous ivy

And filled up his life with all the misery.

He hoped that his love will mind her ways

And see for herself that all those she flays

Will only empty her soul of empathy

That will lead her to loose others sympathy.

But finally he could take it no more

For it hurt him in the depths of his core

He decided that all the ills have to cease

And for that he arose above his souls disease.

Mishti, I have yet to see the epis. from today but I read the update and it warms my heart that Vivek is finally willing to see that his wife is rotten to the core. He knew where she was - with Arjun - when they were waiting at the base of the hill by the Takshak Raj's gufa. He tells her to stay with everyone else and in the next sentence she say she will leave for Delhi with Arjun. I think even Deepika is on to her husband's dalliance with Mrinu. Chachchu is equally rotten to the core to allow this to happen. Vivek and Deepika are the innocent victims and they have done nothing to Chachchu for him to sanction this affair!

Misti,