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Posted: 13 years ago
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Author's Note at the end..

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It was raining heavily.. Aditi was standing in the balcony... and Aditi could not hold back her tears.. not any more.. it has been two days without him.. family members are sad they are trying to console her but they can't feel what she is going through.. he was the only one who could understand her properly.. so she decided to keep silent.. though she knows silence is a silent killer..

how could she live without him? her life is nothing without him.. she had no more tears left.. the world is moving but she has no power to match the speed of the world. She just stood alone clutching his memories.

this world is so cruel.. she thought and sank into her reverie.

Just a week before it was raining ferociously.. only two of them were alone at home. She never felt anything like that.. she started to ruffle through his hair and he started to lick her cheeks slowly.. she felt a strange kind of happiness ruffling through his hair.. it made them to go into another world..

The day he went out of the home he didn't know what will happened with him.. he didn't know this cruel world was planning to separate them..

"Tommy I miss you.." She broke out crying again remembering her little Chihuahua.. "I can't live without you Tommy.."

It was the day when Kabir told her he is taking Tommy to doctor. And when he came back not with Tommy but alone Aditi was shocked..

"Tommy ruined all of my shoes chewing.. that's why I gave him to Karan.." Kabir said in usual serious tone..

How could he? A man can be so cruel?? Aditi thought sobbing.. To Karan?? May be is not even giving proper food to her Tommy.. She turned back and saw Kabir sleeping comfortably hugging his blanket..

"Don't worry Tommy.. I'm gonna take my revenge.." Aditi murmured.. [chhal music playing in back ground]

She brings out the kitchen knife thinking I'm gonna ruin the rest of your shoes Kabir.. and my last and final target is your blanket.. Aditi went towards his shoe rack with the knife..

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Plzz don't hit me wd jhadus.. i can imagine what will be ur reaction after reading this.. Well I am gonna run after posting this to save myself from your andas, tomatoes and jutis.. overlook grammatical n spelling mistakes i was ROFLing while writing..🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
🤣 Too good

Super... Though got the the idea when I read about "lick her cheeks" as I have a pet..
But nice one 👏
Edited by cosmogirl77 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sanju but i still wanna kill u... u ruined my romantic song.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"Don't worry Tommy.. I'm gonna take my revenge.." Aditi murmured..

She brings out the kitchen knife thinking I'm gonna ruin the rest of your shoes Kabir.. and my last and final target is your blanket.. Aditi went towards his shoe rack with the knife..

Super stuff 👏...
Typical Aditi behavior 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cosmogirl77

"Don't worry Tommy.. I'm gonna take my revenge.." Aditi murmured..

She brings out the kitchen knife thinking I'm gonna ruin the rest of your shoes Kabir.. and my last and final target is your blanket.. Aditi went towards his shoe rack with the knife..

Super stuff 👏...
Typical Aditi behavior 😆

hmm. typical bhootni behavior..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣😆 Mika!



I was reading it sooo seriously! N tommy?


Tommy?
Tommy?
Tommy?
,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


😆







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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: goham1000

🤣😆 Mika!




I was reading it sooo seriously! N tommy?


Tommy?
Tommy?
Tommy?
,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


😆
🤣Tommy Kabir ka competition...🤣







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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohh gudness
u r just too much...
🤣
superb idea ..
well written.
keep it up. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roohasamia

ohh gudness
u r just too much...
🤣
superb idea ..
well written.

keep it up. 👍🏼

thnk u thank u.. so u lyk Tommy???🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mika: Tommy Kabir ka competition - too hilarious...🤣

But poor Kabir, u did not even choose a great dane or some big dog... you chose a Chihuahua... that too no ordinary Chihuahua but a little one to be Kabir competition... 🤣🤣🤣

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