Originally posted by: nushy1995
Actually, I read it up to 20 chapters or something and gotta admit, she did improve. The problem was, weird coochie coo type dialogues irritated the crap out of me.
Understandable... I myself get irritated with such weird dialogues. And this is why I haven't read 60% of the BVR fanfictions that I found there along with that particular one. Same with the CID FFs. More than half of them were filled with more of stupid romance than the thriller/suspense part.
Baaki I'm glad that she improved in the later chapters.
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