thanks maya,i'll post more in coming weeks,the poem is based on night jasmine,there's a jasmine plant at my native and everynight its smell surrounds our house,and in the morning the fragrance fades
There's a 2 nd part of it,which is sad one,i just dint post it
You have very well portrayed the metaphor of the jasmine plant with the line “Dressed in white gown with a green crown“.
Also, jasmine main attribute is the fragrance and the happiness it can bring, which was well captured in the following lines:
“There she stands with a smile on
Unfolds her petals and rhythmically dances
Spreading her fragrance along with her happiness
Smell so strong like a folk song
Making everyone tune into her happines along"
A poetic dance
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