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Originally posted by: SushK16

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Due to certain circumstances, Priya had to quit the team. Her work will be done by Ayesha now ( cute00ish).
All the write-ups have to be sent to Sush or posted here by 6pm tomorrow IST after proper editing and proof-reading.
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@Ayesha, Amazing tags...⭐️ Love them...😳
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@supriya and sush


I am done with my write up but its word limit is exceeding, i tried to shorten it but it has crossed 900 words, what can i do here? please tell me


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In God's Abode


All the children from orphanage are standing in awe looking with wide open, twinkling eyes to the fully decorated church with lights.


Anu: *with amazement* Wow! The church is looking beautiful. I've never thought that we can visit church on Christmas in the whole life *end with gloomy face*

Sush: But now you all can visit the church right? *smilingly said*

All the children: Yes!!

They all came on the entrance door and saw a cart wheel of green leaves with 4 big and 20 small candles.

Minnie: what is this? *curiously asked*

Ayesha: *sits on the knees* Advent wreath.

Sush: *narrated story* Once, children were asking the protestant again and again about Christmas arrival.

Sunny: Then what happen? *blinking brows*

Shagun: *smiles* Then, he made a ring and hung it on the entrance door with 20 small candles and 4 white candles, so they can stop asking again and again *touches Sunny's cheek*

The children listen carefully and curiously at which we all smile.

Shagun: *picking candle* Now we will lit the last white candle.

All the children: *chirped* yeah

They all enlighten the white candle and were moving inside.

Rohan: what is that? *pointing at mistletoe*

Romy:*licking lips* Berries! Can I take them?

Priya: *smiles at his innocence* No. You can't.

Aarav: *with gloomy face as well as demanding eyes* why?

Ayesha: The boy who eats berries from mistletoe has to kiss a girl and that's a ritual *presses lips*

Romy: *excitingly said* I've no problem.

Anu and Minnie: *opened their mouth* we wouldn't kiss them.

Priya: *calming them* Haha! I'll give you berries after prayer, okay?

All of them nodded their heads, licking their lips and we all enter the church for the prayer.

Aarav: Wow! There is a giant stage, with snowy and lighting Christmas trees.

Minnie: It has apples and candies too *licked lips*

Sunny: *chuckled* in Romy's company you too have become hungry.

All the children laughed but Rohan is looking at the musicians and singers on the stage.

Rohan: Who are they? *blinks his eyes*

Meena: *look at the musician* they are here for carol

Sunny: Carol? Is it a name of a girl * giggle*

Desto: *smiles* no it's a prayer and now we will take candles in our hands to pray and sing the carol *ends with excitement*

Meena: *look at Rohan* and you'll play the guitar on the stage.

Rohan: Me? *asks unbelievingly*

Desto: yes! We know you play guitar very well*smiles*

Rohan took steps to the stage and Sam gave all the children candles so they can pray and wish.

Minnie: *coming forward with fear* Can we give thanks to Jesus while praying

Sanju: Why not? We'll do that, it is a kind idea. *kissing Minnie's cheek*

They all take candles in their hands, enlighten them and made a systematic assembly prayer group and starts singing the carol.

Aarav: What we'll sing now? *unknowingly asked*

Sam: Holy Night. The most famous carol *blissfully answers*

They all sing the carol and Rohan plays guitar according to the music of it.

Sanju: Now we will wish and thank Jesus, then we will pass the candles one by one and final the last person will stick them on the table. *explains*

Sunny: Interesting! But why?

Aditi: Yes! Messages passes and god fulfill them soon*smiles*

They all start praying and passing the candle one by one.

Aarav: Oh God! Please make me a rich man so I can help my friends and thank you for giving me such a good friends *passes the candle to Minnie*

Minnie: Oh Lord! Please fulfill my brother's wish and thank you for giving me brother like him *passes the candle to Anu*

Anu: God! Please make me girl in my all birth, I'm lucky they left me but thanks to accept me in your abode

Romy: I want more and more candies and thanks for the candies you gave me today.

Rohan: Jesus! Please make me like other's but thanks for fulfilling my wish to play guitar in crowd *with wide smile says*

Aditi: *with tears* Oh God! Please fulfill all the wishes of these tiny hearts and thanks for giving a chance to make them smile *kept candle on table*

They join their hands and left to see the tableau outside the church.

Anu: wow!! See this cotton model *pointing to the depiction model of nativity*

Aarav: Our teacher has told us that it's nativity of Jesus *confidently says*

Desto: Yes it is Christ's rebirth.

Minnie: Lightening stars and snowy Christmas tree, can I touch the snow.

Rohan: See there is a Santa too *shows the sitting santa*

Romy: *interrupts Rohan* and he has opened his hand full with candies *licked his lips*

All the kids ran towards the Santa and Romy tried to grab the candies but didn't get success.

Sunny: *laughed* Gosh! It is not a real Santa, Mr. Hungry

Rohan and Aarav: Yes, it has made of pl...pla..

Shagun: *completes* Plaster of Paris

A musical sound reaches to the Anu's ears and she turned.

Anu: Ballet! *with shining eyes*

Sam: Yes my Dancing princess Ballet and its all for you *kissing her cheek*

Anu ran towards the stage and Minnie followed her they started dancing when Minnie fell down on the stage.

Anu: Don't cry! I'll tell you how to do that *forwarding hand*

Minnie: *wipe tears* I love you my friend.

And they again start dancing when the Santa came with his bean bag.

Sunny: Stay away from him Romy! He is'nt real he is also made of Pla-plaster of paris.

Romy: I know that he is the real. *show him his tongue*

Santa gave candies, gifts and balloons to all and Aarav and Rohan decides to divide them equally.

Minnie: Candies *excitingly*

Rohan: let's fly these balloons in the air; it will be a message to the God.

Aarav: Good Idea!

All the children chirpily fly the balloons in the sky and yelled Merry Christmas Jesus!!

Edited by -Aditi. - 9 years ago
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Write - up done. 😃
But it is having 771 words. Sush or Supriya, please help.

A visit to the Hershey's Chocolate Factory

All the kids were in high spirits after an awesome sleigh ride through the town. Now, there was a treat coming up for this bunch of goodies.

We're on our way to the Hershey's Chocolate Factory.

Romy : How far is it? I'm already hungry. *clenching his stomach*

Sunny : *giggling* Is that something new?

The others have to laugh at this now.

Aditi : We're just there, Romy. You are all going to love this.

Shagun : Hey, there it is. The Hershey's Chocolate Factory. *Smiling wide*

All the kids are in awe of the place.

Rohan : Oh My God! This looks awesome. Can't wait to get inside.

We got to the 4D Chocolate Mystery first.

Aarav : Wow. That looks like a movie hall. I'm sure there's something interesting.

Sanju : I'm sure there is. Lets move in kids. *smiling wide*

It was a breath - taking experience for the little kids. All came out extremely thrilled.

Minnie : That was literally so awesome. That chocolate monster seemed just in front of me. *eyes wide*

Sunny : Aah yes. It even looked somewhat similar to you. *laughing hard*

Minnie : *Making a face* Youuu!

A cat and mouse game follows, as the rest of the group watches in amazement, laughing at them.

Sush : Come on! Stop that kids. I guess that monster looked more like Desto. *Wink*

Desto : Hey Sush! You better watch it. *Smiling slyly*

Sush : I will, darling. *Wink, and a smile follows*

Sanju : You guys can carry on later. Look on. Let us create our very own chocolate bars. Ready kids?

All together : Forever Ready!

All the kids got busy choosing the kind of chocolates they wanted. Their happy, smiling faces were a treat for all of us.

Romy : ( With his hands covered in chocolate ) Just see this, Rohan. Mine is the biggest, and tastiest as well. *Proud*

Aarav : Mine is just as big as yours. I think I can open a chocolate factory when I grow up. *dreamily*

Sunny : Dream on buddy! *laughing, as usual*

Shagun : Hey boys! Call me when you do that, Aarav. *smiles* And the rest, better hurry. There is much left.

Desto : There it is. The wrap happiness section. Let us all click a photograph, kiddos.

We all posed for a perfect, smiley, picture.

Shagun : Wait! Anu darling! Smile dearie, say cheeese *cheese*

And we all captured the perfect moment, with the perfect bunch of kiddos.

Aditi : We'll get the photograph later on. Let us go have a meeting with Santa! *smiling wide*

Minnie : What? Are we really going to see Santa? OMG I am so so excited. *Jumping with joy*

Sush : See? Not only see, darling. You're going to talk to him, too.

That just made the children jump up and down with overflowing excitement.

As we entered the Santa's chamber, a familiar voice greeted us.

Santa : Merry Christmas Sweets!

Minnie : I still can't believe it. You look so cute, Santa. *touching his white beard*

Santa : Not more than you, sweet heart. *smiling wide* This is something for you.

And he hands out a gift to all the kids. All of them are delighted to get a present from the Santa himself. Santa gives candies to the children, and they all eat them heartily. Kids and chocolate - A match made in heaven!

Santa : Join me in carols, kiddos!

Anu : Can I sing too?

Santa : Ofcourse, my darling! Let us all enjoy ourselves!

After a big enjoying session with their favorite santa, the kids finally move on. We now go to the shopping centre.

Shirisha : Hey loveys! Quickly get something for yourself!

All the kids quickly got busy with the clothes, and stuff.

Rohan : This jacket is just amazing. I will take it.

Sunny : This makes you look like the Santa. *giggling*

Minnie : Isn't this doll cute? I'll get this one.

Anu is staring at a dress, standing in a corner.

Sush : What happened sweetie? Why don't you buy that pink frock? I'm sure you'll look gorgeous in that. *smiles*

Anu : Do you really think so. I look so dull. That won't look good on me at all. *sadly*

Shagun : Cheer up, princess! You'll look just like a fairy in that dress. I'll get that one, now.

Anu : Really! *hugs Shagun tightly*

Shagun : Ofcourse, sweetie. I hope everyone got their favorites. *smiling*

Desto : So, did you all enjoy, sweets?

In chorus : Yes, we did. A LOT! *Smiling wide*

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 9 years ago
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Awesome write - up, Aditi di...⭐️
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