Jelabis@BlackCoffees@Rabba ves' #2 [IO Only] - Page 10

@Sanju this sceneNani, Anjali and Manorma walk into the
kitchen where Payal is explaining to
Khushi that this is not their house and
she can't make jalebis to vent out her
frustration.
Anjali expresses happiness and
excitement at Khushi making jalebis.
Payal apologises on Khushi's behalf and
Mami insults them and says they'll have
to pay for using the ration of their
household. Nani shuts her up. Nani and
Anjali comfort Khushi and Payal and ask
them to forget what happened. Anjali
tastes and likes the sweets and asks
Khushi to serve it .
Khushi is serving the jalebis. She bumps
into Arnav. They share a small eyelock
and then she leaves and continues to
serve.

So we cn include everything! Right frm arnav khushi scene to the...
Payel khushi anjali scene

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

^^^ Can u tell me the date of telecasting so that I can check with the WU nd decide the edits?😛

I will make on that scene u can write on it😳will PM u by mrning tmrw!

@Shilpa: check this drabble series for SS/TS awards of the week

<table cellspacing="0"><tr><td></td><td>ArShi Drabble ~ Love Me Harder</td></tr></table>

sure dear.
But henceforth, please send me pm for any nominations instead of giving the link here in open.

@rishaal where is the voting thread? Even last time, I couldn't find the link. Please send me the link.

Okay on Rishaal's notice i checked the propose to ASR's rules and God i kinda didnt't rispecked them.
Yeah it's true that in my entry only i was talking so till then its fine but one dialogue only??
From where did it come? My mistake i didn't checked the rules. Sorry i read the first part and didnt even bothered to check the rest.

Well technically writing one dialogue is tough. Because they are more like monologues. Who will listen to all them without giving reactions. Not even the great Asr.

Except Entry number three which was short the rests all where too long and reading something like that in one go, makes you feel like you are reading a monologue and not a confession.

So i let on you girls. If entry number 4 is not okay it should be disqualified.

Next time I'll read rules better.

Sans you should have let me know that my entry was not fully respecting the rules. Even thought i dont think it is breaking them. Because as you girls said we had to confess our feelings and everyone has her own way to do it.

From now onwards when we will organize a contest directly go to the rules. We should not write long intros that people like me after reading them forgot to read the rules.

Make the instructions easy. No intro. Just explain what is the contest and the rules. Now i got why members were saying make rules more clear and short the intros

Originally posted by: Preet.Kc

Okay on Rishaal's notice i checked the propose to ASR's rules and God i kinda didnt't rispecked them.
Yeah it's true that in my entry only i was talking so till then its fine but one dialogue only??
From where did it come? My mistake i didn't checked the rules. Sorry i read the first part and didnt even bothered to check the rest.

Well technically writing one dialogue is tough. Because they are more like monologues. Who will listen to all them without giving reactions. Not even the great Asr.

Except Entry number three which was short the rests all where too long and reading something like that in one go, makes you feel like you are reading a monologue and not a confession.

So i let on you girls. If entry number 4 is not okay it should be disqualified.

Next time I'll read rules better.

Sans you should have let me know that my entry was not fully respecting the rules. Even thought i dont think it is breaking them. Because as you girls said we had to confess our feelings and everyone has her own way to do it.

Originally posted by: Preet.Kc

From now onwards when we will organize a contest directly go to the rules. We should not write long intros that people like me after reading them forgot to read the rules.

Make the instructions easy. No intro. Just explain what is the contest and the rules. Now i got why members were saying make rules more clear and short the intros

Oye!! 😆 😆 😆

Rishaal we have to act practically. For me winning or losing is not important. For me its more important that we follow the rules. Agair main NL team's member is not repecting and rule and is being admitted in te competition and then my entry come us Runner-up what will poeple think? Those who tried to respect the rules?

We need to find a solutio for this.



And rish i too was khilaf to the long intros, but since the girls come up with already everything written i cound't say much, it would have been like unki menat par pani pher dena

Originally posted by: Preet.Kc

Oye!! 😆 😆 😆

Rishaal we have to act practically. For me winning or losing is not important. For me its more important that we follow the rules. Agair main NL team's member is not repecting and rule and is being admitted in te competition and then my entry come us Runner-up what will poeple think? Those who tried to respect the rules?

We need to find a solutio for this.



And rish i too was khilaf to the long intros, but since the girls come up with already everything written i cound't say much, it would have been like unki menat par pani pher dena

Rishaal are you on a ordering mode today?? Sans yeh karo, sans she mat karo.

Yeah oye hoye forgot it 😆 😳

The solution seems fine. The we have to chose a runner up. Can we pick up one?