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"POV on PURPLE
Others on BLACK"

It was a very beautiful day. Sun was shining, bird was singing, leaves were playing. But it couldn't gain it's real beauty widout the sweetness n madness of some1. But who will break the wall of her beauty sleep? The sunrays were trying 2 disturb her sleep. It kept fi8ing wid her face,her eyes but all in vain. The chirping of the birds were unable 2 enter the path of her ears. The sound of the beautiful play of the leaves evn could not play through her soul. Bt she was smiling,the sweet smile was atleast presenting sweetness 2 the nature. She was dreaming. Dreaming of achieving the most desired thing she had evr prayed 4. But only this sweetness, this smile couldn't satisfy the nature. Coz they knew this mad creation needs something more.. Something more pure... Something more beautiful... Deeper thn her this dream... N suddenly nature smiled brightly feeling some1's presence. Nature now had 2 do nothing, the person would do everything, but this mad girl had 2 understand dat... Will she?

:Koyal,wake up. It's 9 am. How much will u sleep,huh? Wake up na... Need 2 go...

I m knocking the door since 15 mins bt she... Uff...

:Listen,if u don't wake up na...

Still no response?? I always heard n saw dat boys sleep lyk this bt this girl... Out of the world. No,u should not think lyk this. If she comes 2 knw she will b hurt. My anger.. Hah!! Why can't I control. Lemme try sweetly.

:Plz Yaar... See sunrays r waiting 4 u... Ur dreams r waiting 4 u.

Again no response. Bt... She is not lyk this. M getting tensed coz at least she says "2 mins", "5 mins" bt 2day she's saying nothing. I hav the key of this room, should I open? Bt if she misunderstands me? Such a dilemma! No.. Atleast she bilivs me dis much. Ok, Lemme take risk. Lemme open the door. "Jor lagake Haisha".. No... "Dilemma bhulake haisha" Here is the key.

Omg... The door is opening by itself!!! Noo wait,It's she. So, finally she woke up.

:So u r awake??? OMG!!!

:Uff.. Shut up na.. Listen... U knw wht happened!!!

She is smiling so brightly. I also also wanna join her in his laughter... No... Don't 4get dat u r angry wid her.

:Where r u lost yaar.. Listen na..Ok,at 1st congratulate me.

:Yeah,congratulate u... Ok.. Congrats.. Aftr all ur beauty sleep is broken. Incredible matter. Congo Shongo.

Now she is giving me angry look. Nothing 2 worry i am 2 angry wid her.

Wht??? Her anger is changing again into laughter?? She is really incredible.

: Chal,aaj tere saath khoon maaf. U knw, I dreamt dat the dream of my lyf has come true.. Really... Yippeee...

N she hugs me ti8. N I.. The stupid fellow... Can nvr b angry wid her. Actually who can b angry wid such a person who can b so happy only dreaming of her dream being true. Bt I knw it'll really b true one day coz fate luves her. N me... Me 2...Luv her 2 the core... I smile n embrace her back.

Aftr sometym she breaks the hug n sees me smiling.

:U r also vry happy na?

Suddenly I bcame serious since a tough question came in my mind.

:Will u 4get me aftr fulfilling ur dream?

I m feeling lyk she is shocked hearing this. Bt wht can I do.. I can't let her go out of my lyf. Bt here is she..again smiling. N here.. Starts her drama.

:Kyon janab, aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte hain? Crore balti pyaar ki kimaat aap kya jane Zalim baba?

N she laughs n me 2 laugh not only bcoz of her joke, bt also seeing her laughter...The laughter which can console my every pain.

:Wht happened? Aise kya dekh rahe ho? U wanna learn frm me how 2 crack jokes.. Arey, u should. U knw wht,widout fun life is lifeless. Arey, Bachpan mein main jab choti si thi na...

:Ok ok stop.. Kitna bakbak karti ho.

:Kya baba... U r such a lifeless person.

"Baba" her fav word n now my fav...

:May I ask u something?

She givs me an unbilivable look.

:U need my permission b4 asking?

I smile.

:U said,crore balti pyaar.. Bt pyaar.. Where did it came frm?? I should hav been dosti,ri8?

She is luking at me wid confusd yet peaceful eyes. Bt her lips has a small smile n her cheeks... Turning red. Hop she is nt feeling awkward.Lemme handle the situation.. Wait,I didnt evn realize.. We r again having eyelock. Hmm..

:Look kya de rahi hain? I knw dosti wala pyaar na? Get ready n let's go.. We r already vry late.

She looks down n jst says:Hmmm

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2day is the day... I'll tell her wht I feel.

Wow m feeling gentle wind breeze around me. Dat means she is around me. I can feel her. Bt where is she? Behind me?

Yeah, there she is coming wearing the li8 pink saree I had gifted her. A confued smile on her face, her hair dancing in the cold wind, the anchal of her saree joing her hairs, her earings n bangles playing music, her fingers intertwined with each other in confusion (lyk we r intertwined wid each other wid a confusing feeling) n her eyes in my eyes... Looking lyk an angle... No, much more dan dat.

N me 2 luking at her almost opening my mouth. Whenevr she is b4 me why can't I tell he r dat 3 magical words. I knw she want 2 hear this.. No i need 2 tell her 2ni8 at any cost.

OMG!!! She is now standing b4 me. N m speechless again.

She is saying something while blushing...

:U called ne here n now u r mum?

M getting more speechless now. I close my eyes n finally widout changing topic, widout uttering any thing else, widout wasting a single moment,widout thinking abt the battle of heart vs mind n widout keeping mum any more, finally I say...

:I luv u...

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Bt 2day is not the same. 2day wind is blowing bt blowing wid anger... Birds r angry n hav not come out of their house... Sun is upset n has hidden himself under the wrap of sky. Can sky tolerate so much?? So sky is crying.. Bitterly... N the raindrops falling over the stupid fellow standing over a bridge over a merciless giant river. Nature is trying 2 slap his mind bt he.. Who will stop him?

:I hop I could reain the moments wid u. Bt alas... So many things happend.. Lyk really... So many things.. U dont biliv me... N u r not wid me... Bt see m laughing.. Laghing at my fate ehich is nvr wid me bt it's at least wid u. U r happy.. Ur dreams has now bcom reality. So Nothing matters whether we r 2gether or not.. Thn nothing maters whether I m not not... No necessity of me in this earth... U won't come 2 me , so lemme go 2 death. Yeah, death... N yeah, her fav nature,plz tell her how much I luv her n may b we will meet again "Kisi Mod Par" ... (Screaming) I Luv U Nisha... I'll see ur smiles.. My most fav thing.. Frm wherevr I m...

N he jumps frm the bridge, hugs the river.. Or should b said, hugs the Death.. N the nature jst sees.. Curses it as it couldnt do anything 2 save the most pure thing.. The luv.. Of them...

Bt at the same tym a girl wake up frm her sleep may b seeing a ni8mare.

:Nooo...

Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 9 years ago

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Hlw every1 rockstar is back!!! Now dont say dat i dont update ABC n starting a nw FF. I'll update dat. Actually there is so less readers dat i dont feel lyk updating n giving u jhtakas(since aftr some chapters u will get vry much jhatkas there). Bt this story is lyk my dream. So not going 2 ask should i continue coz i knw the ans will b positive bt m asking will u read?? If u toh only thn i'll update.

M sry coz this prologue has bcome prologues ki amma. It's 2 big.

Dont get vry much kanphused.

Btw,this is the story jiska prologue maine pehle bhi likha tha bt there r several changes. So plz kindly again read this.Thnxx 2 all who read widout evn pms. N ritz u r ri8 Koyal luks bttr wid Raj bt RaYal ka chehra hi change hi gaya n yeh kaunsi koyal hain ye jald hi pata chal jayega. Roop n vaiahu u will surely get pms,dont worry. N lili u r ri8... Rain n confusuion is common in my prologues. N also colors n ovio NiBir.

N plz it's NiBiRaj toh equal importance 2 both Kabir n Viraj...

Hop u'll lyk it.

N as u knw m not gud in writing n expressing since m a bengali poem writer who writes wid bengali literature.

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IndEx:

Prologue:[URL=]Page 1[/URL]

A/N:
Hlw every1 rockstar is back!!! Now dont say dat i dont update ABC n starting a nw FF. I'll update dat. Actually there is so less readers dat i dont feel lyk updating n giving u jhtakas(since aftr some chapters u will get vry much jhatkas there😈). Bt this story is lyk my dream. So not going 2 ask should i continue coz i knw the ans will b positive bt m asking will u read?? If u toh only thn i'll update. 😉

M sry coz this prologue has bcome prologues ki amma. It's 2 big.🤣

Dont get vry much kanphused. 😛

Btw,this is the story jiska prologue maine pehle bhi likha tha bt there r several changes. So plz kindly again read this.Thnxx 2 all who read widout evn pms. N ritz u r ri8 Koyal luks bttr wid Raj bt RaYal ka chehra hi change hi gaya 🤣n yeh kaunsi koyal hain ye jald hi pata chal jayega. 😉Roop n vaiahu u will surely get pms,dont worry.😆 N lili u r ri8... Rain n confusuion is common in my prologues.🤣 N also colors n ovio NiBir 😛. Mansu this kind of banners r calld AVI. 😆

N plz it's NiBiRaj toh equal importance 2 both Kabir n Viraj...

Hop u'll lyk it.

N as u knw m not gud in writing n expressing since m a bengali poem writer who writes wid bengali literature.

Don't 4get 2 say how is the banner.. Pura din mehnat ka phal hain 😃 Jhuta tareef maat karna.. Sacchi bol dena ki kaisa laga both AVI n Prologue varna how'll I improve...

Sry 4 2 much bakbak.. Here s the Prologue...

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"POV on PURPLE
Others on BLACK"

It was a very beautiful day. Sun was shining, bird was singing, leaves were playing. But it couldn't gain it's real beauty widout the sweetness n madness of some1. But who will break the wall of her beauty sleep? The sunrays were trying 2 disturb her sleep. It kept fi8ing wid her face,her eyes but all in vain. The chirping of the birds were unable 2 enter the path of her ears. The sound of the beautiful play of the leaves evn could not play through her soul. Bt she was smiling,the sweet smile was atleast presenting sweetness 2 the nature. She was dreaming. Dreaming of achieving the most desired thing she had evr prayed 4. But only this sweetness, this smile couldn't satisfy the nature. Coz they knew this mad creation needs something more.. Something more pure... Something more beautiful... Deeper thn her this dream... N suddenly nature smiled brightly feeling some1's presence. Nature now had 2 do nothing, the person would do everything, but this mad girl had 2 understand dat... Will she?

:Koyal,wake up. It's 9 am. How much will u sleep,huh? Wake up na... Need 2 go...

I m knocking the door since 15 mins bt she... Uff...

:Listen,if u don't wake up na...

Still no response?? I always heard n saw dat boys sleep lyk this bt this girl... Out of the world. No,u should not think lyk this. If she comes 2 knw she will b hurt. My anger.. Hah!! Why can't I control. Lemme try sweetly.

:Plz Yaar... See sunrays r waiting 4 u... Ur dreams r waiting 4 u.

Again no response. Bt... She is not lyk this. M getting tensed coz at least she says "2 mins", "5 mins" bt 2day she's saying nothing. I hav the key of this room, should I open? Bt if she misunderstands me? Such a dilemma! No.. Atleast she bilivs me dis much. Ok, Lemme take risk. Lemme open the door. "Jor lagake Haisha".. No... "Dilemma bhulake haisha" Here is the key.

Omg... The door is opening by itself!!! Noo wait,It's she. So, finally she woke up.

:So u r awake??? OMG!!!

:Uff.. Shut up na.. Listen... U knw wht happened!!!

She is smiling so brightly. I also also wanna join her in his laughter... No... Don't 4get dat u r angry wid her.

:Where r u lost yaar.. Listen na..Ok,at 1st congratulate me.

:Yeah,congratulate u... Ok.. Congrats.. Aftr all ur beauty sleep is broken. Incredible matter. Congo Shongo.

Now she is giving me angry look. Nothing 2 worry i am 2 angry wid her.

Wht??? Her anger is changing again into laughter?? She is really incredible.

: Chal,aaj tere saath khoon maaf. U knw, I dreamt dat the dream of my lyf has come true.. Really... Yippeee...

N she hugs me ti8. N I.. The stupid fellow... Can nvr b angry wid her. Actually who can b angry wid such a person who can b so happy only dreaming of her dream being true. Bt I knw it'll really b true one day coz fate luves her. N me... Me 2...Luv her 2 the core... I smile n embrace her back.

Aftr sometym she breaks the hug n sees me smiling.

:U r also vry happy na?

Suddenly I bcame serious since a tough question came in my mind.

:Will u 4get me aftr fulfilling ur dream?

I m feeling lyk she is shocked hearing this. Bt wht can I do.. I can't let her go out of my lyf. Bt here is she..again smiling. N here.. Starts her drama.

:Kyon janab, aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte hain? Crore balti pyaar ki kimaat aap kya jane Zalim baba?

N she laughs n me 2 laugh not only bcoz of her joke, bt also seeing her laughter...The laughter which can console my every pain.

:Wht happened? Aise kya dekh rahe ho? U wanna learn frm me how 2 crack jokes.. Arey, u should. U knw wht,widout fun life is lifeless. Arey, Bachpan mein main jab choti si thi na...

:Ok ok stop.. Kitna bakbak karti ho.

:Kya baba... U r such a lifeless person.

"Baba" her fav word n now my fav...

:May I ask u something?

She givs me an unbilivable look.

:U need my permission b4 asking?

I smile.

:U said,crore balti pyaar.. Bt pyaar.. Where did it came frm?? I should hav been dosti,ri8?

She is luking at me wid confusd yet peaceful eyes. Bt her lips has a small smile n her cheeks... Turning red. Hop she is nt feeling awkward.Lemme handle the situation.. Wait,I didnt evn realize.. We r again having eyelock. Hmm..

:Look kya de rahi hain? I knw dosti wala pyaar na? Get ready n let's go.. We r already vry late.

She looks down n jst says:Hmmm

././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././

2day is the day... I'll tell her wht I feel.

Wow m feeling gentle wind breeze around me. Dat means she is around me. I can feel her. Bt where is she? Behind me?

Yeah, there she is coming wearing the li8 pink saree I had gifted her. A confued smile on her face, her hair dancing in the cold wind, the anchal of her saree joing her hairs, her earings n bangles playing music, her fingers intertwined with each other in confusion (lyk we r intertwined wid each other wid a confusing feeling) n her eyes in my eyes... Looking lyk an angle... No, much more dan dat.

N me 2 luking at her almost opening my mouth. Whenevr she is b4 me why can't I tell he r dat 3 magical words. I knw she want 2 hear this.. No i need 2 tell her 2ni8 at any cost.

OMG!!! She is now standing b4 me. N m speechless again.

She is saying something while blushing...

:U called ne here n now u r mum?

M getting more speechless now. I close my eyes n finally widout changing topic, widout uttering any thing else, widout wasting a single moment,widout thinking abt the battle of heart vs mind n widout keeping mum any more, finally I say...

:I luv u...

./././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././

Bt 2day is not the same. 2day wind is blowing bt blowing wid anger... Birds r angry n hav not come out of their house... Sun is upset n has hidden himself under the wrap of sky. Can sky tolerate so much?? So sky is crying.. Bitterly... N the raindrops falling over the stupid fellow standing over a bridge over a merciless giant river. Nature is trying 2 slap his mind bt he.. Who will stop him?

:I hop I could reain the moments wid u. Bt alas... So many things happend.. Lyk really... So many things.. U dont biliv me... N u r not wid me... Bt see m laughing.. Laghing at my fate ehich is nvr wid me bt it's at least wid u. U r happy.. Ur dreams has now bcom reality. So Nothing matters whether we r 2gether or not.. Thn nothing maters whether I m not not... No necessity of me in this earth... U won't come 2 me , so lemme go 2 death. Yeah, death... N yeah, her fav nature,plz tell her how much I luv her n may b we will meet again "Kisi Mod Par" ... (Screaming) I Luv U Nisha... I'll see ur smiles.. My most fav thing.. Frm wherevr I m...

N he jumps frm the bridge, hugs the river.. Or should b said, hugs the Death.. N the nature jst sees.. Curses it as it couldnt do anything 2 save the most pure thing.. The luv.. Of them...

Bt at the same tym a girl wake up frm her sleep may b seeing a ni8mare.

:Nooo...

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Scene 1:

The Nxt Day

Gangwal Jwellers

Kabir was again making haste in his job. Though dadaji was not there 4 eyes were watching him with laughter clearly viewable. N these eyes belonged 2 none othr than viren n mohan, kabir's "pyaare chacha sasurs".

Viren:Mohan, lagta hain kal kaam mein kuch kaami reh gayi thi. Iss liye Nishu se mar pari.

Mohan:Shayad. Tabhi toh iski engine ki seeti khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha.

Viren:Haan bhai. Kehne ko toh Nishu isski ghar ki bahu hain par yeh toh aapni hi ghar ka gharjamai baan ke baitha hain.

They giggled bt in such a manner which can b unnoticd by Kabir.

Mohan:Haan bhai. Aur aaj toh bauji bhi nahi aane wale toh issey jane mein pareshani bhi nahi hogi. Yeh dekho, aapni gharjamai ka latest routine ki anusar unka jaane ka tym bhi ho gaya hain.

At the same tym Kabir came 2 thm while the bros controld thmselves frm laughing.

Kabir:Tau ji. Main chalta hoon. Main e sare kaam khatm kar liya hain.

Suddenly they heard a voice.

Voice:Kyon bhai. Itni bhi kya jaldi hain?

N it was if Ramesh. All turned towards him.

Kabir:Arey papa. Kuch zaroori kaam hain. Chalta hoon.

Mohan:Haan Ramesh. Issey aapni biwi ki sewa jo karni hain.

Viren:Haan,bilkul aapni chacha sasur Mohan "kaka" pe gaya hain.

All laughd evn kabir couldnt stop laughing while Mohan gav an ashamd look.

Kabir:Papa,plz main chalta hoon.

Viren:Ek baat batao kabir. Tum peechle kuch dino se aise hi pehle chale jaye ho. Baat sirf ghar ke kaam ki nahi ho sakti. Koyi pati aapni biwi ka itna sewa karta thodi hi na hain.

Though Viren joked bt Ramesh's mind had started arising different questions. Bt Kabir took leave.

While going Ramesh calld him frm behind,outside the shop. He wanted 2 talk 2 kabir n he agreed.

Ramesh:Tum kuch dino se hi aisa kar rahe ho? Koyi baat hain kya beta? Tumhe pata hain na ki tum mujhe bata sakte ho.

Kabir:Papa. Aap tension maat lijiye. Sahi waqt aane par pata chal jayega. Abhi mujhe bohut late ho raha hain. Main nikalta hoon.

Ramesh(monlogue):Aisi kya baat ho sakti hain? Baas dua karta hoon ki sab thik ho.

Scene 2:

In the road 2 KNH

Saurav:Par Sukku aise Nishu ki ghar jaake surprise dena thik rahega? Matlab pata nahi vo laute bhi honge ki nahi.

Sukku:Abey chup kar. Tujhe pata hain na ki yeh ice-cream Nishu ko kitna pasand hain. Dekhna ussey bohut achcha lagega. Aur ek bata kahin tujhe aisa toh nahi lagta ki "Surprise" word sirf teri "vo" matlab meri dolly di ki liye bani hain.

Saurav blushd bt thn managed 2 say:

Saurav:Nahi nahi sale sahab. Hume aisa katey bhi nahi mehsoos hota. Balki hume toh mehsoos kuch aur hi hota hain. Matlab aap ki chal aaj kal thoda badla badla laag raha hain. Aapko dekh kar kuch "A" "A" mehsoos hota hain.

Sukku blushd hard bt had a fear 2 b caught. Bt thn he thought 4 which reason he will b caught whn they r "only frnds".

Saurav:Aley baba.. Suketu Gangwal is blushing.. Vashing.. N all haan.. Aapni charo taraf "Alisha"... Matlab "Alishaan" nazar aa raha hain.

Sukku(blushing more):Kahan nlush kar raha hoon main? (Now his expression changed) Par mujhe na Dolly di ki liye bohut tension ho raha hain.

Saurav(tensed):Kyon kya hua ussey? Bol na..Achcha,main abhi call karta hoon ussey.

Sukku:Arey ruk. Main toh majak kar raha tha.

Saurav(angry):Dekh aisi baat bilkul maat karna phirse.

Sukku:Sry yaar.. Maine baas socha tha ki tujhe kuch kehke blush karaunga. Pata nahi yeh baat kaise aa gayi. Par tu toh bohut serious ho gaya.

Saurav:Kyon ki beta. Issey kehte hain pyaar.

Sukku(smiling foolishly):Accha? (Monologue)Main bhi toh cencerned hoon na.. Uff.. Sukku.. Itna jaida nahi sochte.

Scene 3:

KNH

Kabir was teaching his students. He gav thm some steps 2 practice n himself took a break. He went 2 the hall.

Kabir:Pata nahi yeh nisha abhi tak kyon nahi aayi. Shayad busy hogi par phir bhi ek toh call karna chahiye na. Chalo main hi call kar leta hoon.

N he calld Nisha n she picks up.

Nisha:Haan, Kabir.. Baas aa hi rahi hoon. Viraj sir mujhe drop kar rahe hain. Main ghadi mein hoon.

Kabir:Kya Jaan.. Ek fn bhi nahi kiya aur ab eksaath bakbakbak kare jaa rahi hain. Tujhe pata hain na ki tujhe miss kar raha hoon. Meri sweety wifey.

Nisha:(blushing) Kya tu bhi. Teri tabliyaat thik hain na? Aaj itna pyaar aa raha hain(she said lowering her voice since viraj was beside him driving the car bt he heard n smild)

Kabir:Tujhe pyaar na karoon toh kissey karoon? I luv u na.. Jaan.. Mmmuaaahhh..

Nisha:K khainka. Ghar pe students hain. Besharam.. Vo sun lenge toh?

Kabir:Main besharam hoon toh tu kaunsi "Shatmila Thakur" hain?

Viraj took the fn frm Nisha as stoopd driving while Kabir continued 2 speak thinking it's still Nisha ovr the fn.

Kabir:Kya Jaan..kaise samjhayoon ki kitna miss kar raha hoon tujhe. Aaj toh tere liye special maggi banayunga. Aur phir raat ko.. Chal mujh jaise besharam ko bhi sgaram aa gayi.

He was teasing Nisha bt didnt knw dat he is going 2 b teasd.

Viraj:(laughing n teasing)Baas chote. Aapni personal baate maat kijiye hamari samne.

Kabir:Nisha teri awaaz bade bhaiya jaisi kyon lag rahi hain.

Viraj:Kyon ki hum bade bhaiya hi hain. Vo actually, hum bhi aapki ghar aa rahe the aapko thik se congratulate karne. Toh hamari liye bhi special maggi banake rakhiyega. Ab lijiye baat kijiye aapni "Jaan" se.

Till now Viraj jst said n Kabir heard since he couldnt utter a word due 2 shame.

Thn Nisha blushd hard n took the fn.

Nisha:Kabir.. Bye. Baas pauchne hi wale hain hum.

N she cuts the call.

Kabir(monologue):Bade bhaiya pe bhi mera asaar ho raha hain. Bina puche hi fn le liya.

He smiled. Thn he started going 2 check his students. Bt at tge same tym the door bell rang. He tought it 2 b Nisha n Viraj. So he ran towards tge door n opened it widout considering who it was actually.

Kabir(opening the door):Itna late kyon aati hain tu haan? (Thn he realized dat it was actually suketu n saurav) Arey tum dono aise achanak. Aayo na.

He smiled bt had a fear in his mind as his students were still there.

Saurav:(while entering)Kyon hum nahi aa sakte. Sirf teri J hi aa sakti hain.

Suketu heard some sound fem Viraj's room.

Sukku:Arey yeh room toh lock tha na? Yeh awwaze kaisi hain?

Sukku starts going 2 the room bt kabir somehow stops him.

Kabir:Arey Suketu beta rukh jaa na. Dwlh tu kitna achcha bachcha hain. Meri baat maan jaa.

Sukku:Main koyi bachcha vachcha nahi hoon.

Saurav:Kyon aisa kyan hain uhan?

Kabir:(confused)Aisa kya hain..kya hain..(suddenly hita an idea) haan, cickroach hain. Main dance kar raha tha na.. Phir maine cockroach dekha. Aur aur..

Saurav:Kya bakwaas kar raha hain. Main dekhta hoon.

Kabir was abt 2 stop him while a girl among his students came there.

Student:Vo kaam ho gaya.

Actually she meant dat the steps r done bt it was enough 4 sukku n saurav 2 suspect.

Sukku:Yeh ladki kaun hain?

Saurav:Aur kaunsa kaam?

Kabir jst smiled cheekily n didnt knw wht 2 say.

Kabir:(monologue)Maar gaya Kabire aab toh...

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Bt his savior came. They heard a voice frm behind.

Voice:Arey Sukku-Saurav.

They lookd back n it was Nisha alng wid Viraj.
Nisha looked at the student n said 2 her.

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Episode:433
By:Maggy Returnes

Scene 1:

The Nxt Day

Gangwal Jwellers

Kabir was again making haste in his job. Though dadaji was not there 4 eyes were watching him with laughter clearly viewable. N these eyes belonged 2 none othr than viren n mohan, kabir's "pyaare chacha sasurs".

Viren:Mohan, lagta hain kal ghar ki kaam mein kuch kaami reh gayi thi. Iss liye Nishu se mar pari.

Mohan:Shayad. Tabhi toh iski engine ki seeti khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha.

Viren:Haan bhai. Kehne ko toh Nishu isski ghar ki bahu hain par yeh toh aapni hi ghar ka gharjamai baan ke baitha hain.

They giggled bt in such a manner which could b unnoticd by Kabir.

Mohan:Haan bhai. Aur aaj toh bauji bhi nahi aane wale toh issey jane mein pareshani bhi nahi hogi. Aur dekho, aapni gharjamai ka latest routine ki anusar unka jaane ka tym bhi ho gaya hain.

At the same tym Kabir came 2 thm while the bros controld thmselves frm laughing.

Kabir:Tau ji. Main chalta hoon. Maine sare kaam khatm kar liya hain.

Suddenly they heard a voice.

Voice:Kyon bhai. Itni bhi kya jaldi hain?

N it was if Ramesh. All turned towards him.

Kabir:Arey papa. Kuch zaroori kaam hain. Chalta hoon.

Mohan:Haan Ramesh. Issey aapni biwi ki sewa jo karni hain.

Viren:Haan,bilkul aapni chacha sasur Mohan "kaka" pe gaya hain.

All laughd evn kabir couldnt stop laughing while Mohan gav an ashamd look.

Kabir:Papa,plz main chalta hoon.

Viren:Ek baat batao kabir. Tum peechle kuch dino se aise hi pehle chale jaye ho. Baat sirf ghar ke kaam ki toh nahi ho sakti. Koyi pati aapni biwi ka itna sewa karta thodi hi na hain.

Though Viren joked, Ramesh's mind had started arising different questions. Bt Kabir took leave.

While going Ramesh calld him frm behind,outside the shop. He wanted 2 talk 2 kabir n he agreed.

Ramesh:Tum kuch dino se hi aisa kar rahe ho? Koyi baat hain kya beta? Tumhe pata hain na ki tum mujhe bata sakte ho.

Kabir:Papa. Aap tension maat lijiye. Sahi waqt aane par pata chal jayega. Abhi mujhe bohut late ho raha hain. Main nikalta hoon.

Ramesh(monlogue):Aisi kya baat ho sakti hain? Baas dua karta hoon ki sab thik ho.

Scene 2:

In the road 2 KNH

Saurav:Par Sukku aise Nishu ki ghar jaake surprise dena thik rahega? Matlab pata nahi vo dono laute bhi honge ki nahi.

Sukku:Abey chup kar. Tujhe pata hain na ki yeh ice-cream Nishu ko kitna pasand hain. Dekhna ussey bohut achcha lagega. Aur ek baat bata kahin tujhe aisa toh nahi lagta ki "Surprise" word sirf teri "vo" matlab meri dolly di ki liye bani hain.

Saurav blushd bt thn managed 2 say:

Saurav:Nahi nahi sale sahab. Hume aisa katey bhi nahi mehsoos hota. Balki hume toh mehsoos kuch aur hi hota hain. Matlab aap ki chal aaj kal thoda badla badla laag raha hain. Aapko dekh kar kuch "A" "A" mehsoos hota hain.

Sukku blushd hard bt had a fear 2 b caught. Bt thn he thought 4 which reason he will b caught whn they r "only frnds".

Saurav:Aley baba.. Suketu Gangwal is blushing.. Vashing.. N all haan.. Aapni charo taraf "Alisha"... Matlab "Alishaan" nazar aa raha hain.

Sukku(blushing more):Kahan blush kar raha hoon main? (Now his expression changed) Par mujhe na Dolly di ki liye bohut tension ho raha hain.

Saurav(tensed):Kyon kya hua ussey? Bol na..Achcha,main abhi call karta hoon ussey.

Sukku:Arey ruk. Main toh majak kar raha tha.

Saurav:Kya?

Sukku:Haan,yaar...

Saurav(angry):Dekh aisi baat bilkul maat karna phirse.

Sukku:Sry yaar.. Maine baas socha tha ki tujhe kuch kehke blush karaunga. Pata nahi yeh baat kaise aa gayi. Par tu toh itni si bat pe bohut serious ho gaya.

Saurav:Kyon ki beta. Issey kehte hain pyaar.

Sukku(smiling foolishly):Accha? (Monologue)Main bhi toh cencerned hoon na.. Uff.. Sukku.. Itna jaida nahi sochte.

Scene 3:

KNH

Kabir was teaching his students. He gav thm some steps 2 practice n himself took a break. He went 2 the hall.

Kabir:Pata nahi yeh nisha abhi tak kyon nahi aayi. Shayad busy hogi par phir bhi ek toh call karna chahiye na. Chalo main hi call kar leta hoon.

He calld Nisha n she pickd up.

Nisha:Haan, Kabir.. Baas aa hi rahi hoon. Vo Viraj sir mujhe drop kar rahe hain. Main ghadi mein hoon.

Kabir:Kya Jaan.. Ek fn bhi nahi kiya aur ab eksaath bakbak bakbak kare jaa rahi hain. Tujhe pata hain na ki tujhe kitna miss kar raha hoon. Meri sweety wifey.

Nisha:(blushing) Kya tu bhi. Teri tabliyaat thik hain na? Aaj itna pyaar aa raha hain(she said lowering her voice since viraj was beside him driving the car bt he heard n smild)

Kabir:Tujhe pyaar na karoon toh kissey karoon? I luv u na.. Jaan.. Mmmuaaahhh..

Nisha:K khainka. Ghar pe students hain. Besharam.. Vo sun lenge toh?

Kabir:Main besharam hoon toh tu kaunsi "Sharmila Tagore" hain?

Viraj took the fn frm Nisha as stopd driving while Kabir continued 2 speak thinking it's still Nisha ovr the fn.

Kabir:Kya Jaan..kaise samjhayoon ki kitna miss kar raha hoon tujhe. Aaj toh tere liye special maggi banayunga. Aur phir raat ko.. Chal mujh jaise besharam ko bhi sharam aa gayi.

He was teasing Nisha bt didnt knw dat he is going 2 b teasd as well by his bro.

Viraj:(laughing n teasing)Baas chote. Aapni personal baate maat kijiye hamari samne.

Kabir:(beong shockd)Nisha teri awaaz bade bhaiya jaisi kyon lag rahi hain.

Viraj:Kyon ki hum bade bhaiya hi hain. Vo actually, hum bhi aapki ghar aa rahe the aapko thik se congratulate karne. Toh hamari liye bhi special maggi banake rakhiyega. Ab lijiye baat kijiye aapni "Jaan" se.

Till now Viraj said n Kabir jst heard since he couldnt utter a single word due 2 shame.

Thn Nisha blushd hard n took the fn.

Nisha:Kabir.. Bye. Baas pauchne hi wale hain hum.

N she cuts the call.

Kabir(monologue):Bade bhaiya pe bhi mera asaar ho raha hain. Bina puche hi fn le liya. Chalo achchi baat hain, aab sablog kehne pe majboor ho jayenge ki mr.kabir singh ratode, aapki bade bhaiyaa aap pe hi gaye hain.

He laughd at his own thoughts. Thn he started going 2 check his students. Bt at the same tym the door bell rang. He tought it 2 b Nisha n Viraj. So he ran towards the door n opened it widout considering who it was actually.

Kabir(opening the door):Itna late kyon aati hain tu jaan? (Thn he realized dat it was actually suketu n saurav.. He was shockd n tensed since his students were in the house) Arey tum dono aise achanak. Aayo na.

He smiled bt had a fear.

Saurav:(while entering)Kyon hum nahi aa sakte. Sirf teri J hi aa sakti hain. Vaise J 4 jealous ki saath saath jaan bhi hota hain. Abhi jaan hi keh raha tha na ussey.

Bt his blushes went on a vacatoin due 2 fear. He jst smiled.

Sukku:Vaise Nihu abhi tak nahi aayi?

Kabir:Nahi.. Nisha aur bade bhaiyaa pauchte hi honge.

Suketu heard some sound frm Viraj's room.

Sukku:Arey yeh room toh lock tha na? Yeh awwaze kaisi hain?

Sukku starts going 2 the room bt kabir somehow stops him.

Kabir:Arey Suketu beta rukh jaa na. Dekh tu kitna achcha bachcha hain. Meri baat maan jaa. Vo bhaiyaa aa rahe na baas issiliye vo room khula hain.

Sukku:Main koyi bachcha vachcha nahi hoon.

Saurav:Par Kabir, yeh music ki awaaz. Aisa kyan hain uhan?

Kabir:(confused)Aisa kya hain..kya hain..(suddenly hit an idea) haan, cockroach hain. Main dance kar raha tha na.. Phir maine cockroach dekha. Aur aur..

Saurav:Kya bakwaas kar raha hain. Main dekhta hoon.

Kabir was abt 2 stop him while a girl among his students came there.

Student:Vo kaam ho gaya.

Actually she meant dat the steps r done bt it was enough 4 sukku n saurav 2 suspect.

Sukku:Yeh ladki kaun hain?

Saurav:Aur kaunsa kaam?

Kabir jst smiled cheekily bt didnt knw wht 2 say.

Kabir:(monologue)Maar gaya Kabire aab toh...

A/N:M Finally Back 😛
N I knw epi has bcome chota n Ihad another scene 2 write. Bt I would hav written dat na.. It would turn 2 a 45 mins epi n there would b no suspense left.
So I won't say sry bt u dont also hav 2 thank me coz "Dosti Mein No Sry No Thank u"🤣

How's the new Banner? (Actually u knw na m more on photoshop than writing 😆) I knw it's not dat gud. Actually,we should not do anything wid 2 much care, the result nvr comes gud.😆

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It is a cloudy day in Manali. 2 much cold there. Snowfall can ocuur anytym... A girl of 18 is sitting b4 a teastall. After drinking a cup tea she takes her bag n leaves frm there. Bt the owner of the stall sees dat she has left the diary of her. He searches 4 her n finds dat she has not gone far yet, so he calls her.

Owner:Beta ji suniye. Yeh dekhiye aapne kya kiya.

She looks back at him. She thinks whethr she has 4got 2 pay money or wht n so again goes there.

Owner:Yeh aapki diary hain na. Abhi toh kitne jazbaat se dekh rahi thi issey. Aur aab chod ke chali gayi.

Girl:Rehne dijiye kaka. Iss diary ki ab koyi value hi nahi hain. Issey kaahin faik dijiye. Iss diary ki kahani se bohut aage meri manzil meri intezaar kar rahi hain.

She again takes leave n the owner seems confused.

Owner:Pata nahi kya baat hain. Par yeh bohut udaas lag rahi thi. Arey,Iss diary par toh naam bhi likha hain. Kya hain.. "Nisha Sharma"

The girl thinks something while walking through the road.. Unknown roads.. Bt vry own n vry known destination... The destination.. Her dream.. Which has now bcom stronger bcoz of the game of the fate. Fate was always wid her.. She knew.. It may leave her 4 sometym n destroy her lyf bt she knew she force it 2 come back... Her fate will hav 2 come back 2 her.

Yeah,m Nisha Sharma. A simple yet crazy girl of Delhi. N my dat diary... The diary where I hav writtn tye moments wht my fate, my fortune had left me... Bt I knw everything happens 4 gud. N in my dis journey I'll regain my fate n achieve my dream.

Bt I can't 4get the betrayal of my fate anyhow. I remember the day whn my lyf changed totally.

Dat day... As usual I wasn't waking up bt smiling in dreams while my maa was trying hard 2 wake me up. Everyday the same incident happend. Jst the difference was dat someday I would smile less n someday bright... Though now I can jst cry in my sleep... Howevr, dat day I was smiling most brightly. Actually the dream was 2 much sweet... I still laugh remembering my dream...

In my dream, there I was standing in a flower garden wearing a pink saree. Suddenly the wind stands blowing more n flowers starts dancing. Music starts.. "Tujhe Dekha Toh Yeh Jana Sanam" n HE slowly turns n looks at me. I run 2wards him n HE runs towards me. Thn we hug each other.. Ti8ly.. Giving a promise of nvr leaving each other. N finally HE says at the top his voice"I LUV U KOYAL".

Bt suddenly I heard papa's voice coming:"Nishu see wht happened? HE is marrying the supermodel Kirti Chauhan." N hearing dat I got 1000 volt ka jhatka n woke up screaming:"Wht... This can't happen. HE was jst saying dat he luvs me" N i saw my papa n ma laughing. I understood dat I was dreaming n Papa said this 2 wake me up since it was bcoming impossible 4 maa 3 wake me up dat day.

Bt father's statement made me angry. I said:"Papa, u always do it 2 me." Papa:"My princess... Wht 2 do? it's impossible 2 wake u up. I dont knw whether I hav 2 kill Viraj. HE has made my daughter an insane."

Yeah,Viraj Shehgil. My dream, my "HE",my hero, my Viru n the gr8test superstar of bollywood. I was mad 4 him. I had always tried 2 impress him through social media. N whenver I got response frm him I used 2 go totally insane...Whether it's home, college or evn roads. My craze.. My luv... My Viraj.. He was!

My family knew abt all my craziness. Bt nvr gets seriously angry at me. Coz they bilivd dat 1day i'll get my real harsafar n all .. he'll be my Viru.. "Whtever"-usd 2 b the reply frm me.

Uff.. My family... My small family.. My father Mr.Ramesh Sharma-The panjabi Munda, my mother Mrs.Lokkhi(Laxmi) Ghosh Sharma-The Bengali "Konna"(girl) n my chotu sa golumolu brother Bunty Sharma.

Again returning 2 dat day. Whn papa said dat he wantd 2 kill viru I bcame hell angry n watch my craziness.. I almost started crying. N papa-maa consoled me. Maa said: "Wht r u saying Ramesh. He is my future son-in-law". I understood dat she was also teasing me n finally started crying n said:I was so happy. Viru tuk my name in the list of his fav fans in the latest interview. I watchd it last ni8 aftr u all had slept. I was so so so happy. Evn m starting my music class 2day finally aftr convincing u for 4 months. It was such a lucky day. N u guys.. Made my whole day.. Bitter"

My maa n papa:"Arey arey sry beta. Plz don't cry. We'll celebrate 2day. N we r going 2 picnic 2day also na. Will u b angry wid ur parents?" I finally stoppd n happily hugged my dear parents. I was jst lyk this.. I'll b laugh jst in the 2nd min aftr anger.

Bt here Bunty came. I dont knw whether he is my bro or enemy. He said:Mom, Nishu di watchd the interview aftr we had slept. Dat means she had turn on wi-fi widout ur permission at ni8" See.. He is such a...Actually he usd 2 b jealous wid me. I was nvr let 2 use internet in ni8. So ma will b hell angry.

I somehow managd the situation saying:"Leave it na. Wait, watch the interview". I opened the video which i had downloaded last ni8. There Viraj said at 2:14 dat "N my crazy fan Koyal Sharma". I screamd:"See.." Bt bunty said:"He said Koyal Sharma. N u r Nisha Sharma. Sharma is the surname of so many ppl. So did he said abt all of thm?" He laughd bt I gav him a n angry smile n said"Oo.. Maharaj! M knwn as Koyal in social media. He also knows me as Koyal. N u knw wht, Nani usd 2 call me dat,u were not evn born thn". N thn our usual nok-jhok, ma's daant, dad's pyaar continued n I finally came down getting ready 4 my college.

College bus used 2 reach at 8:30 am. While waiting downstairs, i always usd 2 watch ppl of our society... Everyday..The cute girls playing, a man reading newpaper sitting on the bench, schul boys-girls going, sometyms doing fun wid kids etc etc etc n the cute boy who usd 2 liv in the building in frnt of ours. He seemd calm n at the same tym his hazel brown eyes seemd naughty. He jst usd 2 come downstairs n leave b4 my eyes... may b 4 his college,versity or office.. I dont knw though he seemd 2 b of my age. Bt I nvr dared 2 talk 2 him. I didn't evn knw his name. He was unknown bt so known 2 me.

Bt dat day he was not there. Don't knw why. I was thinking wht could happn n getting tensed (don't knw why) while my college bus reached...

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