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U can close ur eyes 2 the things u don't wanna see..
Bt can't close ur eyes 2 the things u don't wanna feel...
Yes,dat's the thing which is not of comfort n chill
Why can't I close the door of my heart
Even whn I don't wanna feel...

Uff..This feelings...
Raising everyday wid nw willings...
My eyes wanna see u in every possible moments
N dat gives me shivers n thrillings..

Uff...This thoughts
Runs through my veins
Reaches 2 the heart chains
The chains dat fixes ur heart wid mine...


I write the poem of luv
N think u in the each words...
I wanna go 2 the place
Where is the mixture of 7 colors...
I wanna bring the gift of rainbow 2 u
So dat it can bring,in ur lyf,the smile of millions...

My heart can't live widout seeing ur happiness...
My heart can't resist ur sorrows...
My hopes always prays 2 see u in the core of togetherness...
My hopes always inspires me 2 meet u the nxt tomorrow...!!!


Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 10 years ago
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Scene 1:(KNH-Drawing room)

Kabir:Nisha... Bohut hogaya yeh emotional attayachhar...

Nisha:(Surprised)Emotional attayachar...Lyk really???(angrily)Oye Kabire abhi toh mithaas ki dukaan bana baitha tha ab achanak kya hua tujhe? Haato mein haat dale niche le aaya aur niche aate hi mood change?

Kabir:(angrily)Haan mood change ho gaya...N 4 ur kind information maine koyi khana wana nahi banaya... Nahi mera khaneka mood hain. Bedroom mein ja aur so ja... Aur gar itni hi bhook lagi hain toh khud ki liye kuch banale...

Nisha(In concern):Sab thik hain na,Kabir?Achanak kya hua?

Kabir(again angily):Kuch nahi..Tujhe kya laga ki sirf tujhe gussa aa sakta hain? Mujhe tujhse koyi baat nahi karni...

Nisha:Par hua kya hain?

Kabir(screaming):Bola na kuch nahi...

Nisha:(nw angirily)Ok,thik hain... Tujhe jo karna hain kar... Gud ni8.. No actually bad ni8.. Hav horrible ni8mares...

Nisha enters the bedroom n Kabir 2.Bt he jst goes,takes the pillow n returns back 2 the drawing room.

Nisha 2 herself:Kya hua isse?Whatever... U don't need 2 care..Kuch der mein yeh khud aake baat karega...

N she went 2 sleep..

Scene 2:(GH in Dolly's room)

Dolly busy in her office works.

Kirti(Satanding at the door):Dolly di !! May I come in?

Dolly:Arey,Kirti.. Aa jana. Tujhe mujhse permission ki zarrorat hain?

Kirti(Entering n sitting beside her):Mujhe toh laga ki Miss Hardworker bohut busy hain... aapni new job mein doobi hain..

Dolly:Achcha toh Miss Blah hume Miss Hardworker bula rahi hain?

Kirti:Kya Dolly di..Aap bhi ... Chalo chhoro, kyasa chal raha hain aapka nw job?

Dolly:Nayi Job?Arey Kirti tu biliv nahi karegi woh meri boss hain na,woh AR...

She tells her abt all that happend in the ofice n the clashes wid AR. Kirti is laughing hearing them

Dolly:Dekh tu haas maat... Par kyan karoon mujhe bhi hasee aa rahi hain...

Both were laughing... Then...

Kirti(being serious):Achcha Dolly di aapne Kal Saurav phone kyon nahi uthaya.Actually,woh mujhe bata raha tha ki...

Dolly:Woh Sarav... (Her phone rang) Aa... Kirti main baad mein baat karti hoon. Office ka call aa rha hain.

Kirti smiles awkwardly n Dolly goes frm there.

Scene 3:(GH in Umesh's room)

Umesh:Aman,woh maine kuch hisaab lagaya hain hamari resturent ki liye. Yeh dekh lo.

Aman:Laddoo,Mujhe tuj par pura bharosa hain ki tune sahi hisaab lagaya hoga. Mujhe dekh ni ki koyi zarrorat nahi.

Umesh:Phir bhi,Aman...

Aman:Achcha,ek kaam kar tu aapni cousins se baat kar iss bare mein..

Umesh:Par unhe abhi batana sahi hoga.

Aman:Laddoo,tu yeh bol raha hain? Arey, tu unhe nahi batayega toh kise batayega? Arey,woh log toh teri...

Suddenly,they hear Laxmi's scream coming frm Bunty'r room n both goes there.They see there Laxmi scolding Bunty n Jawala standing there.

Aman:Arey,Laxmi chachi kyan hua.Ap daant kyon rahi hain isse?

Laxmi:
Arey,dekho na kal maine isse kaha tha ki yeh Jwlau ki saath padhayi kare.Par aaj Jwalu ne hi mujhe bataya ki isne kuch bhi thik se nahi padha. Main kyan karron iski saath?

Bunty:
Maine bola na main Babli se milne gaya tha.

Umesh:
Yeh Babli kaun hain?

Bunty:
Mera best frnd...

Laxmi:
Kaisi best friend hain?Ajkal hamesha iski bare mein baat karta rehta hain. Yeh sab dosti se kuch kaam nahi chalne wala. Agar tune thik se padhayi nahi ki na. Kal se roz 3 ghante Jwalu ki paas padhegi.Yeh tera aakhri mauka hain. Warna mujhe bhi nai pata main kya karungi.

She goes frm there angrily.Umesh n Aman also goes after her 2 console.Only Jwala n Bunty left in the room.

Bunty:Jawalu di aapne ma ko kyon bataya?

Jwala:Arey tu thik se padhayi nahi karega toh bataungi na.

Bunty:(angrily)Jwala di,aapko pata hain,aap kitni bari nerd ho? Padhayi ki saath saath kuch mauj masti kiya karo. Aap Babli ko hi dekho. Woh padhayi bhi karti hain aur masti bhi. Make-up bhi karti hain.. Par aap... Agar sab aapke tarah ho jaye na toh sabko itne bare chasme pahenke ghumne parenge. Toh aap na mujhse pehle aapni aap par dhyaan dijiye.

Bunty goes frm there.

Jwala(screaming):Bunty,tu kitna badtameez hain. (2 herself) Yeh kya bol raha tha.Yeh make-up hi sab hota hain kya? Padhayi bhi toh zaroori hain. Par yeh chashme...

She bcomes vry sad.

Scene 4:(KNH in bedroom)

Nisha lying on her bed.The door of the room closed.

Nisha:Pata nahi iss Kabire ko achanak kyan ho gaya. Abhi toh thik tha.. Woh aisa toh nahi hain. Pata nahi hall mein kaise so raha hoga. Kahin uss din ki liye toh naraj nahi ho gaya jis din maine isse bahar nikala tha..Par woh toh...

Suddenly,the light of her room,actually the whole house is switched off. She become safraid.Opens the door of the room.

Nisha(screaming):Kabir,kaha hain tu?Mujhe daar laag rahi hain.

Then a limelight falls on a person wrapped in a Saree.

Nisha(being more afraid):Kau..Kau..Kaun hain aap?

Thn a music plays...

Ahhaa...

Oho o...
Oho o...

<The person starts dancing kamad hilake>

Sss...

Chutki joh
Tune kati hai
Jori se kati hai
Yahan wahan..

<The person turnes n Nisha is shocked 2 see the face.It is none other than her Kabira wrapped in the saree over his shirt.Dancing lyk women.She can't stop laughing>

Ruthi hoon
Main tujhse ruthi hoon
Mujhe mana le na
O jane jaan

<Kabira comes 2 her ,holds her hands n starts dancing wid her,obviously lyk a woman>

Chedenge..
Hum tujhko
Ladki tu hai
Badi bombaard
Aha aha aha aha

<Kabira unwrappes his saree n wrappes it around Nisha's waist>

Ooh la la...
Ooh la la...
Ooh la la...
Ooh la la...
Tu hai meri fantasy..

<Both startes dancing... she is dancing lyk woman n Kabir lyk man>

Choo na na
Choo na na
Choo na na
Choo na na
Ab main jawan ho gayi..

<Nw Kabira again starts dancing lyk woman n NIsha lyk man>

NiBir was laughing lyk anything. Kabir goes,switches off the music n switches on the lights.

Kabir:Toh kaisa laga mera surprise?

Nisha(laughing lyk a mad):Really Kabir? Kaisa laga.. Abb mujhe samajh mein aaya ki tune aisa rude behave kyon kiya tha. Mujhe aise hasane ki liye...

Kabir:Haan nahi toh..Kuch achcha hone ki liye kuch bura hona zarrori hain...

Nisha:Achcha? (Being seious)Tune yeh sab mujhe stress se nikaal ne ki liye kiya na?

Kabir:Toh meri saari mehnaat pe already baarish ho gayi par meri dard-de-dil ki sifarish kisine nnahi suna?Stress se nikalna tha,phir se woh baat yaad nahi dilani thi.

Nisha:Ok,I promise tere lye main aapna best kosish karungi woh saab bholne ki liye,ok sry,main woh sab bhool ke dikhaungi aur tere saath aapni nai zindagiki shurwaat karungi...

Kabir:(being happy)That's lyk my Nisha...

Both hug each other tightly closing eyes 2 feel each other...

Kabir(being in the same position):Waise Nisha,Mera poha already ek baar thanda ho chuka hain aur oven mein bhi jaa chuka haim.Agar tu chahti hain ki phirse oven mein jaaye toh it's ok. Waise bhi pata nahi woh Poha bana hain yah...

Nisha(breaking the hug):Kabir tune jo bhi banaya hain na...

Kabir:(naughtily):Haan pata hain..Hubbyji aapne bohut pyaar se banaya hain toh is Poha par toh hamari itne saare pyaar barsenge...

Nisha(laughing):Tu bhi na... Aur sun... Sry n Thankxxx itna saraa ek saath. Aur aab main teri har dil-e-dil ki sifarish sunne ki liye razi hoon...

Kabir:(Naughtily n intensely)Arey wah!!!Waise meri dil li sifarish toh kuch aur hi hain...

He brings her close 2 him through her waist.The hotness of their breaths r meetting. Kabir's eyes r closed n they r getting closer. Suddenly Nishu punchd him in his belly.

Kabir:Ouch.

Nisha(Fleeing frm there):Saraa hua khana nahi khana nahi khana mujhe...

Kabir smiling seeing the smile wifey, his world....

Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 10 years ago
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Scene1:

Saurav was going 2 Dolly's office. He reached there,searches 4 her n thn met her. He watched Dolly taking medicines frm 1 of the employees.Saurav calld her.

Saurav:Dolly...

Dolly:Arey,Sayrav.Tu yahan kaise? Tujhe kisne bulaya?

Sayrav:Arey,tera matlab hain hain? Teri halaat inta kharab ho gaya aur tu bol rahi hain ki mujhe kisne bulaya?

Dollly:Nahi matlab papa ko bhi toh bula sakte the.

Employee:Woh mam,apki mobile mein last dialed numbr inki thi toh isiliye... Ok,mam main chalti hoon. Ap log baat kijiye.

Dolly:Ok

Saurav:Tu kahna kya chahti hain Dolly? Main teri lyf mein imp nahi hoon?

Dolly:NAhi Sayrav..AIsi baat...

Saurav:Kaisi baat Dolly? Ahcha yeh chhod.. Maine tujhe kitni baar bola hain ki itni kaam mat kiya kar. Aur sabse zarrori baat.Tujhe yeh job karni hi nahi chahiye thi.

Dolly:Par tu janta hain na..Maan aapni pyaaro mein..

Saurav:Baas Dolly... Baar baar ek hi baat kehne se kuch nahi hota... Ab toh mujhe lag raha hain ki tere lyf mein meri koyi value hi nahi rahi

Dolly:sau...

Saurav:Nahi baas Dolly. Main toh baas tera aur teri bachche ka khayal rakhna chahta tha. Lekin mere liye toh teri paas waqt hi nahi hain..

Dolly was nw crying

Saurav:Aur aaj tune prove kar diya ki is bachche pe meri koyi haq hi nahi hain..Yeh bachcha mera nahi hain.. Aaj mujhe lag raha hain ki tu bhi...

Dolly:(shouting):Baas Saurav.. Baas... Main aur nahi sah sakti. Maine tujhe haan sirf isi liye bola tha kyon ki mujhe laga tu alag hain.

Saurav:Haan Dolly ... PAr main jis Dolly se pyaar karta tha woh aisi nahi thi.

Dolly:Bass Saurav.. Tujhe meri saath rishta rakhna hain ki nahi?

Saurav:Matlab kya hain tera?

Dolly:Haan yah na..

Saurav:Sacchi mein Dolly? Toh thik hain koyi rishta nahi rakhna mujhe teri saath.

N he goes frm there leaving behind a shockd n destroyd Dolly.. Bt the whole scene was shown by a person behind the wall n it was none bt AR.

Scene 2:

In the shop

Dadaji:Arey,Viren... Umesh us din bhi kahi chala gaya tha aaj bhi nahi hain.. Kar kya raha hain woh?

Viren:Pata nahi bauji.(2 himself)Kuch toh ghadbaad hain. Us din woh diary aur ab aise gayab ho jana.Akhir baat kya hain?

Scene 3:

In teh evening all the cousins in the terrice of GH(Xcept Dolly). All hav returnd frm work bt is in there respective rooms. UMan tells thm the whole conversations wid the manager.

Umesh:Pata nahi kaha se layunga aisi property.

Kabir:Umesh.EK property hain..

All bcom surprised.

Kirti:Kaunsi jiju?

NIsha:Haan Kabir,Kaunsi?

Kabir:Hamara ghar...

The others:Kyan?

Kabir:Haan toh problem kya hain? Tu jab achchese kama lega toh ghar wapas milhi jayega na..

NIsha:Kabir tu serious hain?

Kabir:Haan..toh?

Aman:Kabir tumhe hum pagal lagte hain?Nahi,hum nahi le sakte.

Suketu:Nahi..Bhaiya-bhabhi. Kabir ka idea bura nahi hain.

Jwala n Bunty also agreed.

UMan:Ok,we will think abt it.

Scene 4:

NiBIr reaches their home

Kabir:Nisha,i hope ki tujhe mera decision sahi laga.Matlab,tu naraj toh nahi hain na ki maine tujhse bina puchhe...

Nisha:Kabir.. Mujhe tujhse baat nahi karni.

Kabir:Par Nisha.

NIsha:Kya Kabir?

Kabir:Tu naraj hain mujhse?

NIsha:Main tujhse bohut jaida naarj hoon. Aur yeh sirf tabhi kaam hoga jab main tujhe thappad marungi.

Kabir:Kya?

Nisha;Haan...

Kabir:Ok..

Nisha:OK???

Kabir(Pouting):Haan..Agar issey tera gussa kaam hota hain toh...

Nisha movd 4ward n Kabir closd his eyes. Bt 2 his surprise he felt a peck in his cheeks...

Nisha:Kaisa laga?

Kabir:Nishu...

Nisha:Kaisa laga yeh?

Kabir:Matlab tu naraj nahi hain?

Nisha:Really kabire..TU kauwa hain.. Main kiase naraj ho sakti hoon?TU aaj meri dil mein apne liye aur izzat kama liya...

Kabir smiled.

Nisha:Aur tere liye ik surprise hain...

Kabir(naughtily):Achcha,kuch aur dena hain?

NIsha:Hmm... Dena toh hain lekin... yeh..

She gave him a letter

Kabir:Yeh kya hain..

Nisha:Khol k dekh

Kabir saw dat it the same letter he got as the confirmation of the job as the assistant choreographar at JAIPUR DREAM DANCE(JD2)

Nisha(xcitedly):Haan...Kabir tujhe job mil gaya...

Kabir;Par NIsha..

NIsha:Kya hua? Tu khush nahi hain?

Kabir:Nishu,actually... Mujhe yeh letter pehle hi mil gaya tyha.. MAin tujhe surprise dena chahta tha.. Par uski baad tere probs ki wajese... NAhi bata saka... Ab toh ulta tune mujhe hi surprise de diya...
...

Note:Sry guys 4 being late. N I knw this was nt a gud epi. Actually I wrote 2 fast... Sry... 4giv ne.

Actually,m busy wid my nw college n the vacaton jst startd. get vry less tym 2 com 2 IF.So i aplogize 2 all my frnds 4 nt talking wid thm n reading their stories... I wrote the saga n some FFs bt couldn't commnt. So plz 4giv me...

Will come here regularly aftr some days till the vacations..

N 1 more thing..This saga was going MAGICAl... So don't get upset bcoz of 2day's epi,my kamina babas... 😊


Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 10 years ago
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Scene 1:(NiBIr house)

Nisha:Kabir,baat ho gayi tere bade bhaiya se?

Kabir:Haan...

He saw her upset n tensed.

Kabir:NIsha tu tension maat le. Tu pyaar karti hain na mujhse? Mujh par bharosa karti hain na?

NIsha:Haan Kabir... Tu yeh kyon puchh raha hain?

Kabir:Toh jiase chote bhai ko aapna pyaar mil gaya waise bade bhai ko bhi mil jayega.

Nisha: Matlab?

Kabir:Matlab ki dekhna ek din bade bhaiya ko bhi aapna pyaar mil jayega. Aur unka pyaar dhondenge ek main aur ek tu...


Nisha smiled.

Nisha:Kabir tu bhi na... Haan sahi bola tune unka pyaar ek tu aur ek main hi dhoondenge. I really hope ki unki sari pareshani door ho jaye. Unki lyf mein pyaar ki bohut zarrorat hain.

Kabir(naughtily):Ek minute,wifey. Maine jab bola ki unhe unka pyaar mil jayega toh tune iska matlab puchcha... Kahin tujhe aisa toh nahi laga ki main tujhe Draupadi banakar share karne ka soch raha tha.

Nisha:(angily):chhiii... Kabir haad hain. Tu ek number ka kamina hain.. Kauwa kahin ka.. Tere liye saare gaalis bhi kam padenge.


Nisha starts going frm there.

Kabir: Nisha plz ruk.

He hold her by arms

Kabir:Sry yaar.Thoda excess ho gaya na.. PAr sachchi mein main toh baas teri mood cheer up karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Mujhe ab realize hua ki maine kya bol diya. Maaf karde plz... Tujhe toh pata hain ki kuch karne baat us baare mein soch ta hoon. Dekh meri job ka 1st day hain. Plz pz plz gussa maat ho. I promise yaar aagese aisa kabhi nahi karronga.. Plz plz plz .. Maaf karde. Thik main kaan pakadke uthak baithak karta hoon.

N he really startd doing so. Nw Nisha couldn't bt startd laughing.

Kabir(pouting cutely):Achcha,toh maaf kar diya...

Nisha(still laughing):Ok,cuteness ki dukaan. Sirf teri job ki khatir maaf kar diya. (Being serious)Bt promise me ki aise baate dobara kabhi nahi karega.

Kabir:Haan pakka promise. Kabhi nahi karoonga.

Nisha:Sacchi?

Kabir:Muchchi..


N they hugged each other,

Scene 2:(GH at UMan room)

Umesh sees Viren going frm their room. He quickly goes there.

Umesh:Aman,papa yahan kya kar rahe the?

Aman:Lagta hain papa ko saak ho gaya aur vo is diary ki paas pauchne hi waale the kim tabhi main aa gayi...

Umesh:Matlab unhe kuch pata to nahi laga na?

Aman: Nahi laddoo,bal bal bach gaye.

Umesh:Yahan toh bach gayee. PAr loan ka kya karenge?

Aman:Arey chhod na. Pehle toh tu recipe likhne wala tha na...

Umesh:Nahi Aman.. Mujhe lagta hain ki tu sahi bol rahi hain. Hume unka ghaar nahi lena chahiye. Main baat karta hoon Kabir se.

Scene 3:(GH at Jwala's room)

Jwala thinking abt whether 2 teach Bunty or nt.

Jwala(2 herself):PAta nahi iss Bunty ko padhana sahi rahega bhi ya nahi. Kitna badtameez ho gaya hain vo. Magar main agar nahi padhati hoon toh Laxmi chachi buda mann jayegi. Pata nahi kya karoon. Kitna badtameez ho gaya hain yeh ladka. Uss din kya keh raha tha ki mujhe padhayi chhod kar makeup karna chahiye... Par uski baat mein kuch toh tha. Mujhe toh saab chashme wali nerd hi bulate hain. Nahi Jwalu,tu yeh sab baaatee chhod aur aapni padhayi pe concentratekar.

Scene 4:(AR office)

AR was thinking abt the whole scene of DoSa.

AR:Yahaan yeh ek ladki hain jise baare mein maine pataa nahi kitna ulta seedha socha par isey kitni fikaar hain aapni bacche ki aur yaha tak ki uss ladke ki bhi. Aur meri so called patni...

He breaks a show-piece kept on his desk in anger. At that tym his PA comes.

PA:Sir,vo Dolly mam ki gharse unki behen aayi thi. VO unhe le gayi hain.

AR:Thik hain.


Scene 5:(In the car 2 GH)

Kirti:Dolly di ap sabko baatane kyon nahi de rahe hain ki aap itni bimaar hain aur Saurav...

Dolly:Kirti plz sabko sab kuch aapne aap pata chal jayega. TU plz kisiko kuch maat bol.

Kirti:PAr di aisa kya hua ki..

Dolly tells her the whole convo btween Saurav n her n starts sobbing.

Kirti:Dolly di aapne aise kaise rishta tod diya?

Dolly:Maine rishta thida? Arey woh aisa kaise kah sakta hain main aur yeh bachcha uski hain nahi.

Kirti:Par usne aisa toh naho bolana..

Dolly:Magar uska kehne ka matlab yehin tha. Ussey samajh mein kyon nahi aata ki main kuch banna chahti hoon.

Kirti:Par di..


Dolly:Tu uski side le rahi hain...

Dolly again feels dizzy noticed by Kirti.

Kirti:Achcha,thik hain main kuch nahi bolungi.Aap thik se batho aur plz ro maat.

Scene 6:(Viraj's home)

Vasu:Viraj beta.

Viraj:Mrs.Kumar. Hum aapse kitne baar kahenge ki hume beta maat bulaya kijiye.

Vasu:Par beta...

Viraj:aapko samajh mein nahi aata ki hum pe aapka koyii haq nahi hain.

Vasu:Achcha,yeh toh bolo ki tumne Laksh Academy phirse khulne ka announcement de diya aur hume kuch bataya bhi nahi.

Viraj:Hume nahi laagta ki hume aapse baat karne ki koyi zaroorat hain. Ap hume hamari haal par cchod dijiye. Hume achcha nahi laagta ki aap hamare aas paas bhi rahe.


Vasu starts crying.

Vasu:Tum hume baas ek aur mauka nahi de sakte?

Viraj:Dekhiye aap plz..


At the same tym his phone starts ringing n the caller was Kabir.

Kabir:Bade bhaiya,kaise ho?

Viraj:Hmmm...Hum thik hain

Kabir:Vo aapko na ek khush khabri deni thi. Matlab waise wali khush khabri nahi...

Viraj(Laughing);Aap bhi na chote.

Kabir:(surpeised):Chote!!

Viraj:Haan toh agar aap hume bade bhaiya bula sakte hain toh kya hum upko chote nahi bula sakte?

Vasu who was still standing there understood that the caller was her son Kabir.

Kabir:Arey,wah.. Hamari jodi kitni achchi hain na... Bade bhaiya aur chote..

Viraj smiled n at the same tym also heard Nisha frm the other side,saying: Kabir,tym nahi hain tere paas. Hamesha majak karta rahta hain.

Viraj:Haan chote,boliye kya khush khabri hain. Aapki patni naraj ho rahi hain.

Kabir:(being embarassd):Kya..Aap bhi.. Vo khush klhabri yeh hain ki mujhe naya job mila hain. Assistant choreographer in JD2.

Viraj:Arey wah!! Yeh toh bohut bari khushi ki baat hain.

Kabir:Up plz mom ko bhi bataa dena.

Viraj:Unse aap hi baat kar lijiyega.

Vasu was getting vry curious 2 knw abt the news.

Kabir:Aap abhi tak mom se naraj hain?

Viraj:Chote,Chhodiye na. Hume bhi aapko ek khush khabri dena hain. Humne abhi abhi faisla liya hain ki hum kuch hi dino mein jaipur aa rahe hain.

Kabir:(Being xcitd)Kya, Sach mein... Yeh toh sabse baari khush khabri hui. Arey,bhaiya, bohut late ho raha hain. Aaj 1st day hain na... Main baad mein aapse baat karta hoon.

Viraj:Thik hain,All the best!!

Kabir:Thnks a looot.

They cut the call bt this desicion of Viraj left Vasu shocked.

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Note:Dear Kamina babas,, Plz 4giv me 4 mistakes. N hindi mistakes ke liye toh mujhe blame bhi maat karna coz m nt an indian. I write on hindi jst 2 bring thoda serialwali feeling..So,khabardar..Don't blame me. 😛
N do like n comment if u really lyk n feel 2 comment 😃


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Ta he na na hu hu na na hi hi na na ha...
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Ppl say DAT b itself n days why I luv myself 😆
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Thnxxx a looot yaaros n dostos 4 liking it n 4 comments.Sry,couldn't reply individually coz m uploading from mubilu. Bt can update thus after returning home from my PC. Nw here goes the 1st chapy...
... Chapter 1 ...
The railway station. Students gathering there. Some1 tense, some1 excited, some1 old, some1 new.
A new girl in anarkali entered.

Deepika(monologue):Finally,new journey of my lyf. New college, new experience.

Suddenly she heard some1 screaming.

The voice of a boy:E anarkali wali chashmish,hat samne se...

She movd 2 face him n saw a girl chasing the boy.She movd frm there hurriedly. The girl finally caught him n was hitting him badly.

The girl:Ranbir ki bachche,How dare u?Tune meri haat se chocolate chhin kar kha liya. Aj toh tujhe nahi chhorne wali.

Ranbir:Par Sam. Maine aapne bachcho ke liye hi toh Chhina na.

Sam:What? Tere bachche?

Ranbir:Yup,u jst said na Ranbir ke bachhe..

Sam:Why?? Tu bhi na..nach baliye 2 much.

Both bursted out laughing.

The whole scenery was seen by 2 persons. 1 is deepika who was also laughing n the other was some1 standing far behind,just looking at them.Then his best frnd called him from behind.

Arjun:Neil!!

Neil:Arey,Arjun, when u came? OK,let's go.

Arjun:Tu abhi tak bhula nahi paya hain na usey. Meri wajese...

Neil:Arjun..Stop it,yaar..

Arjun:Toh why were u staring lyk this?

Neil:Vo meri jo ankhein hain,beautiful girls in shorts mein dekhkar starts hilling.

Arjun:Kya?

Neil:Haan,Actually na main Teri tarah meri draupadis ko share nahi kar sakta.After all, u r Arjun.

Arjun:Wht was this,haan?

Neil:My sense of Pagalmar,SOP, lyk ppl have sense of humor, I have SOP.

Arjun:Neil,shut up. Tu Sam aur Ranbir ko dekh raga tha.

Neil:Nop,tanu ko. See,my draupadi in shorts is coming towards me.

Tanu:Hi,Neils..How r u??Missed u much in the vacation.

Neil:Baby,I missed u 2 3 4 5 ... Infinity. Do u knw, how I stays these long 30 days widout u.

Tanu:Oh,really.

Arjun felt irritated seeing this flirting n all.

Arjun:Neils baby,u wait here.Main train mein jataa hoon.

Neil:Ok,babu,jaa. Don't disturb us.

Arjun was going 2 the train, his face covered wid bandages due 2 the wounds caused by an road accident happend recently n sunglass in eyes,when he saw a girl who was also liking fashionista lyk tanu from behind.

Arjun:tanu is there wid Neil. Toh yeh kaun hain?

The girl move 2 face him.She was going somewhere hurriedly n suddenly "thud". Arjun fell over the girl. N they shard an eye lock.

The girl:How dare u!! Just stand up.

Arjun stood up hurriedly n thn the girl.

The girl:How dare u,haan? Mujhpe ajtak kisine hath lagane ki hilwat nahi ki thi.

Arjun:Hilwat?

The girl:I meant none dared 2 touch me.

Arjun:Oh achcha,himmat.

The girl:Yeah whatever. U knw what, m Radhika Singh rathode. Hum Royal family se hain. London mein model banne hi wale the ki dadaji became sick n m here 2 do bardhrusht dumbs lyk u.

Arjun:Bardhrusht nahi bar...

Radhika:Just shut up. Go 2 the hell.

Arjun:Miss Rathode u were doing hurry n so all this happend.

Radhika:U knw why,just go from here. U mommy,designed wid bandages.

N she went from there.

Arjun(monologue):Yeh kya thi.Whatever,lemme go 2 the train.

On the other side,Deepika was waiting 4 some1. Then she heard a voice from behind.

The voice:TipTip barsa pani,panic ne aag lagayi - Par jab tune maari entriyaan,toh aag pani baan gayi.

Deepika movd n screemd: Bhaijaan.

N he was her bro Varun.

Varun:Choti,plz mujhe bhaijaan maat bula yahaa. Bhai,bhaiya bula. Dekh meri pyaari behna,here I have an image.

Deepika:Bt😕 bhaijaan,ammi abbu ne bachpan se yehi sikhaya hain na.

Varun:Arey meri ma, yeh tera purana college nahi hain.

Sam:Arey,Varun. Toh yeh hain Teri behen. Don't worry issey bhaiya bulana main Sikha dungi.

Varun:Thnxx yaar sam. Choti,meet her. She is Sam,my frnd n now my savior.

At the same tym Neil came there.

Neil:Arey,Varun, u r ri8. She is a savior. She can save any1 from happiness.

Varun:Kya,bro,phirse start ho gaya.Neil...

Sam:Arey,chod na, aisi baato mein don't waste ur mahatwapurn dimaag.

Varun:Toh aj tune maan hi liya ki meri dimaag mahatwapurn hain.

Deepika:Let's go guys,late ho raha hain.Train will start nw.

Neil:Haan,varun bhaijaan n bhaijaan ki choti let's go. I don't have tym 4 faltu ppl.

Varun:See,chidhana shuru bhi ho gaya. Chal koyi nahi,sallu is also bhaijaan n waise bhi main toh superman-salman ka fan.

All laughs together.

Deepika:Uff..Chalona. (Monologue)Akhir what's the prob between Sam n Neil.

They all in the train.The train whistled n all got seated. Deepika just came near the door n at the same tym the train started. N she saw Ranbir running, running so fast 2 reach the train.
Deepika just raised her hand n Ranbir somehow reached 2 her hand, held it, put his leg on the train n she pulled.
Finally,he is on the train still holding the hand of deepika, giving the sigh of relief...

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Note:Guys do lyk if u really lyk n do critisize on the comments plzzz. Hop u will lyk it.😊


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Scene 1:(GH)
Dolly n Saurav returns home. There sees NIBir. All (Xcept UMan) in the hall n r tensed.

Saurav:Arey wah, NIsha aur Kabir bhi aaye hain.

Dolly:Kya hua, sab udaas baithe hain.Kuch hua hain kya?

NIsha:Dolly di,vo..

Kabir:Vo teri divorce case ki 1st hearing the date aaya hain.

Nisha:Toh Vimla tai ne phone kiya tha to hum aa gaye.

Dolly gets worried.

Saurav:Haan toh achchi baat hain na. JItni jaldi divorce ho jayega utna achcha hain. Aur dehkhna sab thik hi hoga.

Viern:Tumhe sab mamle mein bolne ki zaroorat hain.

Vimla:JI aap..

Dolly:Haan papa bolne ki zarrorat hain. Saurav ab meri zindagi ek anmol hissa hain. Aur haan ek aur baat, ap logo hearing ki tension lene ki koyi zaroorat nahi hain. Jo hoga achcha ki liye hi hoga aur yeh zitna jaldi hoga vo hum sabli liye bhi bohut accha hoga. Main jab har nahi maan rahi hoon to aap log kyon?

Nisha:Haan,Dolly di thik keh rahi hain. Aap log plz pareshan maat ho. Hum sab hain na di ki saath.

Kirti;Aur jab sab saath hain...

Cousins together:Toh sab pareshani puurrr...

They hugged Dolly. Dadaji, Dadiji, RL , Mohan were happy. Rupan gave a "impossible" look. Vimla was convinced bt Viren was stilll tensed.

Scene 2(UMan in the officeof the manaer ogf the bank)


Manager:Hmm.. Issey shayad kaam ho jayega.

Aman:Saach mein?

Manager:Haan,main dekhta hoon. Ap log kuch der bahar wait kijiye.

Umesh;Haan thiik hain. Koyi baat nahi.

UMan wait outside R very happy n xcitd.

Umesh:Mil jayega na?

Aman:Haan yaar,, Unke baaton se toh laag raha tha.

Umesh:Bass sab thik ho.

Manager came outside.

Manager:Haan aapko loan mil jayega. Aap kal aa jaana. Phir hum baat karenge.

UMan:Thik hain.

Manager left. N UMan hugged each other in happiness.

Scene 3:(NiBIr home):

Kabir came out frm the washroom n saw NIsha already slept

Kabir(monologue):Mujhe toh laga tha ki aaj romantic wala raat hone wala hain. Par koyi nahi tu so hoye jitni cute lagti hain na tujhe dekhkaar toh meri jaie K ko bhi sharam aa jati hain. Itni cute kyon hain tu. Maan karta hain ki baas dejhta hi reh jayoon.
He he went 2 the bed, was looking at her intensely n slept lyk dat unknowingly.

Scene 4:(The nxt day at Kabir's Office)

Kabir was teaching his students including Alisha some difficult steps. Alisha was moving whn shelost balance n was abt 2 fall. Thn a guy came n caught her.

Alisha(eyes closed):Mari gaayi. 9opening eyes)Nahi baach gayi. Owww... Thank u so much. Agar aap nahi pakad te toh pata nahi kya ho jata.

The guy: No it's ok. Par ab khadi toh ho jayiye. Warna aap toh girenge hi, saath saath main bhi.

Alisha:Oh sry.

N she stood staight.

Kabir;Arey,Sukku. Tu yahaan kya kar raha hain.

Nisha n her cousins wid saurav enterd by the door.

Nisha:Kyin nahiaa sakte.

Kabir gav a huge smile,Ran 2 her n hugged her ti8.
The cousins coughed.

Jwala:Jiju,hum bhi hain yahaan.

Kabir(being embarssed):Haan,sry

Nisha was blushing.

Kirti:Arey,wah Nishu. Blushing n all,haan?

Nisha:Chup kar.

Bunty:Par chup kyon kare?

Nisha:Buny tu bhi.

Kabir:Arey,par yeh toh bolo ki achanak sab yahaan. PAr Dolly kaha hain.

Saurav:Dolly apni office mein hain.

Sukku:Par hum yahaan aaye hain ek bohut bari baat batane jo Umesh bhaiya aur Aman bhabhi hi bolenge.

Kabir:Achcha,aisa kyan hua hain?

UMan:Hume loan mil gaayi.Aur aaj hi bulaya hain hume.

Kabir(Being xcited):Kya?? Yeh toh bohut baari khushkhabri hain... Congrats guys.

N they all shard a group hug.

Suddenly Kabir saw his students staring at them.

Kabir:Arey,hum bhi na. Saare students hume dekh rahe hain. PAta nahi kya sich rahe honge. Tum log bahar jayo main aata hoon.

Kabir 2 the students:Guys,keep practicing n sry abhi jo kuch bhi hua. I'll b back after 5.Ok guys,carry 1.

Kabir went outside.He heard Them discussing abt ghosts.Saurav saw Kabir.

Saurav:Arey Kabir, Niosha dekhke kisika bhi khayal nahi rehta na tujhey. Students ki samne hi.

Nisha started blushing agan.

Nisha:Saurabh, tu pitega meri haath se.

Saurav:Maugambi kahin ki.

NIsha:Kya bla tune.

Kabir:Wifey,jhoot thodi hi na bola.

Nisha:Tu bhi. Tujhe pata nahi ki tu kitna bara...

Cousins 2gether:K hain.

All laughd 2gether.

Kabir:Achcha,tum log kisi bhoot ki baare meion kya baat kar rahe the?

Bunty;ARey,jiju,pata hian? Sukku bhaiya ne kal; sapne mein bhoot ko dekha aur phir daar ke maare mere paas aake so gaya.

Sukku:KIsne bla ki mujhe daar laga tha. Main toh baas aise hi...

Kirti;Achcha,aise hi? Bachpan se tu aisa hain.

Jwala:Haan,Sukku bhaiya is mamle mein toh aapko koyi nahi hara sakta.

Kabir:KIs mamle mein?

Nisha:Bhoot ji sapne dekhke jor jor se chillane ki mamle mein.

All was laughing were Sukku was getting angry.

KabirChhi,Sukku. Tu aisa hain? Tab toh teri shaadi kisi bhootse hi karane padegi.

Sukku:Haan lagta hain daar mujhe. Toh aisa kya ho gaya? Aur..

He was inturrepted by Alisha as he came htere n said:

Alisha:Kabir sir,5 mins ho gaye. Sab bula rahe hain ap ko.

Nisha:HI Alisha,kaisi ho? YEh mere cousins hain.

Alisha:Achchi hoon, hi every1. NIce 2 meet u.

Cousins:HI!!

Kabir:Achcha,tum andaar jaayo. Main aata hoon.

Kabir 2 cousins:Ok,guys,bye. N again congo umesh bhaiya n aman bhabhi.

He come close 2 NIsha.

Kabir(Lowering his voice):Jab tu aati hain tab kisi chise ka dhyaan hi nahi rehta. Lagta hain teri chakkar main naukri hi chhut jayei.

Nisha blushd hard n pushd Kabir.

Nisha:Aab jaa..

Cousins:Ohooo...

Both blushd n Kabir went 2 his class.

Note:So guys,this was the chtusa update. Hop u will lyk it though it misses Kabir's K panti. Actually,my GM is nt working since somedays 😆


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Guys,don't take me wrong bt I wanna express something. Actually, If I had written this FF changing the couples in NAUC forum would get at least 25 readers wd so long,funny,inspiring comments n If in KY2 forum, would get at least 20 readers n though not so long bt inspiring n criticism wala comments.(Don't bash plz, I jst xpressd😳)

Bt unfortunately here I hav so few readers n only some comments. Phir bhi I will update 4 my readers n my Yaars here. N also 4 myself(As thus I can b active here widin my busy schedule)😆

So here goes the 2nd update. Hop u will lyk it n do comment wht u really felt. 😃

... Chappy 2 ...

Ranbir taking sigh of relief still holding Deepika's hand. Bt Deepika feeling uncomfortable.

Ranbir:Tu ne toh bacha liya yaar,Thanx a looot.

N he hugged her.

Deepika:Yeh aap kar kya rahi hain. Chodiye hume.

Ranbir(surprised):What? Aap, hum n all. Tu chese kya hain? Main toh baas thanx kah raha tha. Teri dress dekhkar toh lagta hain hain ki kisi choti sheher se hain.

Deepika;Nahi,main bachpan se Mumbai mein hi rehti hoon. N if I wear Anarkali toh it should b a prob 2 u. M jst comfortable in it. Bt aise hugs-wags mujhe pasand nahi.

Ranbir:Achcha achcha,ab samajh mein aaya. Tu Varun ki behen hain na? His Choti?

Sam's voice frm behind:Haan,yeh toh vahi hain par tu kaha tha?

Ranbir:Arey,tu yahaan?

Sam:Toh train se bahar jayyon kya? Dekh mujhe yeh novel abhi khatm karni hain. Aur tu meri tym barwaad kar raha hain? Uu knw,main kitni pareshaan thi. Mera chocolate laya hain?

Ranbir:Baas meri maa,chup kar. Kitna bakbak karti hian. Kaun kahega ki tu padhatu nerd hain?

Sam:Dekh main Nerd nahi hoon. Tu yeh bataa ki tha kaha u n meri chocolate?

Ranbir:Haan teri chocolate latee latee I was going 2 miss the train. Achcha,chal andar tujhe bataa ta hoon kya hua?

Sam:Haan,ok. (She saw Deeepika standing still there) Arey,tum bhi chalona. Yehi rehne ka iraada hain kya?

Ranbir:Haan chal. Don't worry I won't touch u. I knw u don't lyk not only hugs bt also waags.

He was laughing at her n she went frm their angrily. Bt Sam remembered something.

*Flashback*

Sam was driving her scooty whn she saw a guy searching 4 a lift almos near the college. She saw the batch of their college in his wearing. So she stopped.

Sam:U need lift? C3 ki student ho na?

Guy:Oh thans a lot yaar. Yap i need help. Meri bike kharab ho gaya. Searching 4 a lift. JN yeah,C3 ka student.

Sam:Ok,come , b seatd. Me 2 student there.

Guy:Thanxxx. Bt back seat?

Sam:Any problem?

Guy:NO,ok.

N he seated there.

Guy:BTW,m Neil, Neil Kappor.

Sam:Oh hi!M Sam.

N they were going lyk dat. Bt Sam's mind always hav a connecion wid studies. N she was remembering her lessons. N suddenly a bus came in front of them. Sam was absent-minded n so Neil screamed, somehow escaped the accident putting his hand over Sam's hands.N thn they stood up,breathing hard.

Neil(almost shouting):Aise scooty chalati ho?Khud bhi marti n mujhe bhi.

Sam(Started crying);Par tumne meri haato par haat kyon raha?

Neil:What?Ek toh maine tumhe bachaya aur tum ho ki. Shame on girls lyk u.

Flashback ends
as Ranbir starts calling her.

Ranbir;Oh meri maa,kaha maar gayi? Tu toh novel finish karne wali thi na?

Sam(controlling herslf):Nothing yaar. N haan, kitni maar bolu, m not ur maa. Apni maa ko itna miss karta hain? Mamma's boy.

Ranbir(being concerned):tu thik toh hain na?

Sam:Haan..

They saw Arjun going frm there. N his face filld wid bandages.

Ranbir:Arjun ko hua kya hain?

Neil's voice:Oh toh Mr.Kapoor stills thinks abt his x-friends.

Sam:Neil plz, haar baat pe aise interfere karna zarrori hain? Vaise bhi tumhe kya pata dosti aur pyaar the matlab?

Neil:Listen...

Tanu holds him frm behind.

Tanu:Hey baby, why r u talking wid her. Mujhe bhul gaye kya?

Sam was feeling jealous n all others including Neil feeling irritated.

Neil:No baby,jst coming wid u. PAr yeh college ki train hain na. TOh sabki samne aise romance karne ki zaroorat thodi hi na hain. Romance toh bandh kamre mein hoti hian na.

Tanu:Awww... I will start blushing.

Sam tried hard 2 concentrate on her novel bt in vain.

Suddenly Radhika comes there.

Radhika:chhi.. U guys r so Chippos...

Neil:Kya bola tune? Chippo? We r not chips.

Radhika:It means Cheap, jo tum jaise kawaanro ko samajh nein nahi aayega?

Neil(laughinng):Kya kawarron ko? Madam, u r ri8 main kawaaran hoon n yeah gawaar nahi.

Radhika;OH jst shut up.

Tanu:Plz u shu up. Don't interfere. He is the hottest boy n m the hottest girl in college.

Radhika:Oh really? U n hot?

Tanu:Wht do u mean?

They started fighting more n it resulted in slaps n hits. Neil,Arjun,Ranbir,Varun n some more tried hard 2 stop thm n finally they were successful.

Neil:Ok guys ho gaya?

Radhika suddenly slapped Neil in frustration. All were shocked. Bt Arjun was burning in anger.

Arjun(pov):Issey toh sabak sikhana hi padega...

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So,guys,this was it. Sry 4 no ArDhika. Bt will bring more of thm in the nxt chappy. This chappy needed NeSam. Sharab,khush hain na? Teri n Neilu ki chemistry dekhke...😆 N Jerry sabar khatam hua? 😆 N yeah,It has YJHD wali feelings since I luvvv YJHD 😳

Luv u my readers



Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 10 years ago

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