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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Maggie hiii..just read them I have made them u will enjoy..
Link -1 how sp works
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4475561

Link 2 chaar serial
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4489450
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Enjoy reading it. If I will get good response than more parodies will be posted.

How sp works(in SP's POV)

12 mahine mai 12 tareeke se
Audience ke dimaag ki band bajayenge re
DHINK CHIKA DHINK CHIKA

ab toh 12 minute bhi humko tum
Nahi seh paoge re..
Dhink China Dhink Chika

January mein jab aayegi nayi shows in winter
On kar lenge promotion ka heater
February mai bas intro karvayi
Jisme kare hum hello namaste aur hiii

Haan ! March hoga romantic mahina
Pyaar ka izhaar karenge kiya jo kabhi naa
April me trp mil naa paaye
hoga kya kuch nikalo upaay

Phir TRP lane ke khatir
Leap mai karwaunga re

Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika

Garmi aayegi phir jab May mein
Har show mein party karenge
JUNE me lamba leap le lenge
New entries lakar time pass karenge

Haa, July me saawan jo barse
Phir se mann ye trp ko tarse
Divorce drama kar poori August ladenge
Aisa kuchh bandobast karenge

Court le jaaunga, consummation dikhaunga
Trp ke liye leads ko marwaunga re

Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika

Mujhko lagta hai yaara September
Phir ho jaayega aana doosri shaadi Kar tere ghar
Phir October aaye toh hoyegi confession mai gadbad
Trp list mai girte dekhenge rakh kandhe pe sar

Jab tak aayega very november
Kar chuka hoga production house to surrender
Naya show launch ho 12 December
Phir se nayi soch ka thappa lagakar

Naa Story Hogi, Naa chemistry hogi
Trp ke liye hum
Bas ekta kapoor se show chalvaenge re

Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Wait ..yaar parody padne ki itni jaldi kyon ho rahi hai ...🤣
Par pehle woh song tuh sunlo jiske lyrics aur background music gave me this idea..its
CHAARKADAM from movie PK
Those who haven't listened to it..plzzz..watch the video so that u can hum the parody in accordance with correct background music..šŸ˜†
Link
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WKbwopSXLWU

Now scroll down to read the parody..


Edited by Sarthak0302 - 14 October 2015 at 11:57pm

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So I hope u all have listened to the original song.šŸ˜Ž
Its time to read the parody. Its dedicated to convo between phekta maiya and her fans..(🤢who r responsible for high trps)
In parody at few places..a explanation is also offered in brackets..enjoy🤣


Bin puchhe mera kaam aur pataa
(coz it doesn't matters🤣)
Dimaag ko rakh ke pare
Chaar serial bas chaar serial
Dekh lo naa saath mere (x2)

Bin kuch soche, bin kuch samjhe
Haathon par haath rakhe
Chaar serial bas char serial
Dekh lo na saath mere

Hey.. bin kuch soche, bin kuch samjhe
Haathon par haath rakhe
Chaar serial bas chaar serial
Dekh lo na saath mere

Gharon mein tumko jo biwi sataye
Serials Ka jaal bicha denge hum
Shaam ho jaaye to jaa kar sofe pe
Tv dikhwa denge hum
Chhaye uddasi toh maha episode dikha kar
Twists la denge hum
(This proves our madam is saving male members of the house..by keeping the ladies busy in watching her cute craps..full of nonsense🤣
Purusho ke hit mai jaarišŸ˜†)

Pakte Pakate yunhi chilaate
Dikha denge chaar serial
Yea yeah.. na na nana...
Trp aa re re re...

Tumsa mile jo koi producer
Maut se kaun darey
(Becoz fans know she can make anyone..alive again for multiple times🤣)
Chaar serial kya saari umar
TV dekhenge saath tere

Bin kuch soche, bin kuch samjhe
Haathon par haath rakh ke
Char serial bas char serial
Dekh lo na saath mere (x2)



Note- 1- I will make more parodies only if I get good response .
2- I am not able to send pms as I am busy in studies. Saru will send them on my behalf whenever she is free.(thank u saru😃)
Sorry for inconvenience caused

Waiting for ur likes and comments

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
NiBir... The name spreads intense luv of deep souls...
Buttt...
Whn NiBir=K toh kya kasoor of our gustakh dil? Since our gustakh dil=Badtameez Dil.

So.. Our dil gave dastakh n we went 2 our "K Nation"...

N Here the story begins:

It was Oolampara Mental Home... Sweet home founded by Anu "Mataji" n co-founded by Abi,Amfi n Krys. There kabootars increased n every evry passing moments.

Once all kabootars gave the home an electric shock 2 check whether it is fit enough 4 thm.

But... Thud...

{Now the camra is zoomed in 2 the electric shock khane wala wall n it shows the Most Phamous Epoch Makinh Historical Story named "Yeh Rishta K Kehlata Hain"}

A man wid beard n mole was passing through a road. Whn the camera in zoomed in it is inderstood dat it's the electrician version of Kabira.. Yes,it's electrician Kabira.
NiBir is always 2gether bt Nibir is juda now.(Anything is possible in here)

Aftr getting electric shock frm Nishu,Kabira had bcome an electrician. Vo raste se jaa raha tha.. Bhelpuri kha raha tha. Bt achanak usko mirchi lag gayi. N the mirchi lagane wala was none bt Tarzan. Tarzan felt pity 4 him n took him 2 the jungle known as K Nation. Kabira khush hua n so he started producing electricity wid his electritian tevar. bt... He now got the mirchi of electricity... Arey,there was Ammu...
Zara Zara Chigi Wigi happen frm which Tarzan had 2 say:"Aa Kabire, jee le aapni zindagi".

N finally n KaMmu(Kabir+Ammu) ended up getting married. Tarzan had said "Aa Kabire" coz Kabir Jungle aa gaya in K Nation frm all sides frm now n bcame the gharjamai. KaMmu.. The 1st "Paap".. Oh sry... "Punnya" of K Nation. N the K Khandan starts frm here.

Seeing Ammu her behna Niha felt jalan n so married Jenny.

While NiNny(Niha+Jenny) r still bachchale less,in case of KaMmu,as tym passd 2 innocent devils cme in the world.. The production of KaMmu... Anu n Emran Hashmi!!!

Emran started doing his so phamous Karnamas bt once he was fed up wid all tyhe heroines, he married Ritu. N the result of EmRi(Emran+Ritu) was their 1st child Janvi. Bt wid the increasing tym, increasing pyaar, the number increased into triplets named Pooja,Harshika n Adeena.

N her sister.. The psycho panchali Anu had gr8 fascination 4 girls. She married the jungee Don Abi,who is the nazayaz daughter of Preu . Her father was Lapata.Later Sonu married Preu n gave Abi her name.

AbiNu(Abi+Anu) luv was 2 intense 2 b handled. N their pyaar ki nishanis were their 1st twins Amfi n Krys..The Bhootni. Aftr sometym a GM queen born 2 thm named Lekha.

Anu saw her bro's 2 big phamily bt Abi didn't want more child. Once,Anu came 2 knw abt her father's b4 getting electric shock wala wifey named Nisha. 1 day she found Nisha n married her as she wanted 2 knw how it feels whn some1 gets electric shock. Bt ANisha(Anu+Nisha) luv started getting vry much latto n inspite of electric shock, Anu got her 4th child n the 1st n only child with nisha named "Anisha"(Kalpanik character).

Abi was ok wid it coz Anu luvd both her biwis. Bt once Abi got 2 knw abt her 3 more babies wid so many children?!

WId NIya 1:(ANiya 1 poduction) Lili, Shats, Adita, Aditi n Mansu(mansi_as18)

Wid MIhika:(AnuMI poduction) Lia, Ash, Lachu, Mansi(maniwood), Annie, Addrita, KJ(Kalpanik Character) n Kiran

Wid Niya 2:(ANiya 2 poduction) Rossy-Sneha(Twins 1), NIk-Natz(2nd Twins), Saru, Nimi, Shanaya n Nishi

Yeah,Anu had 25 betis in total.

Abi couldn't bear it n gave Anu divorce. Bt the court(Tarzan) didn't accept dat n so they r now BFFs(Best Behnas 4ever). Bt... There was something fishy. Abi had relation wid Anu's 4th biwi Mihiks.

Nisha didn't say anything.. Bt.. Twist.. She also had relation wid AnuMi's suputri..no... chural putri Lia.

AbiNu daughters grew bigger n now they were also going 2 marry.

Amfi married Ritzi n AmRit production: the ladli Shibu n the twins Niki1(luv_zindagi) n Niki2(niki_2).

Krys luvd the K factor between "K"hushi n "K"rys n so got married n Khushi("A"rshis) gifted her "A"factor as KriShi production was "A"arushi, "A"nshi n "A"nju.

In case of Lekha... Tarzan was 2 worried abt 1 of his family member named Maggy. Maggy Asmaan se tapki thi, so her father is Sun n mother is Sky. Her badi behna was Sonu n choti behna was Anshi, her gr8 gr8 grandmother was Sunny Leone n gr8 Tauji wa TArzan.

Once Maggy was playing guitar n dancing her so phamous skeleton dance. Lekha lubed her seeing lyk dat n also felt the necessity of a rockstar in K Khanda. Tarzan was also happy 4 Maggy as Lekha proposed her. N thn LeGgy got married.

Aftr somedays Lakha ound dat MAggy had anoher Jaanu frm b4 their marriage named Rifi bt MaFi had no child n Maggy found dat Lekha had another new premi named Hardik(Kalpanik Character) n LekhDik had 3 children named Soham(Kalpanik character),Ash n Shibani.

LeGgy was abt 2 get divorce bt thn dil mein Fifi Wali Ghanti baji n now they were again 2gether 4evr. N their result r: Sana, Angel, Ritika, Nitika, Nutkut, Priya, Prachi, Kuru, Tanya n Roopsha.

K Khandan was so happy wid biwis n betis dat whn a boy named Sarthak came 2 the Khandan he found dat he is the bhaijaan of every1 one... Sabki Maan.. Sabki Shaan... Sab kahe Bhaijan... Bajrangi Bhaijaan!!!

N all this conspiracy was bcoz of the Mayadevi... sry, Mayadevil Preethi.

Last bt not the list... The story ends here( 4 now only n it will keep increasing n it's nvr ending)
Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
New Rishta Collection Credit goes 2: Niya

AN:I knw I hav changed some rishtas n Mansu m sry yaar.. couldn't make NIyu ur bhabhi. N all the new members dat I found put as LeGgy children... Hop all r ok wid it...

Mummy... Bachao!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Guys... Bhelcome 2 the Jungle!!!
Here is the updated K Khandan Family Junglee Map!!!





NiBir... The name spreads intense luv of deep souls...
Buttt...
Whn NiBir=K toh kya kasoor of our gustakh dil? Since our gustakh dil=Badtameez Dil.

So.. Our dil gave dastakh n we went 2 our "K Nation"...

N Here the story begins:

It was Oolampara Mental Home... Sweet home founded by Anu "Mataji" n co-founded by Abi,Amfi n Krys. There kabootars increased n every evry passing moments.

Once all kabootars gave the home an electric shock 2 check whether it is fit enough 4 thm.

But... Thud...

{Now the camra is zoomed in 2 the electric shock khane wala wall n it shows the Most Phamous Epoch Makinh Historical Story named "Yeh Rishta K Kehlata Hain"}

A man wid beard n mole was passing through a road. Whn the camera in zoomed in it is inderstood dat it's the electrician version of Kabira.. Yes,it's electrician Kabira.
NiBir is always 2gether bt Nibir is juda now.(Anything is possible in here)

Aftr getting electric shock frm Nishu,Kabira had bcome an electrician. Vo raste se jaa raha tha.. Bhelpuri kha raha tha. Bt achanak usko mirchi lag gayi. N the mirchi lagane wala was none bt Tarzan. Tarzan felt pity 4 him n took him 2 the jungle known as K Nation. Kabira khush hua n so he started producing electricity wid his electritian tevar. bt... He now got the mirchi of electricity... Arey,there was Ammu...
Zara Zara Chigi Wigi happen frm which Tarzan had 2 say:"Aa Kabire, jee le aapni zindagi".

N finally n KaMmu(Kabir+Ammu) ended up getting married. Tarzan had said "Aa Kabire" coz Kabir Jungle aa gaya in K Nation frm all sides frm now n bcame the gharjamai. KaMmu.. The 1st "Paap".. Oh sry... "Punnya" of K Nation. N the K Khandan starts frm here.

Seeing Ammu her behna Niha felt jalan n so married Jenny.

While NiNny(Niha+Jenny) r still bachchale less,in case of KaMmu,as tym passd 2 innocent devils cme in the world.. The production of KaMmu... Anu n Emran Hashmi!!!

Emran started doing his so phamous Karnamas bt once he was fed up wid all tyhe heroines, he married Ritu. N the result of EmRi(Emran+Ritu) was their 1st child Janvi. Bt wid the increasing tym, increasing pyaar, the number increased into triplets named Pooja,Harshika n Adeena.

N her sister.. The psycho panchali Anu had gr8 fascination 4 girls. She married the jungee Don Abi,who is the nazayaz daughter of Preu . Her father was Lapata.Later Sonu married Preu n gave Abi her name.

AbiNu(Abi+Anu) luv was 2 intense 2 b handled. N their pyaar ki nishanis were their 1st twins Amfi n Krys..The Bhootni. Aftr sometym a GM queen born 2 thm named Lekha.

Anu saw her bro's 2 big phamily bt Abi didn't want more child. Once,Anu came 2 knw abt her father's b4 getting electric shock wala wifey named Nisha. 1 day she found Nisha n married her as she wanted 2 knw how it feels whn some1 gets electric shock. Bt ANisha(Anu+Nisha) luv started getting vry much latto n inspite of electric shock, Anu got her 4th child n the 1st n only child with nisha named "Anisha"(Kalpanik character).

Abi was ok wid it coz Anu luvd both her biwis. Bt once Abi got 2 knw abt her 3 more babies wid so many children?!

WId NIya 1:(ANiya 1 poduction) Lili, Shats, Adita, Aditi n Mansu(mansi_as18)

Wid MIhika:(AnuMI poduction) Lia, Ash, Lachu, Mansi(maniwood), Annie, Addrita, KJ(Kalpanik Character) n Kiran

Wid Niya 2:(ANiya 2 poduction) Rossy-Sneha(Twins 1), NIk-Natz(2nd Twins), Saru, Nimi, Shanaya n Nishi

Yeah,Anu had 25 betis in total.

Abi couldn't bear it n gave Anu divorce. Bt the court(Tarzan) didn't accept dat n so they r now BFFs(Best Behnas 4ever). Bt... There was something fishy. Abi had relation wid Anu's 4th biwi Mihiks.

Nisha didn't say anything.. Bt.. Twist.. She also had relation wid AnuMi's suputri..no... chural putri Lia.

AbiNu daughters grew bigger n now they were also going 2 marry.

Amfi married Ritzi n AmRit production: the ladli Shibu n the twins Niki1(luv_zindagi) n Niki2(niki_2).

Krys luvd the K factor between "K"hushi n "K"rys n so got married n Khushi("A"rshis) gifted her "A"factor as KriShi production was "A"arushi, "A"nshi n "A"nju.

In case of Lekha... Tarzan was 2 worried abt 1 of his family member named Maggy. Maggy Asmaan se tapki thi, so her father is Sun n mother is Sky. Her badi behna was Sonu n choti behna was Anshi, her gr8 gr8 grandmother was Sunny Leone n gr8 Tauji wa TArzan.

Once Maggy was playing guitar n dancing her so phamous skeleton dance. Lekha lubed her seeing lyk dat n also felt the necessity of a rockstar in K Khanda. Tarzan was also happy 4 Maggy as Lekha proposed her. N thn LeGgy got married.

Aftr somedays Lakha ound dat MAggy had anoher Jaanu frm b4 their marriage named Rifi bt MaFi had no child n Maggy found dat Lekha had another new premi named Hardik(Kalpanik Character) n LekhDik had 3 children named Soham(Kalpanik character),Ash n Shibani.

LeGgy was abt 2 get divorce bt thn dil mein Fifi Wali Ghanti baji n now they were again 2gether 4evr. N their result r: Sana, Angel, Ritika, Nitika, Nutkut, Priya, Prachi, Kuru, Tanya n Roopsha.

K Khandan was so happy wid biwis n betis dat whn a boy named Sarthak came 2 the Khandan he found dat he is the bhaijaan of every1 one... Sabki Maan.. Sabki Shaan... Sab kahe Bhaijan... Bajrangi Bhaijaan!!!

N all this conspiracy was bcoz of the Mayadevi... sry, Mayadevil Preethi.

Last bt not the list... The story ends here( 4 now only n it will keep increasing n it's nvr ending)


New Rishta Collection Credit goes 2: Niya

AN:I knw I hav changed some rishtas n Mansu m sry yaar.. couldn't make NIyu ur bhabhi. N all the new members dat I found put as LeGgy children... Hop all r ok wid it... N sry guys, It's not proof read.
N plz join the contest: ~NAUCian Contest:Voice Of K Khandan~

Mummy... Bachao!!!
Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Grand hlw hi Dehleezianzzz... Yo!! 😃
M the nw born baby of our very own forum.. "Dehleez" forum😳 (Actually, m Jasoosing ovr dis forum since much tym bt posting 4 the 1st tym.šŸ˜† Bt ovio following the show frm the vry beginning.)

Actually my xms r coming sun n will cont till April last. Till thn I can't b active. Bt Main Rahoon Ya Na Rahoon my Parchchayi should b in the forum. šŸ˜›N dat can live in the hearts of my forum frnds. ā¤ļøSo m here 2 spread frndship. Oops,2 much bakbak n i 4got 2 tell my name. M Mugdha aka Rockstar Maggy of IF(Nw dont ask me hw a newborn baby can b rockstar. It happens.. Wid me only🤣)





Nw coming 2 the main point. 2 spread frndship n 2 knw each othr we can do this thing:

Let's bring "Dehleez" characters here. I knw u didnt understand. Lemme xplain..
All the members will select 1 character 4 him/her frm the shw. Lyk If I choose Swadheenta so I will b calld the Swadheenta of the forum.

N I knw there r so many more members than characters. In dat case, We can classify as.. 4 example.. "Adarsh" Adarsh, Romantic Adarsh, Crazy Adarsh etc...

So Guys... Sign Up now. N plz don't 4get 2 mention ur name also. N don't only remain in Adarsh n Swadheenta. Choose other characters also. We need Ahujas(villains) of the forum also na..





N If u don't mind I m Signing up 4 "Crazy Swadheenta" n my Jaanu (Rifah or AS-Rifi) can b "Crazy Adarsh".We r real-lyf besties n r calld "Couple" by frnds(Though we both r girls.. No.. Don't worry. We r strai8. It's our sweet craziness 😃)

BTW, m the stupid fellow who was waiting 4 the grand opening of the forum n seeking permission 4 CG/PG/CC. Bt bcoz of searching "DAleez" i missd. This "A" killd me. I hate Apples. 😭 Melzee vry well knws abt my dis craziness.šŸ˜† Bt all the thread r osm. šŸ‘šŸ¼Oops.Sry 4 bakbaking again. Bt no sry no thanku in frndship though sometyms It Happens!! šŸ˜›

M going 2 cont watching the show during my xms as well 🤪

Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 9 years ago
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At a forest, four men carefully hide themselves behind dense trees. They keep an eye on the house 100 feet away from them next to a waterfall. A man signals others to move in different directions. All four spread themselves around house from various directions making sure area is covered and wait for signal from their boss.

Inside house someone is tied to chair and is unconscious in dark. In another room a small child is found sleeping on bed in dark. She clutches a pillow and sobs. In a basement a woman is lying with her hands and legs tied up and she is gaining conscious. Between two narrow walls someone is lying unconscious with heavy wounds.

Outside a man observing the house through binoculars, contacts another over phone almost whispering.

Man1: Sir, ghar me koi dikh nahi rahe hai sir, pichle pandrah minute se koi aawaz ya kisi ka hone ka koi abhaas nahi ho raha hai.

ACP sir: theek hai Abhijeet, dekhte hai Freddy aur Pankaj ne kuch dekha hai kya, (asks) Freddy?

Freddy: Nahi sir is taraf bhi koi nahi hai..

Pankaj (taking cue): Sir is taraf bhi...

ACP sir(cuts him): dheere se Pankaj, koi ho ya na ho hame shor nahi machani...

Pankaj (correcting and whispers): Sorry sir, mei bol raha thaa ki yaha bhee koi nahi hai sir, par us waterfall ki taraf koi ho toh hame kaise pata chalega?

Abhijeet: Kisi ko nazar rakhni hoti toh waterfall ki taraf kyon dekhte .. Sir mujhe lagta hai ye sahi mouka hai attack karne ka..

ACP sir: Abhijeet ye mat bhulo ki andar shayad Shreya ho sakti hai...

The little girl sleeping on bed sobbing lifts her head and is reveled to be Shreya. Abhijeet recalls his daughter and sighs.

ACP sir: Ya phir Manisha ...

Woman lying on floor in basement is revealed to be Manisha.

Flash back:

Freddy is in kitchen cutting vegetables and Manisha enters.

Manisha: Freddy, ye tum kya kar rahe ho, jao ready ho ja, mei yaha sambhaal loongi.

Freddy: nahi yaar, aaj mei kuch der se nikloonga office ko, kal raat late bhee toh hua na, Tera help kar deta hu.

Manisha: der hui toh so nahi sakte kuch der tak, phir subah uth gaye?

Freddy smiles.

Manisha: Acha ab mera itna help karna hai toh jao jaake aap ki chote mia ko ready karo.

Freddy drops knife to floor

Freddy: Chote mia se ache hai mere ACP sir, nahi baba aap hee jao.

Manisha smiles and leaves from there.

Present:

A silent tear drops from Freddy's eye and he wipes it.

ACP sir: Ya phir Purvi

The person tied to chair is revealed to be Purvi.

Abhijeet: ya Daya ...

The person badly injured is revealed to be Daya and someone overlooks him and says "ab ye hamare khilona hi, hum jo chahe ye wo karte jaayega aur kuch bhee and laughs.

Abhijeet: Phir bhee sir, hume risk lena hee padega. Kab tak yaha wait karte rahenge. Hamare paas pakki khabar hai ki is jungle me kisi ko laate dekha gaya aur ye jagah theek lag rahi hai.

Flashback:

Abhijeet is shown enquiring people with photographs of Shreya if they have seen this girl. He approaches a chai wala and shows him the picture.

Abhijeet: zara dekho, is bachi ko dekha hai kya? Ye yaha paas wali school me padhti hai.

Chai wala: nahi sahab, hum roz yaha dhanda nahi karte, humari chai ki dukaan toh mobile dukaan hai.

Abhijeet: theek hai.. and proceeds to move.

Chai wala: Sahab, chai loge?

Abhijeet: looks at watch and nods.

Chaiwala gives him chai in paper cup and Abhijeet proceeds sipping tea after paying money.

Abhijeet proceeds with more enquiry and doesn't find any useful info.

A man watching over Abhijeet laughs. A girl next to him comments "poor officer, uski beti missing hai aur use koi lead nahi mil rahi and laughs with man.

Abhijeet proceeds to bureau.

ACP sir: Abhijeet kya bola tumhare khaas khabri ne?

Abhijeet: Bola nahi pilaya sir.

Abhijeet empties left over tea from cup, removes bottom to reveal a chip and a chit from secret place in cup.

ACP sir: hoshiyaar hi tumhara khabri.

Freddy: Kya kare sir, hume shaq hai ki koi nazar rakh raha hai humare har movement par.

Abhijeet: Shaq nahi freddy, yakeen.

Pankaj plays the chip in laptop and it shows house ( the one being observed now) and chit has a rough address of location of house.

Present:

ACP sir: theek hai, Pankaj tum bahar nazar rakho, Abhijeet, Freddy move.

All three carefully hide themselves and move over to house. Abhijeet checks windows are closed from inside. ACP sir finds a small passage that leads to back door and finds door is locked from inside. Freddy moves around house and joins ACP sir signaling that no entry was open from that side. Abhijeet comes there and signals that he would climb up by pipe and after 5 minutes we shall break open. Abhijeet climbs over pipe and gets on to roof where a window is found with cracked glass, Abhijeet manages to open the window and gets inside. He carefully walks over stairs tiptoed and opens back door for ACP sir and Freddy. He signals that he found none and three of them spread over house to search.

In a room, Freddy finds someone tied to chair and unconscious. He goes over silently to find Purvi and immediately unties her. He tries to shake her to get her to conscious state but Purvi is totally blacked out. He checks around and makes sure no one is in room, finds a bottle of water and sprays over her face in attempt to wake her up. Abhijeet and ACP sir search rest of house carefully but finds no one. They come to the room where Freddy and Purvi are.

ACP sir: Purvi...

Freddy: behosh hai sir, maine uthaane ki koshish ki par..

ACP sir quickly grabs phone and calls Pankaj.

ACP sir: Pankaj, andar Purvi mili hai aur behosh hai, tum ek kaam karo, jaldi paas ke gaav me jao aur waha jo bhee doctor mile use leke aao jaldi.

Pankaj: Ok sir.

Pankaj moves.

Inside,

Freddy: Sir ghar me aur koi nahi hai?

ACP sir (sad): Nahi Freddy, Tum yaha Purvi ke paas ruko. (in determined tone) Abhijeet, chalo is ghar ki kona kona chaan maaro, koi na koi surag jaroor milega jis ke jariye hum sab ka pata laga paayenge aur un badmaashon ko bhee pakadenge. Chalo

Abhijeet: yes sir.

ACP sir and Abhijeet start searching home.

ACP sir finds some empty packets of food and water bottles. He counts the number and thinks ek se jyada log the and collects all of them in to a bag. Abhijeet searches house carefully for finger prints or any small leftovers. When he spots a muddy foot print near the front door, he comes to front yard following foot prints and finds a good impression of foot in dried up mud.

He thinks : joota das number ka hoga, aur shayad ye foot print kal ka hoga, kal barish hui thee yaha pe. He starts tracing foot prints and lead to jungle. "matlab koi paidal aaya tha, main road se yaha tak. Ab gadi aane ka koi chance toh nahi hai yaha tak. Matlab kal raat koi gaadi waha ruki hogi.

Meanwhile Pankaj arrives with doctor.

Abhijeet: Pankaj, dhyaan se, waha foot print hai use uthao. (to doctor) aayiye sir, please.

He takes doctor inside while Pankaj proceeds to take foot print.

Doctor checks Purvi and gives an injection.

Doctor: Sir, ise anesthesia se behosh kiya gaya hai, aur sar ke peeche side pe chot bhee hai aur kisi ne us ki maram patti bhee ki hai. Filhaal ye theek hai, aadhe ghanta me hosh aajayega. Chinta ki koi baat nahi par ek baar city me head x-ray vagera karwa dena kyon ki chot lagi thee na.

ACP sir: Theek hai doctor. Thank you.

ACP sir signals Abhijeet and Abhijeet pays doctor.

Abhijeet: vaise doctor saab, koun si anesthesia hai?

Doctor: Sir, shayad chloroform hoga, there are some signs around nose and mouth, koi injection bhee diya gaya ye pata nahi. Ladki hai toh mei check nahi kar paya.

Ahijeet (nods): haan theek hai, ye humare doctor pata laga lenge. Aur aap yaha ki aas paas me hi rehte ho. Toh kya aap ne kabhi is ladki ko dekha?

Doctor (smiles): Nahi sir, mei samajh sakta hu aap ka ishara kis taraf hai, wo mei nahi tha jis ne is ladki ko first aid kiya ya phir any anesthesia.

Abhijeet: Theek hai. Aap aap ka pata phone number sab dijiye hume. Procedure hoti hai humari. Please (softly)

Doctor: Sure.

Doctor gives his details and leaves. CID team bring Purvi into car and head towards Mumbai leaving Pankaj with local police to do more enquiry about the house and any other activity seen recently.

In car:

Purvi slowly gains consciousness and identifies that she is in a car. She doesn't open her eyes quickly, but starts taking some deep breaths to stabilize herself.

Purvi (POV): lagta hai me koi gaadi me hu, par kaise?

Blurred image of some man hitting on her head...

Blurred image of someone tying her up...

Purvi (POV): lagta hi muse kahi le jaarahe hi. Let me feel surroundings. Shayad mei back seat pe hu, aur mere hath free hai, yeah they are.

Purvi slowly opens her eyes and finds she is lying in back seat of car and her hands and legs are free.

Before she takes any action, she hears the voice which put her to sooth.

ACP sir: Abhijeet, gaadi itna tej mat chalao, peeche Purvi hai aur hosh me bhee nahi. Gir jaayegi.

Abhijeet: haan sir, wo car wala na ...

Purvi (breaking them): Sir.

Abhijeet takes side stops the car.

ACP sir: Purvi, tum theek ho. (hands her a water bottle)

Purvi takes sips and nods.

Purvi: I am fine sir.

Abhijeet and ACP sir get out of car and move to back seat.

Abhijeet: Purvi, tumhe kuch yaad hai? Ye sab kaise hua? Kis ne kiya?

Purvi recalls something and keeps quite.

ACP sir: Purvi, kuch bolo.. yaad hai tumhe wo mujhe pata chal raha hai.. bolo

Purvi: Sir, wo..

Abhijeet: Purvi, baat jo bhee ho bolo please.

Purvi: aap log shayad bolenge ki mei galat hu yaa phir kuch imagine kar ke bol rahi hu. Shayad aap log mere yakeen nahi karenge sir... kyon ki mei ne jo dekha aur jo hua mei khud yakeen nahi kar paa rahi hu.

ACP sir: Purvi, baat jo bhee ho bolo. Ye mat bhoolo ki Manisha aur Shreya bhee kidnapped hai. (in low tone) hume ab tak wo dono ke baare me koi information nahi mili.

Purvi: KYA? I mean sir ...

Abhijeet: Haan Purvi, isiliye please bata do jo bhee baat hai. Koi yakeen karega ya nahi wo chod do..

Purvi: Sir... Daya Sir.

Abhijeet: Daya.. (in a hurry way) tumhe pata hai wo kaha hi? Kya use bhee kidnap kiya tumhare saath..

ACP sir (cuts him): Abhijeet, use bolne do.

Purvi: Sir, ye sab Daya sir ne kiya hai. He kidnapped me and was about to kill me.

ACP sir and Abhijeet: KYA?

ACP sir: Purvi, ye kya bol rahi ho? Hosh me ho? Daya? Daya kyon karega kidnap?

Purvi: muse pata tha sir ki koi mere baat nahi maanenge. Mei khud hairaan hu ki sir aise kyon kar rahe hi.

Abhijeet(serious): Jo bhee tumhe yaad hai, sab batao Purvi.

Flash back:

In dark night Purvi drives on her bike. She spots someone asking lift and upon reaching near she sees Daya. She stops her bike.

Purvi: Daya Sir, aap yaha?

Daya: Purvi, mei yaha kuch khabar lene aaya tha. (Looking around) Shreya aur Manisha Bhabhi ke kidnap ke baad se humare oopar nazar hai na, (Purvi nods) toh gadi chod ke auto waigaira pakda. Ab mere khabri ne jagah badal diya last minute me toh socha kisi se lift maangu.Sunsan rasta hai aur koi auto ya cab nahi mil raha.

Purvi: No problem sir, ye raste se mei roz jaati hu.

Daya (murmus): pata hai...

Purvi (puzzeled): Kya sir?

Daya shrugs casually.

Purvi: Aap aayiye mere sath mei lift doongi aap ko.

Daya smiles, takes helmet and gets behind her on bike. Once seated he gives a determined look to Purvi. Purvi observes Daya face in mirror.

Purvi (POV): Strange.

Purvi ignores that feeling and starts bike.

Near a garage.

Daya: Purvi aage se left lo.

Bike enters a compound which looks all deserted.

Daya: Purvi, waha us end par chalo.

Purvi and Daya get there. Purvi stops bike which is a dark corner of the compound. Daya gets down.

Purvi: Theek hai sir, good night. Kal milte hai.

Daya: ek minute Purvi.

Suddenly takes a rod from backside of his shirt and hits her on head. Purvi loses balance and drops to floor along with bike.

Purvi: Sir, aap ye kya kar rahe hi?

Daya: Sorry Purvi. (he bends over her with something in his hand. Purvi loses conscious.

Present:

Abhijeet: wo kounsi jagah thee?

Purvi: SRP colony road ke paas sir.

ACP sir: Abhijeet, Daya ka location maps hai na humaare paas us me check karo aur Purvi ka bhee.

Abhijeet: Sir Purvi ka mobile toh waha nahi balki juhu me off hua thaa. Mei phir se check karoonga sir.

ACP sir: Aur us Jayant ka bhee pata lagao. Ho sakta hi wo Jayant ho. Us ki shakal bhee Daya se milti hi na?

Purvi: Nahi sir, wo Daya sir hee the. Jayanth nahi. Mere baat bhee hui sir baad me sir se. mujhe yakeen hai wo daya sir hee the. Jab muse pehle baar hosh aaya toh mei ek room me thee. Koi muse kursi pe mere hath band kar rakha tha.

Flashback:

Purvi wakes up and is shocked to see herself tied up in chair. She tries to loosen the wrist constraints vigorously.

Daya: Purvi, koshish bhee mat karna.

Purvi (shocked to see Daya): Sir, aap, aap ye sab?

Daya just proceed doing first aid of her head.

Purvi recalls how she got unconscious.

Purvi: Daya Sir, Ye sab kya hai? Aap kuch toh batao.

Daya: filhaal tum bhee kidnapped ho aur yaha rahogi chup chap. Bhaagne ki koshish bhee mat karna, tum yaha se nikal nahi paogi.

Purvi: mei bhee? Matlab Shreya aur Manisha jee ko aap ne kidnap kiya?

Daya: ye jaan na tumhaare liye jaroori nahi hai Purvi.

Purvi: Matlab haan. Par kyon Sir? Aap aise kar rahe matlab kuch toh waza hogi, kuch majboori. Sir hum sab milkar koi bhee hadsa ko face kar sakte hai Sir. Aap ko ye nahi karna chahiye sir.

Daya: Mujhe kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi, ye ab tum mujhe mat sikhao. Got it?

Purvi; Sir, mera wo matlab nahi tha Sir, mei bol rahi hu ki...

Daya's mobile rings interrupting their conversation.

Daya: Haan bolo.

Other side: Kaam hogaya?

Daya (takes deep breath): hogaya. (eyeing Purvi).

Other side: Daya.. daya, Tumhari yehi commitment na muse bahut acha lagta hai.

Daya (stern): kaam ki baat karo.

Other side: oye, gussa aaraha hi? Tch tch tch. Theek hai kaam ki baat ye hai ki tum ab gayab hojaoge team ki nazaron se, bilkul underground.

Daya: Theek hai.

Phone call finishes.

Purvi (again trying): Sir...

Daya: Purvi, mujhe pata hai mei kya kar raha hu aur kyon. Tumhe explain karne ki jaroorat nahi hai mujhe. Aur tum jitna cooperate karogi utna acha hoga. Warna.. Dekho mujhe majboor mat karo ki mei tumhe maar na doon.

Purvi: Kya? Sir, shayad aap bhool rahe hai mei bhee ek CID officer hu. Well trained and capable. Mei aap ka izzat kar rahi hu iska matlab ye nahi ki mei helpless hu.

Daya gets angry takes out his gun.

Daya (angry): Acha? Yaha mei tujhe abhi goli maar doon na to bhee kisi ko pata tak nahi chalega. Kisi ko mujh pe shaq tak nahi hoga. Aayi samajh?

Purvi: Sir, aap ek police hai ek cop hai. Aap aise nahi kar sakte.

Daya: mei kuch bhee kar sakta hu. Mei us keliye kuch bhee karoonga.

Purvi: Kis keliye?

Their conversation broke as some goon knocked on door.

Goon: Boss, hume ab nikalna hai.

Daya (to goon): theek hai. Mei (pointing Purvi) iska intezaam karke aata hu.

Daya takes out piece of cloth dipped in chloroform and puts it on Purvi mouth.

Present:

Purvi: Sir, meine bahut koshish kee. Saanse rok kar bhee behosh hone ka natak bhee kee. Par daya sir wo kerchief lagbhag paanch minute tak rakhe aur muse air keliye saans lena hee pada aur mei phir se behosh hogayi.

Flashback:

Once Purvi turns unconscious.

Daya: Mei bhee CID wala hu Purvi. Jitna tricks tum jaanti ho utna mei bhee jaanta hu. Ab tum sach much behosh ho.

Present:

ACP sir and Abhijeet are shocked to hear the incidents. They resume their journey in silence.

Abhijeet: Sir, par Daya aisa kyon kar raha hai?

ACP sir (irritated, concerned and angry): bhagwan jaane. Dimag satak gayi hai uska.

Flashback:

Daya is in dark room holding his head and yelling "nahi, mei aisa nahi karoonga.. nahi kar sakta mei and a voice tells "tum aisa hee karoge Daya."

Present:

ACP Sir: Sab ko usi ne kidnap kiya Manisha, Shreya aur Purvi ko.

Flashback

Daya gives a chocolate to Shreya.

Daya gets Shreya into his car and drives away.

Manisha goes with Daya in hurry looking worried and asking "Daya, sach bolo Freddy toh theek hai na?

Present:

Abhijeet: Aur shayad wo humare oopar nazar bhee rakh raha hai, kahi chup kar.

Flashback:

Abhijeet is enquiring on streets with picture of Shreya in hand and Daya is overlooking from an apartment and laughing.

A girl next to him: poor officer, uski beti missing hai aur use koi lead nahi mil raha (and laughts).

Daya: jab dhoka apne log dete toh pehchan pana mushkil hai Meera (goes back to watching Abhijeet).


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