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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: KS_Minion
Simple title: Kidnapped

Umm it's too simple!

FW is expert in tittle like Giraftari series..Daraar type something exciting name😆

The return of the evil type? 🤔

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Menrva

@Minionite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Parivaar yah Farz

And then a subtitle: Kya chunenge CID officers?

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: KS_Minion
Parivaar yah Farz
And then a subtitle: Kya chunenge CID officers?

Great!⭐️

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Shreya di u can add the dialogue in the vm "Duty first, sentiments later"

Then a voice...something like " jab CID ko apne parivaar and farz k bich chunna pare tab ? "

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

As per the plot..Cid officer's family will get kidnapped. It's also their duty to save them.

So how is it Parivaar ya farz? 🤔

I think we should think more!

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bluetides

@bluetides

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

how about kis ne kiya kidnap? 😛

jokes apart ...

I am still not sure on the series name... lets keep thinking...

as per write up...

Guys please vote for below. I am kind of doing screenplay now.

Option 1 : Plain Vanilla script.

In first epi first member gets kidnapped, some investigation and at end second family member is kidnapped and our write up part ends here.

This looks pretty much like AK series.

Option 2: TRP breaker script

In first epi, CID team finds one of the kidnapped members. We show some flash backs of kidnaps and team coming here. Episode closes with the rescued declaring Daya as culprit 😛

Option 3: Plain Vanilla and concluding episode

Here we keep script straight but we will give write up of concluding episode rather than start episode.

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Menrva

@Minionite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

I like Option 2.

And Rifi we can show that Katori gives CID a threat like "If you want to save your family you have to let go of xyz criminal or you have to give me free reign to do whatever I want or something like that". Then it becomes that fight.

For the VM so far I have this idea:

Black screen + voiceover "Pehle farz, phir jaazbaat."
Then the screen turns white + voiceover "Kis ko chunegi CID? Parivaar yah farz?"
The feet of Katori Damta with a dialogue (again as voiceover so that no one can guess the culprit) along the lines of "Maine wapas aa gaya hoon".
Daya running
Officer's kidnapped scene from Aakhri Chunauti
Daya injured
Purvi says "Daya sir" in concern from the epi where Purvi finds Daya's bloody shirt in the laundry
Shreya from Khatre Mein Masoom
Black screen + voiceover "Aur kya karega Daya jiske khilaaf sab ho chuke hain?"
ACP sir shouting at Daya in anger from Nakul Ka Raaz
Abhijeet's concerned face from Daya-Shreya track somewhere
Poster
Details

Who can get which scenes?

I've found some potential voice distorters so I can record and upload and see what happens.

Edited by KS_Minion - 8 years ago

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bluetides

@bluetides

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Guys,
Shreya is deaf how can someone hipnotize her? 😕

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: KS_Minion
I like Option 2.

And Rifi we can show that Katori gives CID a threat like "If you want to save your family you have to let go of xyz criminal or you have to give me free reign to do whatever I want or something like that". Then it becomes that fight.

For the VM so far I have this idea:
Black screen + voiceover "Pehle farz, phir jaazbaat."
Then the screen turns white + voiceover "Kis ko chunegi CID? Parivaar yah farz?"
The feet of Katori Damta with a dialogue (again as voiceover so that no one can guess the culprit) along the lines of "Maine wapas aa gaya hoon".
Daya running
Officer's kidnapped scene from Aakhri Chunauti
Daya injured
Purvi says "Daya sir" in concern from the epi where Purvi finds Daya's bloody shirt in the laundry
Shreya from Khatre Mein Masoom
Black screen + voiceover "Aur kya karega Daya jiske khilaaf sab ho chuke hain?"
ACP sir shouting at Daya in anger from Nakul Ka Raaz
Abhijeet's concerned face from Daya-Shreya track somewhere
Poster
Details

Who can get which scenes?

I've found some potential voice distorters so I can record and upload and see what happens.