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aru, complete fast...
and here is the thread...
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4229317

Anjori...the thread is beautiful...

Originally posted by: Aru_A

i'm really sorry for not completing my department. Problem is that i have some pain in my eyes and head all the time so it is advisable for me if i don't spend much time in from of screens. But i'm really, sorry, i'm doing whatever ic an...

i'm so sorry
i couldn't do anything to help you... 🤢😭
it may sound really mean, but we need to complete it at any cost...
just finish it off with the mahayudh and praja, praphhol... (don't go in detail... just a brief intro... 6-7 lines)
and then the seperation... that's it.. we won't do after that...
i'm really very sorry.. i feel so bad! :(

Originally posted by: -phenomenal-

i'm so sorry
i couldn't do anything to help you... 🤢😭
it may sound really mean, but we need to complete it at any cost...
just finish it off with the mahayudh and praja, praphhol... (don't go in detail... just a brief intro... 6-7 lines)
and then the seperation... that's it.. we won't do after that...
i'm really very sorry.. i feel so bad! :(

Anjori i just noticed, i made a small mistake in the intro of Rajrana Bahadur, check the last line...it will be"in his last words which were..."

Originally posted by: Aru_A

oh, please don't...

i feel guilty...

Anjori listen, do something...

if u are free right now...i mean if u are done with the graphics...u start typing from the time when Som died and Shakti left(evils return...stronger than ever subhead)...and then they go to boondi for the durga pooja fest where Rao Surtan harrases them...and then comes Sakhaveer...then BK's tricks and US's promise to kill Sakhaveer or kill himself...and soon, the mahayuddh of boondi...after which come the princesses...

i'll try and finish off the rest including DB, GR, PrAja, PraPhool, PraLal, separation, and then the leap...i'll try do everything in 30 mins...u do the topics in between, if u can,...

u are not ounding mean, i understand ur urgency,...even i am in the same state...

and yup...these three topics i had given u, u know the intros included too right???

oh god.. there is so much left... anyways.. i'll do the durga pooja .. sakha veer and ajab phool entry..
rest idon't remeber properly so i'll leave that

Oi Anjori! I mentioned a traitor in shamskahans subhead...i left a dash for his name. it is Sevak Devidas. Do add it. Maybe u wud have put it with the blank. My fault, sorry...

Anjori...

Boondi, a place where justice and truthfulness had no place. Kunwar Pratap was asked to leave the palace and his mother, Jaiwanta Bai followed. They reached Boondi because there was Durga Pooja being held. When Pratap reached there, he sensed trouble. He met Panna Dhai, the one who had saved his father's life by sacrificing her own son.
He met Krishna, a true companion, a girl with a zest for life. The one who could go to any extent for the truth. He helped the people of Boondi and was given the title of Sakhaveer, a friend in disguise.
Rao Surtan was the ruler of Boondi. His injust ways of treating his people were coming to an end due to Sakhaveer. He with the help of Bairam Khan had figured out that it was Pratap who was the main cause of problem in his kingdom. He asked Udai SIngh to help him. Udai SIngh, who needed Boondi's support readily gave help. he promised that he will find and kill Sakhaveer.
When he found out that it indeed was his own blood, Kunwar Pratap disguised as Sakhaveer, he had no other option but to go by his words. He had to fulfill his promise. But Pratap was safe because of RawatJi and his guru, Raghvendra. Both these people played an important role in his life.
With this, the yuddh of Boondi started with Surtan Singh and Bairam Khan on one side and Udai Singh on the other. It was now when Rani Dheer Bai Bhatiyani adamantly sent a letter to Udai SIngh telling about the treasures. Udai Singh had sent all his wives to Bijolia, a place where they all could be safe.
The outcome of this war was that Pratap had defeated both Surtan SIngh and Bairam Khan. But he did not kill Bairam Khan because he wanted him to live as a person who returned from the battle field after loosing. This gave an end to the Surtan Singh - Bairam Khan alliance.

^^ i had removed it actually... so i guess, leave it because it will take time to find where it was.. we have many other things..