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Posted: 11 years ago
Jigs...
You be the judge...
Coz you have mapped out the entire plot and will know whether it will blend with what you want to convey...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67


I think it was really well woven in the story Jigs. And it also gives us a glimpse into how Khushi is making Arnav relax a bit. He did say he's been working non-stop with no vacation. She's helping him discover that a little bit of fun is needed in life as well.

I am definitely enjoying the story thoroughly and so you don't even have to ask me if I'd like it to continue for longer!

And, please inform Shailaja, that Stripped Arnav is not wholly hers... bas! 😆

Shailaja is here to claim her Arnav ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

Dal Chawal will never be same for us...ever...ya? And by no means is it normal 🤣


Di...🤗 Awww I am so glad you enjoyed the update, I have fond memories of the bridge and its connection to Brooklyn so it had to make it in the story. And walking though it during sunset is out of the world especially with someone you love...😳



So question for you ladies...I wasn't planning on adding the movie scene, figured I would leave up to the imagination but since the majority is looking for the scene...what are you thoughts? I just didn't want to break our every moment of theirs since this is only a SS. But then I could stretch this story out since people are enjoying it and include these types of scenes... Would love your feedback...



I want to go to NYC and walk on Brooklyn bridge now..!! spent a lot in last 2 months..else I would be in NYC coming long weekend..!!
Please do add movie scene , longer the SS, better..,no one will complain..how about starting with DDLJ??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sman

Shailaja is here to claim her Arnav ;-)



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

Dal Chawal will never be same for us...ever...ya? And by no means is it normal 🤣


Di...🤗 Awww I am so glad you enjoyed the update, I have fond memories of the bridge and its connection to Brooklyn so it had to make it in the story. And walking though it during sunset is out of the world especially with someone you love...😳



So question for you ladies...I wasn't planning on adding the movie scene, figured I would leave up to the imagination but since the majority is looking for the scene...what are you thoughts? I just didn't want to break our every moment of theirs since this is only a SS. But then I could stretch this story out since people are enjoying it and include these types of scenes... Would love your feedback...



What a question? I have one more hair and I just pulled that out as well... thanks to you I am totally bold now... 😛


But seriously Stripped is wonderful and your narration is out of this world... can't even believe that you are doing this for the first time... you are so... so... so good...


I would love for you to lengthen it... but that is because I am greedy... the point is this is your journey and you need to decide which path you are going to take and how your are going to navigate... Don't give into the readers pressure... even if we are close to your heart...


You plot the course of your journey and we will follow you... because I have utmost trust that you will show us a wonderful sight unseen in this journey of yours...


Rambling too much... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


Rash... that is Shailaja... I thought she is younger... in her 20ies... 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you ladies for the feedback...🤗 It helps knowing what you guys are expecting though I have the main plot figured out I don't mind adding extra scenes...so let's see what happens!


But it's great having your support, waking up on a Monday morning was not bad at all seeing all the comments. 😉


Shailaja...remember sharing is caring 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower


What a question? I have one more hair and I just pulled that out as well... thanks to you I am totally bold now... 😛


But seriously Stripped is wonderful and your narration is out of this world... can't even believe that you are doing this for the first time... you are so... so... so good...


I would love for you to lengthen it... but that is because I am greedy... the point is this is your journey and you need to decide which path you are going to take and how your are going to navigate... Don't give into the readers pressure... even if we are close to your heart...


You plot the course of your journey and we will follow you... because I have utmost trust that you will show us a wonderful sight unseen in this journey of yours...


Rambling too much... 😃



@ red...
I totally agree...
Stick to your thinking and you should decide...

@ green
I totally agree... Bas.🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower



Rash... that is Shailaja... I thought she is younger... in her 20ies... 😆



Don't you see...
Even if Shailaja grows old Arnav doesn't...
🤣
Edited by rulama - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama



@ red...
I totally agree...
Stick to your thinking and you should decide...

@ green
I totally agree... Bas.🤣




I am kind of agreeable sort of a girl Rash... who is currently bold... 🤣


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