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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: musicxolover
I hate that forum too, Saheba 🤢

I feel like writing a one or two shot about the current track...

OMG what's holding you back?!! Go ahead!!😊 i'll be the first to comment!!😃

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Sruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Aww thanks Saheba 😃 😳

I just have no idea where to start from...or like what to write about 🤔 Help me out? :)

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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: musicxolover
Aww thanks Saheba 😃 😳
I just have no idea where to start from...or like what to write about 🤔 Help me out? :)

lol do u even have to ask😆 i'll definitely help.😛 i know what u mean sometimes i get an idea but then it's like how do i start to get to that part😆 okay so tell me what do u have in mind?😊

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Sruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

On a completely random note, I really loved Gagan's post. Maybe now I can handle this track :P

Ahaha exactly 😆 Okay um, something related to the current track...like after Zain's hatred has faded and Aaliya's pretty much given up (my god, that sounds depressing) Like, something about Zain convincing her now...cause I can't write about him inflicting pain on her 🤢

Edited by musicxolover - 11 years ago

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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

oh okay so u want a redemption track?😊 and yes i loved Gagan's post as well..makes me feel better about this track.

Edited by -Saheba- - 11 years ago

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Sruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Ye-es exactly :P

God knows when we'll see that in the show but I thought I'd write about it already 😆

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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: musicxolover
Ye-es exactly :P
God knows when we'll see that in the show but I thought I'd write about it already 😆

LOL okay😆

hmm i'd suggest with starting off where Zain finds out the whole truth..where he realizes the games that everyone played with them and so basically the realization that Aaliya is innocent.

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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

like you can write about him trying to call Aaliya desperately but she's out of the reach. and that causes him to freak about and he curses himself for everything he's done..and then u can show him go into flashback and that's when u write how he found out that Aaliya is innocent in this whole thing.😊

Edited by -Saheba- - 11 years ago

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Sruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: -Saheba-

LOL okay😆
hmm i'd suggest with starting off where Zain finds out the whole truth..where he realizes the games that everyone played with them and so basically the realization that Aaliya is innocent.

Hmm that's a good idea :)

Or...how about starting it from Aaliya's POV first...about how she can't handle all the pain from him anymore, like a paragraph and then Zain finding out the truth?

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Sruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: -Saheba-
like you can write about him trying to call Aaliya desperately but she's out of the reach. and that causes him to freak about and he curses himself for everything he's done..and then u can show him go into flashback and that's when u write how he found out that Aaliya is innocent in this whole thing.😊

Flashbacks about the things he did or said to her...now I'm getting excited about this :P