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rith123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#691

See what can be accomplished with one bedsheet. Do you think Mr and Mrs Raizada can do this?

I sincerely hope they never do this though.

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rith123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Knock knock. Where it is update?

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shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

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lagi raho juhi bai!

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rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

I can't wait to see how this turns out. (Tyra Banks)

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sarb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Originally posted by: rith123
Just one teeny-tiny bit of an update

PLZ

Update

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#696

I woke up at 4.26am and looking for update :) will go back to sleep and check in another 2 hrs ;)

Hats off to u Juhi

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sarb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
Posting in 5...

habits never changed...

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sarb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#698

Read the chapter 9. awesum chapter , But seems very short...

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Meena

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: amanzbajaj
Read the chapter 9. awesum chapter , But seems very short...

^That's because it's just part 1.

Juhi Di, I think- with this part, I really only have one comment. The shift between their passion and their love is wonderfully highlighted- the scene towards the end is so different from the others in this story, and it's amazing how you've managed to portray that shift with just your words.