Baaraatis #3 *Link to Thread 4-Pg 151* - Page 114

Originally posted by: Arshix144

J:

We need a new thread here Baaraatis!

So many of you are here tonight!

Originally posted by: tvpal007

I protest🤣

I am an innocent Abla baaraati😳

Originally posted by: MsDroolKanthan

The saavitri award should go to the one who says there is only sex in the story.

Originally posted by: tvpal007

Arnowji is busy😳..NK chalega😉😆.?

Or how about Shyam babua☺️.?

You know what, this story definitely has a lot more detailed intimate scenes than your past ones, but honestly, I have not once gotten the feeling that this story is only about sex - in fact, the entire storyline is so gripping, I can't seem to stay away.

It might be different to some readers because they aren't used to it but you are no longer constricted by IF rules, so it doesn't make sense to not write in the manner which you want to write. Also, you are keeping this story realistic -this story is about a Shaadi, and what's a shaadi without sex!!!

Having said that, the inclusion of these scenes does not detract from the story whatsoever; it fact, it only keeps it real. Also, there are so many other elements in this story that are making us crazy, from who wrote the note, who was Sheetal, what's going on with Shyam, why is Payal so needy, why does Khushi have these insecurities, why does Arnav want a contract marriage, who spilled the beans about Khushi's resignation, and so much more. Trust me, if this story was all about sex and no substance, none of us would care about all that I just mentioned in the last line!!!

Originally posted by: preethi.saseeda

Now I m waiting for new thread

Originally posted by: preethi.saseeda

Now I m waiting for new thread

Originally posted by: A_BA

You know what, this story definitely has a lot more detailed intimate scenes than your past ones, but honestly, I have not once gotten the feeling that this story is only about sex - in fact, the entire storyline is so gripping, I can't seem to stay away.

It might be different to some readers because they aren't used to it but you are no longer constricted by IF rules, so it doesn't make sense to not write in the manner which you want to write. Also, you are keeping this story realistic -this story is about a Shaadi, and what's a shaadi without sex!!!

Having said that, the inclusion of these scenes does detract from the story whatsoever; it fact, it only keeps it real. Also, there are so many other elements in this story that are making us crazy, from who wrote the note, who was Sheetal, what's going on with Shyam, why is Payal so needy, why does Khushi have these insecurities, why does Arnav want a contract marriage, who spilled the beans about Khushi's resignation, and so much more. Trust me, if this story was all about sex and no substance, none of us would care about all that I just mentioned in the last line!!!

Originally posted by: Hetnjig

I have officially stopped working waiting for the new thread, don't want to miss it multi tasking...😆