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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

now i add a five lines of how heads turn when ayaan arived..how people smiled at him..honoring him..pitchers were clicked by media (it wisll show his personality and khan repo in media..) and then how he entered with his mother while zoya' s family reach out for him to welcome.everyone making space for him to come in.Also show how shy nervous yet lost he was looking there..his eyes turning from left to right to find someone and then asad snakes his arm to his shoulder and their bro eye contact where he twist his hold in asuring way and smiles..comforting ayaan.asad twist his head in yes signaling him to walk to the stage and everything is fine.

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

baby..not the pm part just the commentu wrote about the hall...pm part is outline..we need to write complete story on it

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Shau

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
now i add a five lines of how heads turn when ayaan arived..how people smiled at him..honoring him..pitchers were clicked by media (it wisll show his personality and khan repo in media..) and then how he entered with his mother while zoya' s family reach out for him to welcome.everyone making space for him to come in.Also show how shy nervous yet lost he was looking there..his eyes turning from left to right to find someone and then asad snakes his arm to his shoulder and their bro eye contact where he twist his hold in asuring way and smiles..comforting ayaan.asad twist his head in yes signaling him to walk to the stage and everything is fine.

ok so
Everyone turned their heads around to see him when Ayaan arrived.People smiled at him honoring him.Pictures were being clicked by the media.Ayaan came down the stairs with his parents.Zoya's family as in her Api and Jiju reached out for him to welcome him and their family.Ayaan was looking shy and nervous.Yet he was lost looking there.His eyes were turning from left to right as if he was trying to find someone.Just then Asad shaked his arm to him shoulder and they gave each other a smile and Asad twisted Ayaan's hand where he was holding him in an asuaring way and smiles again.Comforting Ayaan Asad twisted his head in a yes signalling him to walk on the stage.Asad gave him a thumbs up sign and smiled.
how it is

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Shau

@delena_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

It was a beautiful hall.With red and white curtains and the ground filled with red rose petals and .With a huge chandelier hanging on the ceiling.The chairs for the bride and groom were in blood red.There were burning fragranced candles almost every where.

Everyone turned their heads around to see him when Ayaan arrived.People smiled at him honoring him.Pictures were being clicked by the media.Ayaan came down the stairs with his parents.Zoya's family as in her Api and Jiju reached out for him to welcome him and their family.Ayaan was looking shy and nervous.Yet he was lost looking there.His eyes were turning from left to right as if he was trying to find someone.Just then Asad shaked his arm to him shoulder and they gave each other a smile and Asad twisted Ayaan's hand where he was holding him in an asuaring way and smiles again.Comforting Ayaan Asad twisted his head in a yes signalling him to walk on the stage.Asad gave him a thumbs up sign and smiled.

Removed the pm part

Edited by delena_ - 11 years ago

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

its nice..edit the part where u said he came downstairs..coz he came inside the hall thru main door decorated reading their name.and second add just before asad signall part.that he froze on his fooot for a while confused and unsure of the events going around..and then add the later parts..ok..edit and show me

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Shau

@delena_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
its nice..edit the part where u said he came downstairs..coz he came inside the hall thru main door decorated reading their name.and second add just before asad signall part.that he froze on his fooot for a while confused and unsure of the events going around..and then add the later parts..ok..edit and show me

ok edited part in red

It was a beautiful hall.With red and white curtains and the ground filled with red rose petals and .With a huge chandelier hanging on the ceiling.The chairs for the bride and groom were in blood red.There were burning fragranced candles almost every where.

Everyone turned their heads around to see him when Ayaan arrived.People smiled at him honoring him.Pictures were being clicked by the media.Ayaan came went inside the with his parents.Zoya's family as in her Api and Jiju reached out for him to welcome him and their family.Ayaan was looking shy and nervous.Yet he was lost looking there.His eyes were turning from left to right as if he was trying to find someone.Just then Asad shaked his arm to him shoulder and they gave each other a smile and Asad twisted Ayaan's hand where he was holding him in an asuaring way and smiles again.He froze on his foot for a while confused and unsure of the events going around.Comforting Ayaan Asad twisted his head in a yes signalling him to walk on the stage.Asad gave him a thumbs up sign and smiled.

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Shau

@delena_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Update kii pehle quote kii liye ye kaisi hai?

What will happen if the most beautiful day of your life will turn into your worst nightmare?
What will happen if you get separated from your love?
What would you do if you get separated from your love?
You will sit alone and cry?
Or try to move on in life?
What will happen to you if you get tricked by love itself?
-Shaura

Edited by delena_ - 11 years ago

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

now say that he was madeto sit on a beautiful u know bridal chair..and then with in few minutes the evnt got started..attention were called for ceremony and people gathered around..aYaan looked at her mother and dilshad noded her head in yes looking at asad..asad reached to his pocket geting the beautiful ring box out.he opened it and there sparkled a ring with a single diamond stone and a flowery rt to side(something like that)
and people gawk at her..and few people eyes went wide on assuming the value of the ring..without knowing the fact that for khans people maters and not the price which use to make them hapy.(something like that again)
and one zeenat smile in hapines as satisfied that her sister is going to marry in a respected and rich family.and dilshad and zenat exchange their smile and zeenat quickly turn her head to call zoya for ceremony as she is about to take first step to staircase..people are shocked and surpried on the presence of cops in ceremony

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

the quote is nice..but lets just not add about the incomplete love or ceremony something..coz u know it will hint people of what is going to take place..n thy will loose intrst.

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Shau

@delena_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
the quote is nice..but lets just not add about the incomplete love or ceremony something..coz u know it will hint people of what is going to take place..n thy will loose intrst.

yeah ur right

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