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Shau

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
del go and chek the pm and come back here

i have replied

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

del we gonna add it more..r u here?

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Shau

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
del...

hi milli got my reply

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

yes..so r u in a mood to edit with me?

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

first thing first..where did the first part ended ?

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Shau

@delena_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
first thing first..where did the first part ended ?

engagement hall Zoya was waiting for ayaan and it ended when Nikhat announced that Ayaan was there

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

ok so lets start editing.
Write a para on the ceremony..describe the beauty of stage and ayaan suitsand the ronak and all in few lines first

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Shau

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
ok so lets start editing.
Write a para on the ceremony..describe the beauty of stage and ayaan suitsand the ronak and all in few lines first

ok so here it goes
It was a beautiful hall.With red and white curtains and the ground filled with red rose petals and .With a huge chandelier hanging on the ceiling.The chairs for the bride and groom were in blood red.There were burning fragranced candles almost every where.

how it is it

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

its really good..copy it in update comment on ur originl post..so parapara wise we will edit and stick there..ok..

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Shau

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

It was a beautiful hall.With red and white curtains and the ground filled with red rose petals and .With a huge chandelier hanging on the ceiling.The chairs for the bride and groom were in blood red.There were burning fragranced candles almost every where

Asad comes to engagement hall as ceremony is just about tobegun.we r in middle of ocasion when feroz enter with cops.everyone is surprise and shocked both together.ayaaN goes to feroz and they cornerd themselves whispering something..the world could see that feroz is threating ayan for something.
they excuse themselves from crowd..and ayan smiling at his brother and blinking eyes once (signaling everything is fine) walks with feroz to exit.even after an hour pased ayan have not returned..asad fels something is not right and he goes to check when he sees ayan is being forced to sit in the police jeep and they had taken him away.
asad triEs to stop him by runing behind jeep but nothing hapened just the dust in air.
here zoya unaware wories about ayan and her family..she is stil in her room.when she sees ayan been taken away..
she run to the exit almost skiping every other stairs to get downstair.
when she reached there she bumped into someone.

asad tries to get help and cals up few numbers when finaly someone answers.
he ask as if y is his brother been taken in mid of engagemaent.when the man on other side says becoz we doubt him to be a smugler.we checked his car n we found drug in it.
asad shut his eyes as he gasped as the car which he gifted ayan was brought by him and may be it got tempared by one of his frenz in ny while departuring.
he feels he is guilty to all this and as broken he tries to gather his courage and decides to take blame on himself but will the police believe him..specialy feroz who hates khan like anything.
he froze on his step dying every minute when he hears avoice and a payal noise at a distance...he blink his eyes a few times to clear the blurnes coz due to tears when the girl tries to pas him and he barcad her way with one hand..ending up faling on dust ..

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