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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Chod re.. I think It wont suit..

Tu jaldi se padhke please reviews de de taki mai post karke bhagu maa ki help karwane ke liye :/

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

I am waiting with bated breath :(

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Jaldi read ye my vaizuuu Then we will Romance. ;) ;P

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Chal I am also re reading an editing the mistakes :/

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Gin inched forward.

gin kaun hai??

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

V ignore few lines /words I edited the already.

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

His smile faltered. "Kria...?"

falter kyun huyi???

yaar mereko piccla version pasand tha..

tharki tha eoh... 😎

just on the end... mast hai abhi tk.. :D

mast hai rey pura... :D

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
Gin inched forward.

gin kaun hai??

Arre i told na mistakes re.. Neend mai likha hai .. I too saw it abhi red red.

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#579

It is ginched. Ugh... Meri na 5 lines deleted ho gayi hai OS se... usi ka nateeja hai ye .

I have to rewrite and post them now. Ugh?

Same thing happened with Forging bond ka update . always few letters are missing after copying.. Ye universal problem hai kya ?

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#580

captive ke liye:

dekh maine aisa socha..to make a series of OSs types...

u know like encounters pe encounter types.. jaise serials mein hota hai nah...

plus unka past matters nah... so...

ab jaise ek masquerade ball pe.. where they wud be dancing with the other... *sexy attires and all*

so here captive in the sense that they r sort of lost... and then there's a failed attempt.. i mean either rey fails ya fir kria fails...

fir uske baad ek aur kuch..

i mean basically a series of encounters types.. what do u think?

har baar captive asin ek sense mein liya jaayega.. jaise bahi literal mein tha... ab kuch metaphor types...

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