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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: farah53
No Sami...But I updated one thing which I said would be updated later..

& those who think no update was dedicated to them before, I am just broozed...You dedicate something to someone & they don't even remember it!
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3294068/ff-something-about-you-thread-2-completed?pn=90

Sorry Fari. Let just say with you and SAY yeh dil maange more 😉

What one thing you are talking about?

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
Shut up Sami. Fari I didnt get ur meaning. It got updated further? you added something now?

Everyone who is present here pls check your PMs now. Sami fari k soni la

I am not a witch and I don't know black magic 😭

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Farah

@farah53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Sorry Fari. Let just say with you and SAY yeh dil maange more 😉

What one thing you are talking about?

Nothing...Just the dress Khushi is wearing in the update..But I am sure you're above caring about that like silly little me😳

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@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Saiyu ill comment in a min..
Just vacuuming my room..

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

You updated the dress?

Finally! Of course I care. I was missing those cute outfits you select for her.

K bol na... about the update. Cry later witchy

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
You updated the dress?

Finally! Of course I care. I was missing those cute outfits you select for her.

K bol na... about the update. Cry later witchy

I mailed the PoL update for you and you made me a witch, I am so hurt.

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

K you wanted to be a part of the story. That was the only unnamed slot available. Rembr SRK? Dar se kitna famous hua tha. No other actor was ready to touch that role. This is the beginning of your good times too.

Koi toh kuch bolo

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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Farah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Ok, Saiyyu...Maybe it's the IPK hangover or maybe it's you...But I just love when Arnav wakes up with Khushi cuddled in his arms...It just unleashes this warm feeling inside of me..😳

& the scene of Anjali turning to stone..So beautifully written...I could just see her walking towards the window & then all of a sudden turning into stone..& the prophecy was so poignant!!!The wordings perfect..!

& how amidst all this Arnav still remembered Khushi's request to not make her decisions for her..

& the witch!!!I hate witches!😡I just hope even if Khushi takes a bite of the apple, instead of seven dwarfs, one hottie's kiss would be enough to bring her back to life!

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
K you wanted to be a part of the story. That was the only unnamed slot available. Rembr SRK? Dar se kitna famous hua tha. No other actor was ready to touch that role. This is the beginning of your good times too.

Koi toh kuch bolo

Badnaami main be naam, no so mean.

The update was nice, I thought the Anjali bit was left a little abrupt, unless it was intentional.

Saiyu, the flow in the story is missing, I feel you are jumping from one point to another in one or two places.

The Akash angle came out abrupt and the witch should have a little more witchiness.

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Samiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#450

The best part for me was the prophecy

The way you wrote it was amazing

I didn't expect a carved to stone anjali

Nor did I expect the devil had anything to do with it

I somehow loved the witch :p

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