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Originally posted by: shana0127

Tuesday @Krishna

AD is angry at Manyata for putting him behind the bar and tortures her that he will make her life hell and her sweet marrage with UV will be broken very soon''Mnayat challenges him in her colorful language that he dare not mess with her life'''..make conversation dhansu!!!...UV knocks the door angrily'''..not open breaks in '''''.AD UV confrontation''''..Minakshi too comes in tries to be a mediator and falsely shows that she in on manveer side'''''takes away AD from scene tactfully''..AD Minakshi scene''.minakshi says they need a plan and be careful and bring difference between manveer as they together are very powerful'''says divide and rule'..episodes ends with evil AD Minakshi evil smile

Wednesday@AK Lover16

Since their marraige manveer have been facing prob.after prob...sometimes she herself gets kidnapped on her wedding day ...sometimes some meniac ex girlfriend of UV try to harm Manyata on their honeymoon trip...

after the recent confrontation with AD Manyata is all broken and thinks their marrage woud never see happy moments ...UV decided to make Mnayat happy and takes her on surprise date...but here too they are not alone Vijay banna and Unati the newly married couple too end up at same place .they have happy moments together...full on sweet mnaveer date...with vijay bhai one liners and funny moments between Unnati and Vijaya banna...pls use all ur romantic bulbs

at the end add AD Minakshi scene which is as follows

Minakshi & Abhay Will Be Terrified! How Will They Complete Their Misson? How They Will Reach To Manyata & UdayVeer.. But They Need To! The Devgadh & Jaigadh Riyasat Needs To Be Over! Ranagadh { Abhay's Riyasat } Will Be Only The most Powerful Riyasat ! There Must Be Alanning A Master Planing Ad / Minakshi Were At Outskirts Of Ranagadh ! A Place Which No one Knows Abt exept These Two! Abhay Will Be Watching News ...

News Reporter : Our Next Khabr ( News ) A Boyfriend Made The Girl Pregnant & Whoosh! He Is Gone! The Boy seems To Be Lost Not Exactly Lost He Is Gayab ? The Head Inspecter Mr Talpade is Investing More On This Case ! We Will Be Righ Back aftr A Short Break!

Abhay Was Frustrated! He Changed The the Chanel & Gasp!

News Reporter: After The Royal Couple Yuvrani Manyata & Yuvraj Udayveer Wedding It Seems That The Couple Jagat & Jainandani Seems To Be Very Serious Abt Their Relationship! Let's See What More Mirch Masala This New Royal Couple Will Give Us! Keep Watching Ajj- Tak 4 More News Abt Them!

As AD watched the news an idea flashes his mind and he knows his first step to evil plan he had been pondering upon

precap : J gets an unkown letter she is horrified to read it sweat drop from her face

Thursday @Gargi

Scene 1

As Jainandani Had A Crush On Abhay ! Now AD Will Make A Use Of It! He Will Send J a Letter & Invite Her To An Unknown Place ! J Will Be Scared but In The Letter it Was Written that If She Won't Come Her Pyaare Jiju & Her Jiji Will Be In Danger & Dare If She Spoke to Anyone About This! She Will Go There AD will Give Her A Drug & As J Won't Be In Her Senses He Will SLEEP With Her! { This Scene Won't be Censored Instead It Will Be long & There J Will Ask Him All Questions Why Did He Leave Her & Blah Blah! We'll Keep It Long Because It Should It Goo Longg! }...Scene cut

Scene 2

Manayata busy shopping with Vijay Banna and Unnati regaring the big day ...the coronation ceremony...buys clothes for different rituals...add conversation from ur side...elaborate...

Scene 3
UV in Jaigad with Giriraj looking after the preparations...everything should be upto date...elaborate according to yourself...

Add a criptive last line in the end..like who knows what this big day of coronation has in store for going to be Maharaj and Maharani of Jagad and Devgad Riyasat.

Episode end

Precap ...the coronation ceremony ...images of big day flashing on big screens set specially for the day so that the crowds of thousands can watch their king and queen being crowned ... suddenly all mouth open in shock see weird images of the princess flashing on screen

Monday(@sweetgargi aka gargi )

Scene 1

Manveer coronation people watching with awe '.rajpurohit coronate the maharaj and maharani '..moment of pride for devgad and jaigad they have their new king and queen '''''..rajmata mrinalini devi face and stance gleaming with pride''live telecast .on tv'''. big screen installed at different parts of jaigad and devgad specially to cover this grand royal ceremony '.people jubilient'.

Scene 2

suddenly a pictures of Jai with person face hidden flash on screen the scene is a bit intimate '.subtitle comes rest coming soon''.people watch the picture their eyes wide open''.princess of Devgad with some man that too so intimate'''..she is not married''''.and it says more to come''''.Maharaj giriraj and Brijram fume in anger '.telecast stopped'.chaose and confusion '''..family in shame''''.J faints

scene 3

jaigad rajmahal ''..peole of rajparivar and Mahasabha collected talking about the mishap their heads bent in shame''''doctor uncle comes and informs J will be fine soon'''she faited coz of nervous breakdown''''Manveer ask everybody to calm down''..manyata phone rings'''''.voice says ''''.what a grand ceremony ''Alas ! Poor J her love making video is still waiting to go on air !!!!!

Tuesday(writer >>@AndreaBaid aka Andy )

Scene 1

Manyata fumes in rage '''..its AD on call gives him a nice ans in her colouful chawl wali language''but AD speaks in calm words that if she dared tell UV about him then he would release the vidios now '''..M gets worried and is speech less '..rajpariwar and mahasabha people look at her in surprise'''''.UV calms her down '''..Says M is depressed need rest'''..UV asks M about the call M lies to UV and says it was some unknown man who said he had J MMs and is threatening to release it if he does not get some money

Scene 2

M at AD house.AD not found '''A cd plays in the room showing J and AD night scene 'M smashes it but another one plays '..he smashes again '..another one plays again''..then the laughter and Ads recorded voice plays down''''where he threats M to break he marriage with UV or the last piece of her sisters tarnished reputation will be aired on all news channels very soon

Scen 3

Unnati Uday convo ...Unaati is worried thinks M bhabhi is hiding something...Use Uijay banna jolly one liners to lighten the scene

Wednesday(writer>>@ Vampy1234 aka Saira)

Scene 1

UV asks M if the matter regarding J is settled '.M says yes she payed money and now all is well '''..she hides her face to hide her helpless expressions'''..UV feels a tensed air between them ''.comes near too M '''dhansu Manveer passionate scene''''writer has to use all his crazy imaginations

Scene 2

M alone in her room tells to herself she will sure save her sisters reputation ''..even if she has to break her marraige for this.

Scene 3

UV asks M to get ready for the grand party on the eve of their coronation ceremony'''..M says she is sick of ceremonies and parties '''.and wants rest ''says UV is just a party animal who wants a barby doll on his side to attend parties with him '...her tone is rude and her face turned aside''''''UV stares at M and feels something is wrong...

Unaati Vijaya banna come in ...conversation unnati requests M gets ready for party ...looks beautiful UV mesmerised and happy still her previous word echoe in his mind

Thursday(writer >> @sunshine girl aka sow )

Scene 1

UV wakes up in the morning listening to M yelling rudely at maid''''.UV is surprised at M changing behaviour''''writers pls add some situations on your part to make UV suspicious of Manyatas feigned anger and rudeness

Scene 2

M rude behaviour at breakfast''throws away food saying it was not well made'.everybody angry at M changing behaviour'''servents says she is becoming arrogant and proudy coz now she is maharani.Vijaya banna unaati komal rajmata all shocked at M's sudden change in behavior

Scene3

UV tries to come near M is in romantic mood but Manyata says she is tired '..UV says she is hiding something'as her behavoiu is not natural'.M tries to push away UV rudely but UV grabs her and pins her down saying he knows her very well''''now no more games ''''''tell the truth'''''...

Precap : Manyata in tears ...hot manveer scene ...words are lost ...only love

Note >> Manayta still does not tell the truth though melts down to UV 's passionate love

Next Monday Episode(writer @kakacool aka Ash)

Scene 1

Manyata in tears ...hot manveer scene ...words are lost ...only love

Note >> Manayta still does not tell the truth though melts down to UV 's passionate love

Scene 2

pooja being held for the peace and prosperity of devgad and Jaigad .Rajparivaar doing yagya ...J is called to give ahooti to the holy fire as well ...but she faits...doctor uncle comes out of her room worried...gives the shocking news of J pregnant...all awed faced discoloured

scene 3

Manyata Jay conversation...J in tears ...manyata sooths her promises that she will takl to AD

UV overhears the conversation comes to know that AD is blackmailing Manyata to break her marriage or he will release her sisters video

episode ends

Now After Monday plot still needs to be decided

Plot makers do help !!!

😊

Shana

I've Written Little Plot Will finish It & Post! Well U Guys Can Gimme Ur Ideas!

@mahi: Yeah i'm Here! Any Ideas 4 d Plot & i'm Writing It!

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

@mahi: Yeah i'm Here! Any Ideas 4 d Plot & i'm Writing It!

@Zenu: Tell me at what point are you now?

Originally posted by: mahi0809

@Zenu: Tell me at what point are you now?

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

A New Charecter Introduced! She Is In Favour of ManVeer😉

@Zenu: So Shana had made the plot till where Uday overhears AD blackmailing Manyata right?

so I was wondering that to get that video from AD... Uday tells Manyata to play AD's game and make him believe that he has the upper hand on her while this 'new character' makes an entry and at face value is shown to be against ManVeer but in secret she proves to be a positive force...

Manyata will tell AD that she is ready to break her marriage with Udayveer but Devgarh is under Udayveer's control till the end of the month as he gave remuneration which she will pay back and get it from under Uday's control... so she needs time till the end of the month to break her wedding!

She/ He (new character) is shown all rugged/ kinda bad ass or gangster type mode so people think this person is negative and later on we reveal that appearances can be deceiving and this person is actually nice

@Mahi : Sorrie 4 Replyin Late! Actually I Wrote Something Rubbish 😕 hope u Like It!

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Heyy Guyss!! How r u Alll??

@Shana: ohk! So Aftr Monday Plot Is Here U Can Divide According To The Week😃

Plot

As Uday Now Come To Know About Abhay threatening Manyata! He Is Super Duper Angry At Abhay! He Calls His Men at Tells Them To Inform Him About Abhay's Whereabouts! He Goes To J's Room Where He Tells Manyata To move Out & Have Jiju- Saali A Talk! Manyata reluctantly Agrees & Moves Out! Uday Asks J When & Where Did She Meet Him! J Gets The Flashback Of That Night & was About To Go Unconsious But Uday Manages! J Hugs Him & Says That She Got The Letter & all! { here I'm Showing J Telling d Whole Story Because As We've Seen In d Show J Was Much Closer To Uday Rather Than Manyata} uday Goes Away & Tellin J To Take Rest! Next Uday Is Seen Smirking as He Got All The Information About AD Frm His Admees ! Manyata was Walking To Her Room After Having a Talk With Doctor Uncle about J When a Hand Pulls Her Away & Covers Her Mouth! It's None Other Than Uday! He Drags Her To The Room & pins Her Against The Wall & Smirks ;)

Uday : Princess ! Humein Sab Kuch Pata Chal Gaya!

Manyata Melts In The Arms Of Her Love She Tells Him that She Is Sorry but He Puts Finger On Her Lips & Turns Her Around now Uday's chin is resting on manyata's Shoulder he starts kissing her neck & all { Guys I'm very bad at Romantic Scenes 😆 } while on The Other Hand Abhay Gets a Call Frm Raj Lakshmi !

Raj Lakshmi : Ex Maharani Of Rajgadh! Her Daughter Suicided Because Of Abhay He Used Her as He Used J! Aftr Gettin Bashed Frm Maha sabha Because Of Wat Her Daughter Did Their Riyasat Was No More !

Late Princess Minakshi: was Known As Mini To All ! She Sucided Because Abhay Dev Singh Of Ranagadh Slept With Her & Did Same Wat He Did To Rajkumari Jainandani Of Devgadh!

Raj Lakshmi : Abhay Dev Singh! Abhi Tumhari Adat ( habit) Nahi Sudhri ? Tum Ne Phir Se kisi Masoom Rajkumari Ko Istmall ( use ) kiya! Humari Beti Toh Ab Is Duniya Mein Nahi Rahi Magar Un Ki Yaad Ajj Bhi humare Dilon ( Hearts ) mein Hai! you Won't Be Spared!

Abhay: Wohh... Wo Humm.. Call Cuts

Abhay Is Scared! Scared To Death! Last Time He Used Their Riysat Against them But now Ther Are Two Riyasats Devgadh & Jaigadh! Even Rajgadh Being An ex Riyasat Of Maha sabha Gets the A Good Power & Position Today! 3 Powerful Riyasat & Yuvraj UdayVeer Singh Vs 1 Riyasat & Yuvraj Abhay Dev Singh!

Lets See Who Wins The Battle 😉

Good job!... Interesting plot!👏👏