S.A.S.R.P.A {Invites Only} #4 - Page 73

Originally posted by: molten_lava

And one more advice if you want more people to read your OSs, always try to write it from third person point of view using 'he, she, they'.

Never write it in 'I'.

Maybe it's me, but I cannot bear to read any story which is written entirely from one person's perspective and only uses 'I' everywhere. -.-

and butter bear, yes, people do try to influence your next update. i still get influenced a little, can't help it, but you should not allow them to influence you more. Once they know they are not getting their demands, they will automatically stop their demands.😛

Originally posted by: molten_lava

And butter bear, yes we can make out your age just by the topics you choose to talk about :D

coz each age group has a distinct topic to discuss about. and the way, people introduce themselves also tells a lot about their age.

Originally posted by: waterunder11

omg I cannot read 'I'! i immediately get out of the page! I cant stand it!!!

lava btw i wasnt demanding. It was just a list of my wishes ;)

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

Shoot..do you mind? As in talking to a younger bear>

Originally posted by: molten_lava

oh god! that comment was nowhere directed at you -.-

I loved your list. I like you suggesting things. and that was the reason I said I would only do some of them.

Originally posted by: loveydovey

*munching on cornflakes*

:P

Originally posted by: molten_lava

meaning?😕

Originally posted by: waterunder11

I feel so happy! 😃

Originally posted by: molten_lava

munching on watermelon!😎