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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Disclaimer: I have read n still read many FFs on Maaneet…… if my story does contain or reflect any of others writer work(s)……. It would only be UNINTENDED…….. I NEVER NOR I WISH TO COPY ANYONE WORKS….. BUT IF IT DOES PLEASE LET ME KNOW BEFORE TAKING ANY STEPS…….. THANK YOU

FOR MUSKAN (MUSKANp):….. DON'T SUE ME FOR USING NAMES (MANSI AND MEET)…….. IM JUST INSPIRED BY YOU……..😆

KHURANA MANSION

Morning at 8:30

A smartly dress man walk over to dining table where his family was waiting for him

Man: good morning everyone …N….. Walk toward two particular chair n bend kissing their forehead one after another…….n….said good morning sweethearts

Girls (unison): good morning Papa…… with big smile 😃

Man walk over and takes his seat across from two beautiful angels….yes thts what he called them Angels…. HIS ANGELS……. Wait a minute Maan thought…… where did "HIS" came from........ kash yeh MERE ANGELS hote……..par woh…….his thoughts were broken when he heard his DADI called him

DM: Maan bte…..kya hova……..kaha khoye hai aap 😕

Maan comes back to reality

Maan: kuch nahi dadi…….aap kuch keh rahe the…….he ask changing topic

DM: ha….woh aap ko yaad hai na …….hum picnic pe ja rahe hai aaj?

Girl 1: really DM

Girl 2: nahi DM ………bas aveye hi keh rahi hai………hai ki nahi……said sarcastically

Tht sentence remind everyone of HER…… the exact words…….she would have said if she was-

Girl 1: very funny MEET 😡

Girl 2: I know tht MANSI 😈

Mansi: don't get me started on that 😡

Meet: like u need anything to start on 🤪

Mansi: Meet😡

Meet: Mansi😡

Mansi: give me some respect……..Im older than YOU…….stretching word YOU…..to make her point

Meet: yeah……. N…..looks at her watch …….saying exactly 3 Minutes…….now she stretched "3 MINUTES" ……. To make her point

N everyone on table gave them……….there they go again look 🤪

When nothing (not DADI, not VICKY, nor DEV, nor MEERA, PARI didn't even try) could make them stop……so finally…MAAN decided to intervene

Maan: girls

Mansi and Meet didn't stop 😆

Maan: girls

Nothing 😆

Finally he lost it n yelled …….GIRLS

Mansi and Meet: WHAT…….they snap back unintentionally

Hearing girls snap back at Maan ……..everyone look shock……..including MAAN himself 😲

The silence took over until they heard guards yelling at someone to stop……. More like running after intruder to stop from entering Mansion without permission………but the intruder was screaming more like calling out loud some names and in no sense to hear anything….. and definitely not in sense to stop from entering into Mansion regardless who was chasing…….As intruder approach closer the names became clear…….

Intruder: MANSI ……..MEET…….almost scream entering dining hall area……… giving everyone shock of their life………

Mansi and Meet: OOOHHHHH…….NOOOOOOOO………MOMMMMMMMMM 🤢……….THERE COMES ANOTHER SHOCK for everyone 😲

komlika thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
SO........how was it?..........be honest 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

m going and muskan updating maitri


tum kahan chaliein rakhi 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
@kate .. am good .... howz ur exam prep going
good soul sis
went commenting
sweet heart
epilogue
how is ur work going on
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
sana di..............mujhe bhool gayi????? aur bataiiye.......ki haal chaal hai aapka??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
hii kate..... whr r u frm??? and wht do u do?

@roopali
kahan chali gayi thi???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
aweome one cont soonnnnnn pls no sad cant take another plsssssssss
Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
@priya it's awesome dear
@ sana kahi nehi reading ff and sending pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
hii kate..... whr r u frm??? and wht do u do?

me from scotland
but study in US
where a yu from
aish
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
@priya .. it was good .... next part kab de rahee hoo ....

this better not be a sad story .. otherwise 😈

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