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Posted: 15 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: sami01

kya likhu main..

yeh ek gana hai jo likh rahi hoon...

chaand hai wahi
sitare hain wahi.......wahi gagan

Up in the sky the moon arose

The stars too were twinkling bright

My mind was restless and morose

Amidst the heavenly night !

phir bhi kyun udaas hai udaas mera man..
udaas mera man..
chand hai wahi...

A pretty picture the stars did sketch

In the silence of the night

Across the moonlit sky did stretch

The silver stardust bright !

kaun tha mila mujhe..jo mil ke kho gaya
kaun mere paas aa ke door ho gaya

While I just waited for the morn

Hoping that you would come

My heart told me that you were gone

But I refused to be glum

phool hai wahi ..phool hai wahi
bahar hai wahi..chaman.
phir bhi kyun udaas hai..udaas mera man..

Everything was just the same

Yet something was strange

The air was subdued and tame

But there seemed to be a change

chand hai wahi
The moon arose to shine

Against the velvet sky so fine

My flute was without melody

Alone and deslolate

No tune, no bar, no rhapsody

Like the path of my fate

Th
jis ko dhoondte mere nayan wo kaun hai..

In the bewilderness of my mind

I roam the corners of the land

Continuously trying so hard to find

Like the waves upon the sand

raag hai wahi ..raag hai wahi

Hope sang a lonely song

Through the mists so thin

The tears also came along

Dancing to the violin

charag hai wahi

The candlelight burnt on and on
Until it saw the break of dawn

With the first new born sunray

I hoped peace had come to stay.

wahi chaman..

Everything was the same

Yet something was strange...

phir bhi kyun udaas hai..udaas mera man..
udaas mera man..

The air was subdued and tame

But there seemed to be a change

chand hai wahi...
sitare hain wahi...

I closed my eyes and tried to sleep

But my mind began its journey

To be alone and gently weep

Over things that could never be.........

Sorry Sakhi .....................I took my time over this, but my mood was not setting in. The final picture of the poem........ I hope matched yr thoughts.

Its three in the morning but tomrw is a Sunday and I don't need the alarm.............. 😉 😆

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Arwen11

@Arwen11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#352

I m not too sure of the date 😳 but

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#353

To all my gr8 friends here ..................

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apus fan

@sami01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#354

I closed my eyes and tried to sleep

But my mind began its journey

To be alone and gently weep

Over things that could never be....

taare na jaane ..unchai gagan ki...

aankhein na samjhe gehraai man ki...

pyaase papihe ne aas thee bandhi..

ud gaye badal aagayee aandhi..

gham ne jo cheda ..

dil ne hansi se honth see liyee....

kaise koi jiye....

thanks skepy.....
my fav lines from ur poem..
and yes u do understand..perfectly..🤗
and there is nothing like a good book on gloomy day so here
is something for you..

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pennu

@pennu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#355

Everything was the same

Yet something was strange...

The air was subdued and tame

But there seemed to be a change

I closed my eyes and tried to sleep

But my mind began its journey

To be alone and gently weep

Over things that could never be.......

These are my favourite lines...

As if you read someone's mind...

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#356

Samee... that second pic... flower on book.. was great...lovely... 😛

Now i am thinking what thoughts will be coming to our great poet's mind after seeing this pic...

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#357

I shall write on that picture ...... not today but tomrr 😊

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apus fan

@sami01

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: skeptical
I shall write on that picture ...... not today but tomrr 😊

hum intezaar karenge........but take time koi jaldi nahi hai and skepy my vm latest on one that new serial we both watch has become hit on youtube it has more than 500 views in 3 days 😃am so happy

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#359

Sammy,

I am not surprised the VM is a hit......................... my reasons I have already told you.

If you put up our analyasis up as well with the VM, it will take yr VM further........

But I am happy too. Rahe na rahe hum..............altho Roshan has pilfered the tune from Mozart's compositions, it still remains a beauty by itself...........

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Now I am off to Youtube to give the VM one more click.....😉

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Arwen11

@Arwen11

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#360

sami i couldnt find the vm 😔 instead i found a vm on a kekta couple premeer with meri zaat .....

i m bad at this

waise i concur with skep abt the analysis and oh i loved the pix u put up yesterday and Skep cant to wait read ur poem 😊

EDIT: now i searched again and this time ur vm was the first link given .... i dont get it but i watched it again and now have subscribed to ur channel as well 😊

Edited by Arwen... - 15 years ago

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