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Posted: 15 years ago
An:i am feeling embarrassed. kal waala HW bilkul achcha nahiin hai. writing stories........not my cup of tea.isliye aaj ka hw nahiin kiya. kuch log audience mein baithne ke liye bane hote hain na.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sam111222

An:i am feeling embarrassed. kal waala HW bilkul achcha nahiin hai. writing stories........not my cup of tea.isliye aaj ka hw nahiin kiya. kuch log audience mein baithne ke liye bane hote hain na.😊



Sam.
.. please submit karo... 😊 Yes, writers need readers, but often the readers turn out to be great writers. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
An: ok. just for u.
par yeh bilkul achchi nahiin hai.


Akansha, in the park, was enjoying the cloudy weather. The reasons for a shower were cogent but she knew that it wouldn't rain. The clouds had been playing the hide & seek game for a number of days. Suddenly she heard some noise. She reached the spot. Some people were fighting very badly using their metal rods. On seeing this, Akansha's heart skipped a beat. She thought that she could no longer smile .That scene made her feel like a sere land waiting for the rain.

She couldn't see so much hatred and violence so she ran away from that place and reached her home. She sat beside her window and placed hands on her ears. With so many questions in her eyes, she looked up at the sky. Tears started rolling down her cheeks. She felt a pain in her heart. She felt an unadulterated connection with the Almighty. She cried hard. Her eyes were burning. Her continuously crying had a somnolent effect on her. She fell asleep. After an hour she was awakened by the gelid wind. She opened her eyes and realized that it had rained very heavily.


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sam111222

An: ok. just for u. par yeh bilkul achchi nahiin hai.



Tumhara kaam hai likhana, hum reader ka kaam hai padna and decide karna. So, hume apni duty karne do,... aur tum writing and posting ki duty karo... 😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyyyyyyyyyy
AN & sam.............how r u guys????????????
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sam: Do you paint? Right from the park to the rain in the end, I can visualize the whole story... and you were hiding this beautiful born from us... You should be proud and not embarrassed. 🤗🤗🤗

The story is inspiring me to write a poem... 😊 Will post in a while... Thank you so much for sharing Sam... 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Prinnia, how you doing? How is your mom's health now?

Does anyone know where is Ruhani?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Prinnia😊.is your mom alright now?

An:Thank you🤗. tum achchi ho na isliye tumne aisa kaha. mujhe stories likhna nahiin aata.
i don't know how to paint . par mujhe achhca lagta hai. i have color box. par mujhse hoti hi nahiin
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: an12345678

Hello Prinnia, how you doing? How is your mom's health now?

Does anyone know where is Ruhani?

hello An..............i am fine dear😊......mom is also fine.............now at home..................😃
how r u????????????
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Posted: 15 years ago
yup SAM...............mom is fine now.............how r u??????????

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