2# *The Random-erz* Pg 1...invite only :D - Page 105

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

idk.. i mean dat paragraph is word for word gurll..

Having the SAME idea is DIFFERENT from coming up with the EXACT same sentences and EXACT SAME wording!

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Sangeeta's FF excerpt:

He disentangled his lips and looked at her. Her lips were like soft petals and her eyes were closed as her face earnestly lifted to his. She was tying him in knots.

He slowly traced the one tendril that had fallen on her face. He pushed it aside as he placed gentle kisses on her eyelids. His lips slowly traced a path from her temple to her cheeks and again he captured her tender lips.

He trailed his lips over the pulse that was beating on her neck, on her throat until finally unable to bear his gentle assault her hands went around his neck.

"Prachi, you are beautiful" saying he looked at her as she lay in his bed. This is what he wanted. His wife, in his bed, with him for a lifetime and till eternity and the only person who could be there, was right now in his arms.

She breathed a sigh as he watched her. His one had held her closer as his other hand traced her exposed leg.

"Tell me that you missed me?" he demanded between kisses.

"Yes" she sighed still with her eyes closed and reeling from the emotions that were running riot within her.

"Tell me, what I want to hear?" he breathed as his lips traced the shell of her ear. She shivered but her voice would not come out

Diva's:

He disentangled his lips and looked at her. Her lips were like soft petals and her eyes were closed as her face earnestly lifted to his.

He slowly traced the one tendril that had fallen on her face. He pushed it aside as he placed gentle kisses on her eyelids. His lips slowly traced a path from her temple to her cheeks and again he captured her tender lips.

[Just took one line out to make it look different?!] He trailed his lips over the pulse that was beating on her neck, on her throat until finally unable to bear his gentle assault her hands went around his neck.

This is what he wanted. His wife, with him for a lifetime and till eternity and the only person who could be there, was right now in his arms.

She breathed a sigh as he watched her. His one hand held her closer as his other hand traced her leg.

"Tell me that you missed me....." he demanded between kisses.

she sighed still with her eyes closed and reeling from the emotions that were running riot within her.

"Tell me, what I want to hear........" he breathed as his lips traced the shell of her ear. She shivered but her voice would not come out.

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I don't feel the need to explain my actions further. If you still aren't satisfied, how about you guys simply go and check out the two chapters and reach your own conclusions?! The link wasn't just provided for show...it's not about copying concepts or every single part...it's about cutting out pieces from somebody's work, then claiming them as your own. And in this case, those are some huge 'pieces'.

Any further issues regarding my note, drop me a PM and we can talk.

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

😲😲😲 oki reading jus this is like saying what?? you know what i mean... are those madz' words saz....?😊😊 .....

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

yup.. madz wordz on red..

nd u seee how da paragraphzz r word 4 word..😕😕😕

Originally posted by: soumya_dmglover

ok guys i gtg....i'nm really hungry....c ya later....n rav do pm me d link of d new thread okies....bye tc

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

!!

it'll be in the last page of this thread hunny.... okes... love you

Originally posted by: soumya_dmglover

ok guys i gtg....i'nm really hungry....c ya later....n rav do pm me d link of d new thread okies....bye tc

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

WWOW! w actually had 5 whole minutes of Slience..lolzzz

where is everybody!