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Posted: 16 years ago
Haiiii wonderful Shobby jee !
Truly mindblowing !!!
LOVED ittttt 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago


Seems like someone forgot our conversation yesterday 😆
No calling me di from now on .. Call me Gina 😛 or Jaani ..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey



Seems like someone forgot our conversation yesterday 😆
No calling me di from now on .. Call me Gina 😛 or Jaani ..

Oh yeahhhhh! Heheheheh.....I have short term memory.....sorry Jaani
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Posted: 16 years ago
Helloz everyone!!! Just a brief intro of myself...Most of you guyz already know me and those who don't know me yet...I'm Farhana and I became an ATBian last week (thnx to Kiran Di😃). I joined IF last month and I love it here!!! I also hv an FF called "Kyon ho gaya na, Ishq!". Well I guess that's all about me and I'm looking forward to my time here as ATBian with u guyz...=)
take care
Luv,
Farhana
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Posted: 16 years ago
how does it feel being an ATBian?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sv_4eva

Helloz everyone!!! Just a brief intro of myself...Most of you guyz already know me and those who don't know me yet...I'm Farhana and I became an ATBian last week (thnx to Kiran Di😃). I joined IF last month and I love it here!!! I also hv an FF called "Kyon ho gaya na, Ishq!". Well I guess that's all about me and I'm looking forward to my time here as ATBian with u guyz...=)

take care
Luv,
Farhana



A big warm welcome to Farhana dearest 😃

Great to c u here.. yes yes.. I know u are an amazing FF writer...😉 keep up ur good work dearie..😉
So u are a beautiful bugger from now one.. pls read the 1st page for more info..

Hugs 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Ooo shobby jee !
Kaisi hai aap?
Haii, post this in the SD romantic imaginary scenes too =) ( if u want )




Gina di😛

i m doing good thanks.. thanks for liking it..

ok will post it now.. hope the readers don't get bored.. coz I dunno if they read it on besharami thread.. 😆



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: svforever

OMG! So cute! Haiiiii....mai marjawa.....write some more.



Radika didi.....

tq so much...

u know di.. I had planned something..

I m not gonna continue Kismat.. n I'll start to write more scenes like this..

is it ok?😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shobbybee



Radika didi.....

tq so much...

u know di.. I had planned something..

I m not gonna continue Kismat.. n I'll start to write more scenes like this..

is it ok?😳

why are you calling me di, di? I'm younger to you.
Whatttttttt? I like the part when you said that you will write more scenes like this but I don't like the fact that you are thinking of stopping Kismat. It's such an entertaining ff......not to forget cute and lovely....please don't end it....please for me😭
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Sagar Vidya Farmhouse Rainscene- Recreation

After the persuasion from Sindoora, Sagar took Vidya to their farmhouse, to tell her that he wants a divorce from her. He couldn't accept her as his wife. He couldn't believe that his family had married him off during such a time when he was ill and completely out of state of mind. He doesn't even know her and from what he had seen, the two of them weren't a good match. Even though the rest of the family adores her, he couldn't see himself spending rest of his life with a girl like Vidya. Yes, she was a good girl, but the two of them are from two different worlds. He was a big, famous businessman, and she was a small village girl who couldn't even read nor write. She doesn't fit in his lifestyle nor in his life. And he didn't want to ruin his life nor her life either. So it's better if the two of them gets separated, so they both can live their life properly.
Both of them stood outside the house, in the garden.

-Vidya, tumhe yeh ghar pasand hai?
-Haan bahut accha hai ... Leken aap mujhe yahan kyun layen hai ?
-Vidya mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai. Ek zaroori baat hai...
-Jee boliye...
-Main ... Mujhe tumse ..
Suddenly it started to rain heavily. Vidya looked up to the sky and started to smile. She remembered how Sagar had taught her to enjoy the rain, and remembered how the two of them used to play around and dance in the rain.
-Vidya, barish rahi hain, chalo undar jae. Chalo, Sagar said quickly and was about to go inside the house when Vidya stopped him
and held his hand.
He turned around and looked at her with and surprisingly enough, she was smiling.
-Nahi .., she said.
-Yeh tum kya keh rahi hoon? Chalo undar chalo, barish bahut tez hai, he said.
-Toh kya hua? She said and smiled. She let go of his hand and twirreled around in the rain. She smiled and looked up to the sky.
Sagar looked at Vidya, who was twirling and laughing. She looked ... different. Her red saree had gotten wet and her hair was let down and also wet. Somehow, he felt something.
-Aaye aap bhi mere saath keliye, bahut mazaa aa raha hain. Aaye nah, she said and took his both hand and reached them out in the air.

Sagar was surprised by her behavior. This was the first time he saw her smiling and laughing and being so forward. Usually she was always obeying everyone else and nodding all the time and didn't dare to say against anyone. He liked this side of Vidya.
Vidya reached out her hands and gathered water in her hands, then she splashed it on Sagars face.
-Vid..., he said but then he saw her face. She was laughing and smiling. She looked ... breathtaking. Sagar smiled. He had never really noticed Vidyas beauty. Wow, he thought to himself.

Sagar came closer to Vidya, and put his hand gently on her shoulder. She felt a warm touch and was surprised. She slowly turned around and saw her husband in front of her. The husband whom she loved more than her life. The husband whom she had imagined living a real married life with after his operation and hoping he would recover. He did recover, but he just had forgotten about her. About their time together.
She looked into his eyes. He was looking at her differently, this was a new look. She got scared, and looked down. Then to her surprise, Sagar took his hand and gently put it on Vidyas cheek. She looked up, into his eyes and both of them have an eyelock. He came closer and closer. She closed her eyes. Sagar smiled. Her innocence, her beauty was mindblowing. He kissed her on the forehead. Her eyes were still closed. He then kissed her on peck of her nose. A happy but still scaring feeling came to Vidya. She slowly opened her eyes, and there she saw Sagar who's face was only an inch away from hers. He was leaning into for a kiss. She then quickly backed away, and was about to go inside. But Sagar got hold of her hand. He pulled her closer to him. She closed her eyes. She was happy but still scared somehow. What if this is just a dream?
Sagar pulled her closer to him, and then kissed her on her shoulder. He then kissed her on the neck. Vidya who's eyes were still closed, was smiling. Sagar then kissed her on the cheek, and once again came very close to her. He was just an inch away. Vidya had a string of hair on her face, Sagar slowly removed it. And then Vidya opened her eyes. This was no dream, it can't be. She looked into his eyes. He looked into her eyes and was mesmerized by her beauty. He once again kissed her on the forehead. She smiled. He then kissed her on the peck of her nose. She was still smiling. And then he very slowly and gently kissed her on her lips. She looked up and couldn't believe what he had just done. A tear fell from her eyes. She moved back.
-Vidya , Sagar said slowly.
She smiled and quickly ran into the house. Sagar smiled. He then looked upto the sky and reached out his hands. He screamed Vidyas name out of joy. Vidya who was inside the house heard him screaming her name. She smiled. This was the happiest day of her life...



Ok so what did ya think ? be honest ... 😳

omg!! i luved it!! soo much better than the original version!! wow!!

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