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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Nyc update dear...
Eagerly waiting for nxt update...
Update soon...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Rishhh 😳😳 in love with this character
Suspence??? Should I guess
Aww Kay js such a cute stuff
she and her crazy nuttella
Waiting to see rish and Kay's chemistry
Update soonach
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Part-4

I dont know


Rish pov


I dont knw but their was some thing about kay no that dosent mean i like her is just she every time caught my attention its not because how hot she is or how beautiful she is how her body is perfect its about her beautiful eyes which say alot...i told to my best friend rohit




Yeah that only means you like her...rohit said


No not at all like when she is with jeenie she live life she laugh she jokes you can see all her innonce but when she is with me or anybody else she is so different she mocks nd insult every one it seems like she wore too many masks nd i dnt knw y but i think that she needs me...i said


What are you saying dude...!!! Rohit said


You wont understand... i replied


Whatever...rohit said


Btw why are you here i said to rohit for changing topic


Yeah i was telling iam gng for a club will you come he asked


It was bit strange cause rohit never ask me he always order he was the one i can blindly rely on he was so honest when it come to relations


Are you asking...i said


Yeah cause the way you were talking it seems like you are already high...rohit said sarcastically



And then we both started laughing



But seriously you are coming right..rohit said


Yeah..i said


Cool meet me in 30 rohit said


Cool i blurted


I was thinking about kay why she act so wiered then rohit came


Are you okay he said


Yeah why?? I said


You were zoning out again he said with smirk on his face


No its not like that..i said


Common i knw you very well he said


Whatever i said


Then we both headed towards dance floor we were enjoying partying too hard but my jaw dropped when i saw her she was with some guy i dont knw who was he his height was almost 6.5 with the dark black eyes nd broad shoulder he was good looking and he was holding jeenie hands for dear life she didnt noticed me nd left the club nd i dnt knw why but i was feeling so much angry



I left pub nd headed towards home whole ride i was thinking who that boy was



I reached home got freshenup nd was trying to sleep but i was not able god knows why nd finally after hour and half i dozzed off

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Too short chp i vl be posting one tomorrow morning and what do you think Rish like kay ????ummm you ppl get to knw soon till that keep liking commenting scraping
Nd kindly buddy for pm
Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
hehehehe
rish is like rey
ya i think rish likes kay
hehehe
lgta h rish ne kay k bhai se hi jealousy pal li
update soon dearrr
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Woah...
Rish lyks Kay...
Exciting...
When Rish will get to know abt dat boy then... 😆
Eagerly waiting for nxt update...
Update soon...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Part-5


Weekend


Finally sunday the week spended well college was fun no doubt that idiot did many shitty things to irritate but i love mocking nd insulting him one of his friend rohit he is nice lad we talked bit he was very calm we became friends yeah right friends cause we both are directioner and also he sings very well he had promised he will sing song written by me but rish he is very irritating i hate him from bottom of my heart jeenie always says that he likes me but is just i think he like irritating me however today is sunday no one to irritate me

Are you ready???? Sid asked

Yeah but where we are gng??? I asked sid

You will get to know...sid said

Arrgghh!! Tell me now i said

Pateince patience babe he said

I groaned

Fine i said

Lets go he said by holding his hand

I grabbed nd we walked

Sid was so nervous in whole ride in whole ride he hardly speaked
I tried to knw but he didnt said anything

After 20 mins sid stopped the car when i look outside we were front of some club

Are you sure you are taking me to this club?? I asked sid still in shock

Yeah.. he said

You are worst brother taking your little sister in club i said with the fake hurt

Finally all this was for listen this he said saracastically

What ever i said

Then he parked the car we headed inside

You wait here i vl be back in 5 sid said

I nodded nd then he went



SID POV




Kay is very strong girl the way she has maintained her self after that incident is quite different like she has created so many walls she only get it of when she is with me or with jeenie she is very rude with everyone but she is the girl with purest nd kind heart i wish some day she will break all her walls nd start living life any ways today iam gng to introdue my girl friend to kay yeah girlfriend she is very sweet caring nd mocky which i love the most kay and smirl has this similar quality of mocking everyone and iam shit scared cause kay will kill me cause iam dating swirl from last one week nd havent told kay cause i was nt sure so today i have set up meeting so she will meet her nd i hope she wont mock swirl and now iam waiting for swirl she will he here any minute



Kay POV



Where the f**k you are i called sid as iam waiting here from last 15 mins

Will be back in min he said

You should or else vl leave then he cutted phn

Hey someone said

Hii rohit i said

What you doing??? here he asked

Chiling with big b... wbu... i said

Ooo like wise he said

Would you like to join us rohit said

Us??? I said

Yeah me nd Rish

Better i vl die i said


He laughed whats your problem with him?? He asked


I dont knw i just hate him..i said


I knw


Thn sid come with some chick


I knew it I murmured


What?? Rohit said


Nothing i have to go i vl talk to you later


Okay bye he said and left


Sid reach



So kay this is smirl



Nd smirl this is kay my little sister sid introduced



Nd she is??? I asked



My friend sid said



Friend or a girl friend???

Same thing.. sid said with the look that he will tell later

But i igorned that look completely
Nd faced swirl she was looking so confused

Listen whoever you are if you try to hurt my brother or to separate us i vl kill you i said to swirl

Dont worry about it that wont happen swirl said with a smile

Nd then i faced sid he was smiling proudly

And if you vl hurt her i will kick you ass n throw you out of house i said to sid

Aww i got sacred plzz someone save me sid said scarcastically nd three of us started laughing swirl was great girl nd i dont think she will ever cheat on my brother if she will i will make her pay for that and she is great writer she had written some awsome books nd iam already liking her nd we have decided to write one book together nd trust me it will be holy shit

Nice to meet you swirl said

Likewise i said nd we waved our bye

So do you like her sid said we are still in club

Iam nt talking to you i said

Come on u liked her sid said

Yeah but that dosent mean i allow you to date

You cant do this to me you are not heartless sid said

I am

Plzz sid said

Okay but promise you wont change nd i vl always be your priority i said

Always no one can get the love n protection you get idiot sid said nd grabbed me in bear hug


Club started being crowded so we decided to leave sid grabbed my hand nd dragged me with him
On whole car he told me about how he met swirl nd he havent proposed her to be his girl friend nd he will be doing it soon then i talked to jeenie told her about swirl she is eager to meet her she was so annoyed with sid so he told her he will make her meet soon nd she was very happy.

You better keep your promise i said to sid nd i left

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Sorry for late update i hope you guys are liking it

Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Sid brought her sister in the club
He himself introduced her as a friend
Awesome update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome update dear
Sid brought her sister in club
He himself introduced her as a friend
Waiting for the next update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
awsm update yr
i liked brother sister boanding
rohits frndship wth kay is niceee
swril seems nice girl
update soon dearr...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Aww cute
love it rish jealousy
update soon

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