SwaRon SS : Love In A Cruise *updated Ch 2 pg 5 (10/1)*

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Rupita
last part was awesome😛...do pm me whenever u upadate...thank u👍🏼

Thank you..😊

Will pm u.!

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: 3sisters
Awesome update loved it

Thankxx!!😊

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Shonaalii
Thnkxx

Thanks to u!

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: mythreyii
Heya ayu
Beautifully written..
The whole flashback was crisp and clear without dragging..
Loved how swayum was in solace jus by being with her
And when he asks her to listen to his song was all the more sweet. Really loved it the cruise is like a value addition to the ss. Swayum was acting to b drunk is the surprise element.
And the way he startes convo in the morning was really nice.
The last part was all the more good when he ram behind her to console her jus like she did..
Beautifully written..
Awaiting next one badly its jus growing interesting

Hey.. thank you!!

Ya I didn't want to drag the flashback much. Glad u liked his demands and the cruise is adding to the fun is like a compliment to me so thanks so much!

Glad u liked the surprise element😳

Happy u liked the ending one too!

Thanks again , I will make u wait less and hope I match up to what u are expecting😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Chapter one..
They are badly hurt..
But glad to know that they found solace in each other's company..
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Swayam was acting...
Nice move..
Loved it

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ujwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

hey awesome updates

1st chappy was really cute

Plz PM me when u update

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Chapter one..
They are badly hurt..
But glad to know that they found solace in each other's company..
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

Ya they are very much hurt..but finding calmness with each other. Thanks!😊