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angelofthelord.

@angelofthelord.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

H i.

Look who's back! Yes, me. 🐷

I honestly don't know what I've written. I was too drained from my first entrance exam to make any sense. So apologies for a what could be a bad quality update.

Now, many of you guys were wondering(/wishing?) that Nisha was screwing with Swayam and that the child was not his. I say, why not?

So please, please don't kill me. 🥺

Do leave your precious reviews. Cuz, to be honest, that's the only thing which will inspire me to continue this story (that or if someone holds me at gunpoint.)

Lots of love.

Cheers.

P.S. Add this ID for PMs.

Edited by itsneverlupus. - 9 years ago

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Reserved. B|

You do have chocolates with you right?

^Unreserve^

This made me Sad. And nothing else. You can just go on eating chocolates for your pleasure, because for now I think I will keep ugly people in safety of Azkaban.

You didnt move story much, you know! It didnt help.

And I loved Swayam and Sharon's close heartfelt concealed-yet-laying-it-all-out conversation. But thats not gonna ease your killing, if you are willing to get killed in the future 😉

You are still the Wormtail and I am still the Padfoot! 😛

You ofcourse know what I mean!

Chitra :)

Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 9 years ago

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angelofthelord.

@angelofthelord.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
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You do have chocolates with you right?

Yep. ☺️

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Up abovethe world so high!

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Oh this is sad..
I still believe that nisha is lying..
Hope this turns out to be true..

I so wish that sharon could have told him aloud..

Thanks 4 d pm

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

So all my predictions regarding Nisha and her child have to just die in thin air 😕

Reserved for now..

*Unreserve*

You've just twisted this story so much by now and surely I'm going to feel too annoyed and sad and irritated and I dunno what if Swayam is the father for real(God I'm still hoping! ) but then I cannot deny that I loved SwaRon in this part, somehow this sad and melancholic atmosphere you've created appeared beautiful with both of them there to read each other's minds and those unsaid words.

I really have no idea on how its going to proceed from here on so I can just wait for you to bring them out clean(by clean I mean without torturing your characters and your readers) of this ugly mess.

As always unpredictable and brilliant writing Nishi :) (Just too sad 🤔😒 )

Update soonish please...

Shreya <3

Edited by Spark.Shreya - 9 years ago

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

I didn't know how i missed this, but i love it.

You capture silence and sadness perfectly in this piece.

I don't know if i can say anything anymore that would describe this any more perfectly.

Neet

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Awesome update..so beautiful.. 👏

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SHAhira-Swaron

@SHAhira-Swaron

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

I still can't beleive what i read Erhh the update held so much pain&helplesnes at 1 point when sh asked THEN WHY my heart just sank&the last part I LOVE U my tears started running im going to kill u for making this unpredictable Amidst all these i loved t