||SwaRon FF: Broken Wings|| - Page 78

Originally posted by: .nerfherder

What wonderful timing!

Wonderful timing cuz I had just finished with my first entrance exam yesterday and came home to your chapter, albeit the last one. And what a wonderful chapter it was.

Brilliant writing Chitra. There was such an impeccable balance in it, not too emotional but not passive either. I am impressed. I'm not sure of what exactly stood out (perhaps the realistic approach) but boy am I impressed.

I have a feeling the text is from Rey. 😆

Wow. The end of Broken Wings. This has been a superb journey Chi, thanks. 🤗

Also, sorry. I didn't realise you posted your updates from your mobile. I know how much of a pain it is to format through mobile. -.-

Wanted to edit yesterday but was famished.

Mee firsht. B|

Cheers.
Solo

Originally posted by: i_yatharthk

May be 1st comment

Missed it.
Will unrest soonsoon
But this was hell of a journey...chitra Di...thanks for giving such amazing thing to read

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

It was so good to finally see a PM from you...And this was the last chapter? Hadn't really expected that...but then all good things come to an end and so did this...:(

Its been a beautiful journey and heartiest congratulations on reaching the last page of this SS.I feel lucky for having gotten a chance to read your work.Thank you so much for that.

The best part about this chapter was that it was so much realistic and very much relatable in every aspect,be it from Sharon's point of view,her father's or Swayam's .Considering the difficult situation they were all put into , a drift from there original selves wouldn't have been surprising ,especially in case of Sharon but its just wonderful how you preseved the essence of all the characters right till the end.That surely requires skills and you've truly utilized yours to its complete potential.The brilliant outcome says it all.

Swayam and Sharon's relationship has been a blend of the most ideal yet the most realistic bond. I know I would be being a little bias here but I feel Swayam was a little more responsible for holding them together so tight,keeping his promise of never letting her go ,come what may..He never blamed Sharon for anything inspite of knowing that he was never at fault, even at times when her ignorance became intolerable for him,...but then having said that it was Sharon and her love for him even in those difficult times that kept his faith in their relation intact and assured him that they would overcome it all just to be together again in every which way. Breathing such love is truly a dream come true and your writing made it all the more blissful!

You've done an amazing job with the way you've written Sharon and her father's equation.Surely it would take time to mend,it may not be the same ever but the end gives you hope that its gonna get better...And it really feels satisfying to know that as All's well that ends well:)

Sharon may not have still accepted Amaira completely and that's totally understandable but the fact that she's making an effort towards it is great to know .

Both Swayam and Sharon have dealt with too much now but with both of them always there for each other,one can always be assured that even if there are storms in their lives,good days are meant to come sooner or later :)

The last line left me baffled...but if Sharon was giggling I'm sure its going to be something interesting that's coming our way.

Eagerly looking forward to read more of your works.Keep writing as you're made for it:)

Much love,

Shreya❤️

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its a beautiful story..
And a awesome update..
Amazingly wriiten..brilliant work
It has everything..which is important in any story..
specially swaron story..passion, intensity,happiness,frustration,misunderstanding,pain nd Love
Thank u for giving us a wonderful story..loved it

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Oh wow this is great..
Finally everything is smooth..
Loved it..

Shar accepted Amaiira ..
Really sweet of her..

Thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: srinidhi94

wonderful...like always...

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life

Awesome chapter :)

I can't believe it's the last one

Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.

And you left me in tears.

I am not saying this just for the sake of it, but i was reading this on the train back from university, and i had tears running down my cheek. I don't know how or which part made me emotional, probably the part where Sharon didn't know where she stood with her own father, that broke my heart. To see him carry sadness his entire life, and to see him leaving with uncertainty to the states really pained me. This is going to sound weird Chitra but for me you turned the story so much that it left me actually invested so much more in Gautum's story and not as much Swayam and Sharon's anymore. Please don't take that as a bad thing, its just the way Gautum recounted his past in the previous chapter and the way he tried to re-affirm his love for Sharon, that his love never chained for her regardless of all other things, but then having to leave without knowing if she would ever want him back just broke my heart. Maybe because that father daughter relationship carried more weight and sorrow so it could complete your story.

All things said and done, its been such a beautiful journey reading this story, i have been a huge fan since the first chapter and till the very last. Wishing more stories from you because your too good!

Neet