||SwaRon FF: Broken Wings|| - Page 77

Its been a beautiful journey and heartiest congratulations on reaching the last page of this SS.I feel lucky for having gotten a chance to read your work.Thank you so much for that.

The best part about this chapter was that it was so much realistic and very much relatable in every aspect,be it from Sharon's point of view,her father's or Swayam's .Considering the difficult situation they were all put into , a drift from there original selves wouldn't have been surprising ,especially in case of Sharon but its just wonderful how you preseved the essence of all the characters right till the end.That surely requires skills and you've truly utilized yours to its complete potential.The brilliant outcome says it all.

Swayam and Sharon's relationship has been a blend of the most ideal yet the most realistic bond. I know I would be being a little bias here but I feel Swayam was a little more responsible for holding them together so tight,keeping his promise of never letting her go ,come what may..He never blamed Sharon for anything inspite of knowing that he was never at fault, even at times when her ignorance became intolerable for him,...but then having said that it was Sharon and her love for him even in those difficult times that kept his faith in their relation intact and assured him that they would overcome it all just to be together again in every which way. Breathing such love is truly a dream come true and your writing made it all the more blissful!

You've done an amazing job with the way you've written Sharon and her father's equation.Surely it would take time to mend,it may not be the same ever but the end gives you hope that its gonna get better...And it really feels satisfying to know that as All's well that ends well:)

Sharon may not have still accepted Amaira completely and that's totally understandable but the fact that she's making an effort towards it is great to know .

Both Swayam and Sharon have dealt with too much now but with both of them always there for each other,one can always be assured that even if there are storms in their lives,good days are meant to come sooner or later :)

The last line left me baffled...but if Sharon was giggling I'm sure its going to be something interesting that's coming our way.

Eagerly looking forward to read more of your works.Keep writing as you're made for it:)

Much love,

Shreya❤️

I can't believe it's the last one

I am not saying this just for the sake of it, but i was reading this on the train back from university, and i had tears running down my cheek. I don't know how or which part made me emotional, probably the part where Sharon didn't know where she stood with her own father, that broke my heart. To see him carry sadness his entire life, and to see him leaving with uncertainty to the states really pained me. This is going to sound weird Chitra but for me you turned the story so much that it left me actually invested so much more in Gautum's story and not as much Swayam and Sharon's anymore. Please don't take that as a bad thing, its just the way Gautum recounted his past in the previous chapter and the way he tried to re-affirm his love for Sharon, that his love never chained for her regardless of all other things, but then having to leave without knowing if she would ever want him back just broke my heart. Maybe because that father daughter relationship carried more weight and sorrow so it could complete your story.

All things said and done, its been such a beautiful journey reading this story, i have been a huge fan since the first chapter and till the very last. Wishing more stories from you because your too good!

Neet

BW are coming to an end...it was a nice journey and the way you unraveled all the mysteries was outstanding.👏 The story has been very realistic and very emotional.There weren't the mushy romance mostly but it strikes a chord in your heart...Very good story and waiting for your new works.

The message was from Rey,I guess😳

so so sooo sorry fr dis late rply... sorryyy ,... i just loveddd d chap... update soon 😃