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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

I can manage only one thing right now...

I want the next part really soon... Or I can't concentrate in life!

I need to know who is amaira!! Like real soon!!

Update soon di!! *press post reply thinking who the hell is amaira! :P*

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i_yatharthk

@i_yatharthk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

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What Di a tab bit longer...I was here thinking ki ye chalta hi jaye update and you are sating it got a tad bit longer...BTW awesome update as always they are no need to say...but the way swayam blasted on Sharon this does seem quite serious...and the frustration of swayam on the situations happening in his life clearly seen by the statement swayam shekhawat doesn't need appoinent tobmeet reyansh I had hoped for a time ki will getva reyam convoy but it turned out to be better...and I can totally imagine how swayam must be feeling after looking and Sharon's baby bump... He must have felt to goband hug her from behind and caress her bump...but...once again fate...do update soon...I think this amaira is someone related to Sharon or swayam...and her surname is either raiprakash or shekhawat from what you have written...am I right about it?? Do update soon Di ye cliffhanger jyada lamba matt khichna please...

Edited by i_yatharthk - 9 years ago

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Oh boy.. Now, what do I tell you except this is a wonderful update?. Again, questions dancing mid air. Loved the update.

Thanks for the pm

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bhaumi_vrushan

@bhaumi_vrushan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Awsm update. Just loved it... Plz reveal the suspense now can't wait for dis... N hope den evrythng will be fine between swaron...keep writing so many FF like dis... N we swaron/VruShan fans always appreciate n support u... Love u...

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

So many mysteries!..Who is Amaira?..What test reports?...Why Rey has come in to the picture suddenly..What does he know?? ..You are too good at building suspense..This update has increased my curiosity to yet another level...Poor Swaron ..in so much pain..hoping for some light moments between them in the next part..I am surely glued to this story...can't wait for the next ...Please update soon!!..

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Trupti Tamore

@VruShan_FanGirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Awesome part

loving the way you are taking the story forward

at least sharon is comfortable with Stephie (prefect choice Charlie)

swayam is so confusing me so don't know kya bolu actual mein and waiting when he is going to tell the truth and sharon is so sad and the reason is she don't know the truth

Sharon my god she is so confused about baby should go on him or not so much hurt she is

bedroom scene do hurt man he is taking permission to go in but his question was damn good yitna accha tha ki use sochne me majboor kiya did he affect her

new entry ab patient kon hai and dr. kon hai dii

khali fhukt sharon pe bhadka gaya ek toh khud bata nahi raha hai aur uss par hi gussa kiya and rula bhi diya

I apologize i didn't comment on last updates bcz i was hospitalized

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gsk4

@gsk4

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

As I told you before an emotional roller costar. I remember scene between Swayan and Sharon in D3, when Sharon checked his call. But then they were not in a realationship. But now he is her husband yaar. you can check the phone. My heart is still going dhak,dhak,dhak. Wow please upload tomorrow. I can't wait. 😊. And I dont want Sharon to keep on crying for everything. More than Amaira, i felt bad Swayam, shouting at her. Bringing in Rey in the story, so Amaira is connected with him. I always felt nothing is above our own happiness and life not even promises given to anyone, but story has to move on..Please please upload fast.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#228

I haven't read the update but I just saw 'Dr. Jatin' and laughed 'coz I have a classmate of the same name and I can't even imagine him as a doctor. 🤣

Reserved.

Beautiful banner, btw.

-edited.

Okay, after reading the chapter, the Dr. Jatin part was probably not the part to laugh at. 🐷

I like Stephie, and I'm surely not offended on having to imagine Charlie in that role. 😆 Now, you involved creative writing and BBC Sherlock in this chapter. And well, this is one of my personal favourites now. ☺️

Swayam's getting a bit edgy now and with Amaira entering the scenario, I've decided not to speculate anything. I'm just gonna put my trust in you and read on. 🤣

Cheers,

Rhapsody. xxx

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@rose1998

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Wow. Once again many cliffhangers.
The suspense is killing me but due to these I am hooked to the story .
The chapter was very nice Chitra.
update fast.😊

Edited by rose1998 - 9 years ago

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Hey chitra
Tats an owsm update
Now all I want is d next part
The suspence is killing me
Well d update was long and good
Now who is this amaira pull down the screen fast I want to know what happened that swayum shouted on her
Baby bump part was too cute
Now update soon

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