TaaRey FF :: Not What We Expected :: Discontinued. (Note on pg 27)

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lechu10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

awesome concept... super prologue ...:-) :-)

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praneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

awesome update

nice idea

swayam and taani's bond is kinda cute

update soon

thanks for the pm

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Trisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Thanks for the pm

Awwwesome concept

Thank God your exams are over, was eagerly waiting for your "bakwaas" 😛

Loved it from the top

Awww, Taayam. Oops Swayam in shock😲

Loved her dialogue, and their reaction

Wo ow Taarey are gonna be rocking😆

Character sketch is awesome

Rey is shocking and moody but love Taani

Swaron together, that's nice. Loved Swayam's character

And Taani's innocence 🤣, loved her personality

Sara uff 🤢

Eagerly waiting to read further

Please do update soon and pm me

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princess1926

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Stupid!!!
U never told me that you were around another story!!
Anyways, this was awesome!!
Totally loved re prologue and the CS!!!
Update asap

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Tinu Mariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

wow nice prologue

luvd Swayam he is sooo cute..

Taani with attitude.. great..

Rey and sara in a relationship😲

plz continue soon and thanks for the pm

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dh19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

nice and itneresting prologue

loved this taani

and loved to see two swords in one house

do cont soon

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anzana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Dis was really amazing...
Amazing concept..
hell excited to see battle 😛 .
Taani answering Rey hehehe bang on..
Hmm swayam nd Taani will mke a bond ahan will irritate Rey ( plz think on dis )..
Rey in rlnship well dis was unexpected..

TaaRey's Tashan oommggg ..
plzz updte soon.