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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

u reminded me of last day of d3. 😭 awsm os... keep writing...

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

U made me nostalgic...old days...thankyou for this os...

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..RiSha..

@..RiSha..

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

hey shivani first of all i would say your are an phenomenal writer

and this os was divine and calm

reminded me of the last day of d3 though this scene dint touch me then but after reading the os i feel overwhelmed

i liked sharons pov more i dono why

i could sense the longing she had to be back where she belongs

you portrayed both of their feelings soo well

do write more

P.S- cant believe its your second os

keep it up

love ^_^

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Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Beautiful os..
U gv a perfect swaron endng...
D way u descrb thr views ws amazng...
I went bck to swaron memories thr cnfsn.
Thr frst kiss,thr twirlng hugs...
The list z nvr endng...
Do write more..
Thnx fr pm

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

This was a very beautiful OS. Amazingly written. Back to Swaronland. Do write more. Thanks for the pm.

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

i really liked or rather loved the OS..

the closure fr swaron was one of the worst scenes of D3!!

u potryed it beautifully..

the longing , the desperation lovely..

if in future u write more do pm me!

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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Nostalgia!!!

Such Wonderful Writing... Each Detail is jus so Amazingly Portrayed!!!

I miss Swaron More...

Wish we could Have Vrushan back again...

Its so Well Written... Such a Treat to read :)

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Beautiful os

It was better dan d original d3 scene..that scene was so rushed😡

Loved this one😊

keep writing

do write more on swaron-vrushan😛

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

I still didnt watch that scene till now😛

And u gave me a awesome replacement...

Its beautiful..i loved the style of ur writing...

keep writing ... now im waiting for more from u...

Love

Keechu :)

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NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Its really a nyc os u made me relieve d swaron journey once agn it was nostalgic n wat a coincidence yesterday was swaron confession anniversary n I read dis os today so happy after reading dis n sorry for d late reply

Thanks 😊