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Hey Peeps...!!! I am here with an OS. The concept is given by hima di [Hima_Taarey] . I penned it down. Hope you people will enjoy reading it.



"Tanya my love my baby. Where have you gone ? Do you have any idea how much your rey is missing you ? Come back soon na baby.Please come back. Your rey is missing you. And I know my tanya is missing me too." said rey innocently caressing tanya's photo and smiling through tears.Rey continued talking with her photo cutely like a child.

"Swayam I can't see him like this. I want my son reyansh back." said mrs.Singhania sobbing.

"We have to do something mom. Otherwise we might loose him." said swayam as tears welled up in his eyes.

"Rey..." called Mrs. Singhania.

"Mom when will tanya be back ? Tell her to come soon. Please call her and tell her that her rey is missing her. " said rey keeping his head on her mother's lap.

"Beta she is not going to come back. She died beta." answered Mrs. Singhania caressing his son's hair and crying.

"No you all are lying. My tanya can never leave me. I know that. You all are lying.I am katti with you all." said rey angrily and got up with a jolt.

"Tanya look na. They all are saying you died. I know my baby you can't leave your rey alone. Come back and prove them wrong. " continued rey talking to tanya's photo innocently.

Rey's mom just left from there crying harder and sharon went to calm her mother-in-law. And swayam just stood there standing at the door entrance. HE was not getting what should he do to bring his brother back to normal. After his brother's beloved wife tanya died in a car accident,rey lost his mental balance and landed up in depression. Swayam just left from there feeling bad that he is not able to do anything for his brother.
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"Mom and Sharon. Come fast na. We are going to temple not for a party. " said swayam waiting for them in the hall.

"We are here. Let's go." said sharon and moved.

"We have to be back before rey would wake up." said mrs.Singhania.

"We will mom." answered swayam.

After doing pooja they were coming out of the temple. They saw a girl neatly dressed in a salwar suit and she was giving some food to the beggers and as she completed she turned towards the beggers and waved them a bye and left from there. Swaron and Mrs.Singhania were rooted to their places. She was completely looking like tanya. Suddenly something struck in sharon's mind and she ran towards that girl and swayam and mrs.singhania followed her.

"Hey wait...!! Listen.." called sharon.

That girl turned towards her "Yess ?" asked that girl confusingly

"Hi I am sharon singhania and he is my husband swayam singhania and she is my mother in law Mrs.Kavya Singhania." introduced sharon.

"Ummm hi.. I am taani." replied taani.

"Taani... I know you might be confused why am I telling you all this. But can we have a word with you.?" pleaded sharon.

"Yes sure say" answered taani.

"We need your help taani."

"Help ? What help?

Then Sharon made her understand the situation.

"I am feeling bad for him.But in this situation how can I help you." asked Taani.

"YOu are a look alike of tanya dear." said sharon and showed her a picture of tanya.

Taani was just staring at the pic. Tanya was totally a look alike of taani. she was shocked to zenith.

"She looks like me." said a shocked taani.

"Exactly and we want you to act as tanya for few months so that rey can gain his mental balance back and will come out of the depression. Please taani we request you just one help. " pleaded sharon.

"Please beta. I can't see my son like this. Please make him normal." pleaded mrs.Singhania too folding her hands in front of her but taani immediately lowered her hand "Are aunty. Don't do like that. You are elder than me." said taani holding her hand.

"I am ready to help you all." answered taani with a smile.

Swaron and mrs.Singhania were happy and sharon and mrs.Singhania hugged her.

"But what about your family taani.? Is it ok for them ?" asked swayam.

Suddenly taanis face fell "I am an orphan swayam" answered taani.

"I am so sorry taani. Really sorry." apologized swayam.

"It's completely fine" said a smiling taani.

"But you are not orphan now onwards. We all are with you." continued swayam with a smile and mrs.singhania and sharon nodded.

Taani's eyes brimmed with tears of happiness.

"Don't cry" said mrs.Singhania and hugged her.

They left to taanis orphanage to ask for permission.
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As they all reached Singhania mansion after getting a yes from taani's orphanage. All entered the house and rey hugged mrs.Singhania tightly.

"Where were you all ? Do you people have any idea how i afraid I was? I thought you also left me like tanya did" said rey sobbing.He didn't notice taani yet.

"Mera bacha. I am here na. Don't cry." said Mrs. Singhania and wiped away his tears.

"We have a surprise for you rey."
said sharon coming in between with excitement.

"I don't want any surprise. I just want my tanya." stated rey and turned to go.

"Rey..!!" called taani softly.

Rey turned back with a jolt. He saw taani standing there with sharon. Without wasting any second he just went towards her and embraced her tightly. HE was kissing all over her face,on her forehead,both the cheeks and hugged her tightly like he was feeling her. He was making sure that his tanya (taani) is with him,in his arms.



"Tanya ! I-I missed you so much. You don't know how worried I was.They all were saying you died. But I-I know my tanya can never leave me." rey was crying badly holding taani like a son cries in his mother's embrace.

" Why you left me like that baby ? Are you angry on your rey.?" asked rey innocently breaking the hug.

She was startled with the happiness and love rey was showing. Taani was crying too. She was feeling his pain too. Loosing the person you love the most is the worst thing and she could feel it as she also lost her parents at a tender age. She wasn't able to reply him. His love for tanya was visible in his actions.

"Say na tanya. Are you? " asked rey again.

"No I am not.How can I be angry on My rey.?" said taani and kissed on his forehead and rey just closed his eyes as he felt her lips.



"Tanya you would be hungry na. I'll make you eat something. You go and rest " said rey and left to kitchen.

"Thank you beta. I can never forget this favour of yours." said mrs.Singhania with tears in her eyes.

"Don't worry aunty. Everything would be fine" assured taani.

"Taani you go to rey's room before rey comes out." said sharon and taani left from there.
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"Here is your food." said rey entering the room.

Taani forwarded her hand to take it.

"Aha. I'll make you eat with my hands." said rey and started feeding her. Taani started feeding him back. After completing their lunch.

"Taani sleep for a while. You must be tired na." said rey and adjusted the pillows.

"You are also looking tired you also take a nap." said taani pulling him down but rey got unbalanced and he fell on top of her.

Rey was staring her with teary eyes. He missed her so much. Taani was not at all feeling uncomfortable in fact she was feeling protective in his arms. She slowly wiped his tears with her little palms.

"Now no more tears rey. Only happiness." said taani.

They adjusted themselves on bed and rey slept hugging her tightly with a fear she might leave him again.

"Don't worry rey. I'll not leave you again." said taani kissed him on his cheek and slept.
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Days went like this. Rey was taking utmost care of taani. The fear which gripped his heart was that in past he commited mistake due to which taani left him that's why he was taking care of each and everything. He started going to office and always came home by time and would take taani for a ride. He would make her eat her favourite pani puri and pav bhaji.Then they would go to beach and sit in each others embrace.


Rey was getting normal with each passing day. Whole Singhania family was very happy as their rey was getting normal,getting more happier. Rey was showering taani with love,affection and care.How could taani not fall for him? She also started falling for him and this turned into love soon but sometimes she felt bad thinking she is playing with his feelings but seeing his happiness she always used to shrug that thought away.
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One fine day he came back home late from office and was going to his room when he hears swaron talking about a girl named taani. He stood there to hear their conversation.

"Sharon I am so happy to get my brother rey back and I cannnot thank taani enough for it.Because of her rey came back to his life.After tanya died rey became so dull like a lifeless body. But thanks to krishnaji he brought taani in our lives." said swayam happily

"I know swayam. God is always with us thats why he sent taani to our lives. Otherwise a look alike of tanya. I never thought of that. But taani helped us allot. " exclaimed sharon with a smile on her face.

Rey was rooted to his place. His mind went blank hearing this. They all lied to him. He went to terrace and broke down. He was weeping and sobbing.After some time he went to his room to hear the truth from taani. Anger was clearly visible in his eyes but he was calming himself down.

"Rey what happened ? You okay." asked taani seeing his bloodshot eyes.

"Tanya don't ever leave me again. I won't be ablr to survive without you." cried rey falling down on his knees.

"I'll never leave you rey. I love more than anything and I can't imagine my life without you." said taani coming down amd tears started brimming in her eyes.

Rey chuckle sarcastically and hold her with her shoulders and made her stand and said "I know everything miss Taani. You are not taanya right. I got to know everything and it won't take a minute to destroy your whole life. " said rey angrily.

Taani was shocked. She was not getting what to reply. She just held her head hung low.

"But I cannot. I cannot destroy you coz I can see the same love in your eyes for me which I used to see in Tanya's. That's why i couldn't recognize you taani. You showed me the same love which tanya used to show. In fact you gave me all the happiness more than tanya did. I don't know why but I love you taani. I really do. " said rey tears flowing from his eyes.



Taani looked into eyes with a jolt. Taani could not reply she just hugged him tightly and started crying and rey let her cry in his embrace.

"I love you too rey. More than my life. I love you. " said taani still sobbing.

This all was seen by swaron who came behind rey as they got to know rey heard them but they were happy for taarey and left from there to give some time to the new love birds.

"I know sweetheart. " said rey with a smile and wiped away her tears.

"But please don't ever leave me. I would die." said rey

Taani kept her hand on his lips and stopped him from saying further.

"Don't ever say like that.Otherwise i will not talk to you. " said an angry Taani

"Ohk baba. I am sorry and I love you." said rey.

"but you look cute when you get angry and your nose turns red." continued rey and kissed her on her nose.

Taani pouted hearing this.Rey couldn't control seeing her pout. He just smashed his lips on her and started nibbling her lower lip. Taani was too shocked to respond but after gaining sense she also started to response and the kiss turned into passionate one. Both were kissing each other pouring their love for each other. They broke the kiss as they felt the need of oxygen. Both were panting heavily.

"Before pouting think about this kiss ok." said rey and winked.

Taani turned all red and hugged him tightly.

The End

Please hit like and comment big. Avoid one word comments. Its very discouraging. So commment big.

Love
Soumya


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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome one..!!
loved it..!!
do write more..!!
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wow awesome os
so beautiful loved it
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Lovely os
Beautifully written


Loved it


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Posted: 10 years ago
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it ws really awesome..
loved it..
something new...
last line was my favrt
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Really awesome 😃😉 just looveddd the update 😆 Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os
different concept

emotional and beautifully penned down

You have portrayed their feelings so well

TaaRey confession and kiss

that was super cute

Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os!!
Loved it!!
So new!!!
Feelings were penned down beautifully!!!
Keep writing!!
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Amazing update
Each scene was fab
Beautifully written
Loved it
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i was awwwing all the way
u portrayed it so cutely
loved it so much n thank you sowmi
muah...!!

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