SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated.

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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

Well the update was quite Royal as it could be..i love your detail work...i all feels so surreal...

everytime i want to say so much but i m at loss of words but all in all you have become an amazing writer Adi...keep Writing :)

n i have a feeling i see glimpse of Alok coming up in the new client😉

nevertheless waiting to read more :)

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Yaa it was filmy nd fairy tale..
I loved it..

So the person was swayam's dad..

I think avantika heard their talks..
Hope her plans get failed..

Swayam confessed so simply
Wow
Wow

I m loving swaron moments..
Yaa their souls are healing in a beautifull manner..

Update soon
Pm me please

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

I will admit to the fact that the update was filmy (especially palace, Prince and all that) but nevertheless it was awesome. Rishi is so rude😡. Loved how she defended Swayam and Swayam stood up for his friends😛.

Avantika's complaint was🤣. That lady is insane!

Swayam finally confessed to Sharon and she too did. That was something unexpected and I really loved it.❤️.

I so loved your last line "Sharon and Swayam felt emotionally complete. Maybe, their soul though slowly, but was finally healing.. Not healed, but still, slowly and beautifully healing...". Brilliant👏

As insane as Avantika is, she is equally evil. I hope her 'plan' doesn't create a problem for Swaron. Also hoping everything will go smooth in the palace.

The whole update was detailed beautifully.

Thanks for the pm

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

RES

UNRES

OH MY GOD!!!! he confessed in front of her??? like seriously???

i really loved the entire update do I really need say that????

the update was really dreamy... especially the parking lot part..

. love you girl for including that in the chapter...

the team in a royal palace just seems so intriguing for me...

and since you said you have teh next 2 chapters written then what are you wasting for???

plsss update soon soon soon soon...

obviously as a reader i would want swayam sharon romance...

but as a writer i know you ahve your own imagination so you go on with your way...

and i know for sure it would be brilliant...

keep writing...

love ani

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deeksha

@vrushan_deeksha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

it was a nice chapter
loved. it
update it soon

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SalmanShahidSm

@SalmanShahidSm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

nice update ...i liked it!!... long chappy :):) awesome writer u are thnxx for the pm update soon

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prajana

@prajana

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Hey..awsome update

Loved the parking lot scene

I never knew love confession can be written in such simple yet beautiful manner

The whole part was so dreamy

Update soon plz😊

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Very nice FF..well written 😊

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Hey aditi
Read all the chaps they are beautiful... Sharon's anger and her diva way was jus owsome. Swayuns character was different in a good way loved his character. Swarons loss was huge and had drained der emotions and its jus beautiful tat dey r bringing back good and happy time in each others life..
It was a smooth flowing off treat to read...
Sam is another livable character here. Swayums bond with Kria and taani and der teasing was fun to read. Though sharon is my personal fav. But love swayum too.
The last chap was gr8 with the party and most imp. Confession was lyk a dream jus beautifully penned
The swaron moments in d ff wer lovely be it Sharon's cheek kiss or d hug jus beautiful
Do update soon
Cheers
Mythreyi

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@--lavanya--

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#250

i am speechless yaar ! 👏

why did you stop !! ho sake to abhi ke abhi baaki dono chappys pada de mujhko !!

i loved the chappy !!

still in trance !!

too good Adity 🤗

humesha long chappys hi likhna ...i so love them !!

i bookmarked this ! baar baar padungi !!

aur time mile to i'll cmmnt again ! 😛

lots of ice-cream and love ,

Lavi di 😳