Taarey ss: A modern Cinderella Story - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Omigosh, Cinderella!!!
One of my favorite fairy tales on my favorite couple!
By the way, great job with the prologue. It was intriguing and well-written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
nice cncpt dr
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
nice concept. liked it.
waiting for next part. plz continue soon dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
tanya wilson..!! namw from ishani's story the saturday night..!!
nyc prologue..!! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
interesting concept
a story of sad girl that scene is beautiful written
a young boy
up date soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
awesome concept. really looking forward to read this story. CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Character sketch

Tanya Wilson-was once a princess of great diamond merchant mr.willy wilson..but not anymore..

She is now the slave for her own house..her life now only depends upon dance and step swayam wilson ...who loves her lot and her pillar of support...Because him now she is attending to her colg ..

Her life now is full of betrayal slashes tears..she is now hoping some sort of light in her life

By the way her darkness is caused by mrs.anna wilson and her two stupid daughters

Her life is now only DANCE and her brother

Apperance- ek dam perfect

Behavior-mind blowing

Life-asper now dumb

Hobbies-dancing

Swayam wilson-popularly known as sam wilson heart throb of colg... secret best friend of reyaansh singhaniya sweet humble totally opposite of his mom..loves taanya lot and calls her taani..saves her..In love with the diva Sharon ...and is a dancer ..taani is a part of his life

Anna wilson-scary,cunning,hates taani ,loves her daughters but dislikes swayam for supporting taani,taunts taani,gets very happy seeing taani crying...even her daughters get ...secret keeper

Alice wilson-same like her mom,loves rey,hates taani

Blessy wilson- same like her mom,loves rey,hates taani

Cs of reyansh not now 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Introductory note

Let me clear out some things

Willy wilson,a great diamond merchant

His family was a happy family

Until

His affair with Anna Cott came into light

So

To avoid many questions rising and hafazard..

He brought her to his house

There his happy f,mily was ruined

His first wife nia wilson committed suicide who could not control the torture by Anna

Leaving her only daughter tanya at the age of 10

Now tanya was alone

Torture was daily routine for her

Molestation.. haterd she faced it

Now,

Her father is dead

Whole property was in the name of anna

She was a queen

Anna had 3 children

Alice blessy swayam (sam)

Swayaam was a year elder than all three -alice blessy tanya

Same d3(swayam is part of it) gang presesnt all are dancers

Chapter one

In st.louis

In the gang

Nil-wat ya..sam aj colg ke first day hain i mean hamari 2nd year ki..but pichle saal u were sooo bored but this time u look soo excited

Sam-guys everything happens for a reason.(smirks)

Nil-wat reason??

Vicky-reason chod where is our hero

Sam-where is REY!!!!!!!!!!!!

VICKY-aj bhi late (frowns)

Girls are appling lips stick seeing their faces in mirror and looking at the parkig lot and frowning again..

No bmw

Very desperate they are

They are cursing y is yheir pc making them wait

By the way boys are making their hair sproper and waiting for the same bmw

Oh wait

Not for the pc but psc (princess charming)

While some boys are trying to gain attrntion of girls which they could not do

Here our d3 boys are getting mad because their leader has not yet arrived

Suddenly they hear girls shouting and the boys just smirk

All d3 boys together -agaya romeo

The bmw arrives at the lot ..

Girls start drooling

Boys forgot the moment

The door of th ecar opened slowly handsome boy gets down simultaneously a girl gets down from the car

Girls run towards him

Boys wanted to run towards her but they wouldnt dare .

Sh eis the diva

By the way who could darwe to touch the "Sharon Rai"

BOYS JUST DROOOLED OVER HER BUT SHE DINT GIVE A DAMN CARE TO THEM

But our hero is stuck with them

Girl one-rey...pls just a kiss

Girl2-REY lets have a good morning selfie..

Girl-is my dress suiting

Girl4-shall we han out today

Girl 5-can u teach me dance

How can our boy control these girls

Girl6-rey..if it is not u atleastpatch me up with sam

Rey-WWWAAATTT??

REY JUST LOOKED SIDEWAYS SEEING DIVA IN ANGER MODE

Rey-hey girl ..ur dead

Girl6-wat..oh shit

Diva just walked to wards her-hey yu

Girl6-hey sharon..i didn t you wer there

Sharon-wat if i was not there..do u noe with whom u r speaking...

Girl6-i didnt mesn it

Sharon-wat did u mean??how dare u talk of patching urself with my BOYFRIEND...

GIRL WAS UTTERLY HELPLESS

GIRL6-ohh..i ust ..spoke..he is my atraction..i am also hot...like u

Sharon-how dare u?? U noe wat u r speaking..hot and u..swayam wouldnt ebven see u

HI GIRLS WATS HAPPENING

SHARON -recognized the voice...

Turned back -sam..see wats this girlis uttering..mad girl..i will surely rusticate u..u noe i m the cs ..i ll rag u out..blah blah

Like this Sharon was blabbering..

Swayam-rey looked each other not knowing wat to do..

Something flashed rey and he indicatede swayam something..

Swarey-sharon ...

Sharon turned and suddely the boys picked her up and went out from the place hearing the blabbering ..

They put her down in the canteen

Sharon-wat the hell guys.i will surely kill her..

Rey-sharon stop it rubbish

Sharon-rubbish..how will u know how it feelss...falli n love once then ull understand..

Rey was speechless

Al started laughing

Rey to change the topic suddenly he says -sam..this yearur 2 sisters are entering th colg rit

Sam-not 2 but 3

Nil-3??woh kaise.i just saw only 2

Sam-no..this time taani is also joining the colg

Sharon-relllyyy..uff atlast

Vicky -taani kon haij

Sam-my step sis

Neha-woowowo

Rini-tell usabout ur sisies

Sam-guys-u noe abt my "2"so called sisiters..

Rey-ssay abt taani

Swayam-waatt

Rey-intro

Swayam-ok...taani..tanya wilson..my cute chubby best sister...i love her..she is amazing dancer..cute pretty hot barbie girl...Special powers...my cutiieee pie...i call her taani...after my dads death only one whom i rely is her..In my house she is forbidden..u noe that..and i hope this year her life changes

Nil-wowowwowowo

Vicky-she is dancer??

Amar-kisne sikhaya??

Bharat-kaise

Swayam-teacher is me..{prodly}

Vicky-wat..

Nil-ok

Rey-but where r ur sisters

Sam-they r coming quite late..u noe wat..jabse they got to noe ki reyansh singhaniya is studying this colg...from that day they r frequent customers of saloon practicing how to talk to u

All laugh

Rey-just imagine if they get to noe thta im ur best friend

Sam-i am dead..but my tanya is not like thta..bet u guys u ll love her

Rey-hmmm..tanyawilson..intresting(slowly)

Swyam-kya bola tune

Rey-nothing..

Chal lets go to practice..

Precap-

Taarey meet

thnx for all comments and likes it means a lot to me

hoping of geting same response

thanks .

sailaja di..taarey meet in next update

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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awsome update superb entry of rey poor girl sharon se pangaliye gang bonding was nice sam's introduction about taani was so sweet waiting for taarey meet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
a very good start
continue soon

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