SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED*

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prajana

@prajana

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#391

Hey..awsome update😊

For me this chapter is the best chapter of this ff

Long and best in emotional content

Swayam's outburst was justifyied

And a small conversation of swaron was also good

The best part of the ff was swayam's letter

Now i hope sharon will accept his love

Eagerly waiting to read more

So update soon😊

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#392

Awesome..

Want to read more yaar...Why u ended it there

Swaron abandoned corridor part was amazing..👍🏼

N d best part of this update was swayam's letter👏

Update fast..i cant wait nw

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#393

Awsumm update

Liked it

Swaron convo...great

Thank uh for pm

Update soon

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VrushanianAdity

@VrushanianAdity

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#394

And you say I'm better than u.. Oh Please!!

This was so so so good.. I just wanted this update to never end..

Finally Swayam's confusion is all clear..

This chapter was emotional it welled my eyes, especially Swayam's letter, yet I was smiling when I read it..😊

Beautiful.. Yet another Job all well done..👏

Please do update soon.. And thank you so much for the pm..😊

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Oh yeah I am loving it..!!! 😃

Mr. I know it all... 😃

He got it.. Finally he got it right..

Loved the whole convo between Taani and Swayam.

Taani told him all about Sharon. Since when she used to like him.

Sharon Loved him from 7 yrs.. that's huge..

I like the humor you both girls bring in ur stories.

Rey and Swayam. They both are too cute when they are together.

So swayam confronted Sharon, but she is shutting him down. Well she has a reason, which is correct in some way.

Taani told swayam, Sharon's reason.. And now Swayam had realized what's stopping Sharon.

And that letter... Hope Sharon realize that his feelings are true and not mere infatuation..

Please update soon.. Can't wait..

-Shivani

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron
I wonder why you give so many shocks to us in this FF :o though I love it :3
:'( you know na I still hate you
Hats off to you two _/\_

Swayam finally joined the thread :o and realized Sharon love him only and confronted Taani and thankfully she told him :(
But I appreciate the way you wrote Swayam confronting Sharon he said something which made her mum and her eyes expressed it all
But she being in doubt :( again hurted both of them
Atleast taani and rey helped him

The best part is he din leave hope :') and send his words to her :'(
Eagerly waiting to know Sharon's reaction after reading the letter, he said everything honestly :')

Update kar :'(
Sooon
Thanks ^_^

thank u dear

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: taarey17
awesome update
loved it
update soon
thanks for the pm

thanks a lot

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: aneesha93
Oh man, am at loss of words every time you guys give an update. How do you manage to write and express everything so beautifully??. Bravo! Take a bow guys. You both are really talented⭐️👏
The entire update was amazing. How Swayam questioned Taani and how she told him everything. They have a very adorable bond😛. Loved how Swayam confronted Sharon. His replies and straightaway coming to the point without beating around the bush. Taarey helping him outta the situation was also sweet and comforting.

Most importantly, I loved the letter Swayam wrote to Sharon. It truly came from his heart. He really loves that girl beyond comparison. Hope she is willing to give them a chance.

Thanks for the pm. And pleaaassseee update sooon. All your FFs are so amazing that, it is almost impossible to wait. So please do it soon...

thank u dear

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: ritz15
Finallyy swayam came to know tht sharon loves him nd he also confronted her😊
d update wss soo gud
Why did u end thr😭 i want to read more
Plss update soon

thank u dear

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
such a awesome update
omg finally swayam knows she loves him n he too
loved bro-sis convo
god the letter was so beautiful
simply apne dil ki baat kehdi swayam ne ab bas sharon mann jaye
awesome update dear

thank u dear