SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED* - Page 13

Lovely upd 😊

i thgt aaj pata chalega swayAm ko Rj sharon h bt nhi :-(

canteen scene was awsum :-)

Suprb update...
Luv d way sharon made dat guy understand...
She ws right luv mein no expectations...
Swaron part ws cute...
Aww swayam falling fr rj...
Wtng fr d tym wen he cum to knw rj z sharon...
Update soon
Thnx fr pm

So finally swayam startedstarted feeling something..
Great

Thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Buddhu why can't he relate its Sharon :'( what ever RJ say is related to his life

He need to know Sharon more for that ^_^

Hope that day will come soon :') when he would be comfortable enough to openly share his fears with Sharon :')

Expectations :( its Sharon herself she love him but never expected him to love her back

I can imagine her losing that in future :(

What if she would expect from him :( and feel hurt

Write whole story I'm telling you -.-

Thanks!!!!

Update soon ^_^

Originally posted by: ndcdance

ur an amazing writer..

loving this storyy

tks for the pm..

and ya swaron talks were cute..lyk cute cute.. :P

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Awww for u im here na...🤗

With lots of love, hugsss and kisses 😉

Love u Ani😃

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Loved it as always👏...I used to wait to read ur updates u know even being too busy...Now i got new one to wait 😆And new one to irritate you 😆😆

Loved it...the whole canteen scene was so nice to read...really reyam need to check them soon 😆..They and their reverse psychology...😆

Loved it the way Sharon handled the situation...👏She really has a nice convincing power..like wonderful convincing power😆 ...

Loved the whole convo between swaron in the corridor...that was really nice😳They were tooo comfortable with each other... Like the way they becoming friends... I hope nothing go wrong 😊

And the thing swayam said about senior which remains me of my college days... which i miss terribly 😭...

And i love one thing in ur update other than the poem, is the way u ending it...

U both always ending it with the RJ and her words... And her words as in the form of poem which is really wonderful...even though im not getting the word meaning of the poem still im thoroughly enjoying it... 😃

The poem which remains the whole things which happened in the day...

And plzz clear swayam's confusion soon ...make him to realize what really love is...😉 Hope it happen soon...

Waiting to read next part...

So need to update na...so do fast...😆

I know know im becoming too demanding but cant help it really excited to read more...😛

UPDATE FAST😃

U both doing great job by writing swaron stories👏👏...really want to read more of ur stories...😎

I have a wish to read one dark story of swaron from u both...till now ur stories are sweet and cute ones...want to read one different concept...with lots of twist and turns...its just my one wish... i will be happy if u both think about it...😉

Thank u so much for updating continuously...😃

SO update fast 😛

Keechu di😊

Originally posted by: aneesha93

Lovely + emotional update. The canteen scene & the following conversations were very well penned. Expectations and love *sigh*, poor Sharon kinda expressed her own feelings😭. Diary readings as usual were good. Hope Swayam tries to find out the truth rather than running away from it.

Thanks for the pm. Update soon.

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Lovely update...

Canteen scene n swaron convo...so nice

Beautifully written😛

Thank uh for pm

Update soom