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QueenofGreen

@QueenofGreen

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

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Edited by Propinquity. - 10 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

This is so good. I love the way you portray Swayam, his simple caring nature very much evident. Poor him is so stressed and his friends trying to comfort him and betting on the child. :v

Poor Sharon too, that girl must be in so much pain.

Great writing as always. :)

Eager to read further.

Cheers.

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prajana

@prajana

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

I loved the concept

I must say your writing is class apart

The way you pen down their emotions is commendable

Update soon😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Great piece of writing
Reyam bond is wow
Sharon in labour.
Nd amar nil betting

They are too much
Hope everything is gonna fine

Update soon
Nd do pm me plz

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

ohh its amazing... superb beginning... loving d description of d whole situation... plz plz update soon.. 😊

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Ah. I love the topic of this write up. I have read a lot of stuff on Babies and SwaRon. But I love this whole set up when their baby is actually coming to their lives. The emotional content of this work is great to read. The emotions of Swayam have been so perfectly written. That moment from where he knows Sharon is in labour. And his panic and anxiety. In that serious moment Amar and Neilesh's way of consoling crack me up. The way Swayam is tensed about Sharon. Thats was beautiful. Waiting for the next part. Post it soon. :D