||MONTE CARLO||- A D3 FF , chap - 3 on pg. 19 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Hola ppl, m back with an update and yaa this is longer than the previous one.

Hope u like it!!

MONTE CARLO

Chapter - 2

." I m also here"said Vicky pretending to be hurt."tu bhi aaja nautanki"said swayam. Nanu, secretely was listening all their talks and smiled seeing them.


"May I come in" asked nanu, teasing them." You don't need to ask, nanu"said swayam." You know Swayam that's why you are my favorite "said nanu." Agar aapki aur aapke fav. Swayu ki baat ho gayi ho, to humse bhi baat kr lijiye" Pouted kriya."Ohh my lil darling, I love u the most but I'm here to say that u all have to come at today's navaratri night"said nanu comforting kriya.As soon as swayam heard "navaratri night", he jumped in air and shouted "yay!! Party".the other 3 people present there looked him as if he had grown a third eye or something like that.He balanced himself and asked" what are u looking at me??"."Its not your some cool party, its Navaratri night ,Swayam"said Vicky."So what, party to party hai ,navaratri ki ho ya phir koi aur" answered swayam.Both Vicky and kriya hit their head and said" iska kuch nhi ho sakta, party freak". "but nanu, why we have to come??, I don't want to come, aap apne fav. Ko hi le jaao"said kriya ,it was not that she didn't like navaratri but she hated to wear traditional Indian outfits becoz she can't handle them." Ok. U don't come.Phir Monte Carlo bhi sirf swayu hi jaaega"said nanu putting up a condition .Vicky came near to kriya and whispered in her ear" arrey haan kar de , ek hi din ki to baat h, please otherwise nanu, will not let us go to monte carlo at any cost"."ok, par sirf tere kehne par"whispered kriya." Nanu we all are coming" announced Kriya.

IN the other end of the city, a girl was throwing her dresses on bed, but not before commenting how lame are they. Suddenly two creatures emerged from the door, converting her room, in a big mess."STOP It both of you" shouted the girl. "Sharon,umm ...he started the fight" said one the two persons putting all the blame on other one." What me?? You were one to start this" said the other one in disbelief." Reyaansh Singhania and Neha Kapoor, will you two tell me the matter or not" threatened Sharon." He will not take me with you guys to navaratri night" said neha innocently." But she stole my fav watch again"said Rey protecting himself.Sharon laughed at their silly fight and sweetly said" Off-couse u will come with us na, rey is just joking but firstly give him his watch".Neha returned his watch and said "sirf Sharon ne kaha issliye".As soon as rey got the watch , he kissed the watch and posed with it as it is some big trophy and said " Par mein tujhe navaratri night pe nahi le ke jaaunga, infact I'll lock u in this room".Saying this he winked at Neha and ran from there. And their Tom- Jerry fight again started.

(Sharon's P.O.V.)

These two "Arrghh", can they ever behave like normal humans, always fighting.But they are the one who changed my life completely, now my day starts with them as well as ends with them.We are no chuddy-buddies , but since the time they came in my life, they are my best friends.They changed me completely ,from an arrogant rude Sharon to sweet and kind one but my this side is only reserved for them.They are my only family although I do have a Dad, but he is always busy in his business, he might forgot that he has a daughter too, he never cared for me. Ohh!! dad se yaad aaya ,I have to tell them something.

(P.O.V. ends)

Sharon stepped out of her room and said " guys , we have to leave for Monte Carlo tomorrow". "what ?? why?? "asked Neha." Cause my dad has planned h mini tour for me and I said him that I will go only if you guys will come with me, so he booked our tickets"said Sharon." I don't know why your dad always plans a tour for u , every year.although he dosen't even come to meet" Rey elbowed Neha signing her stop .Sharon's face dropped listening to this." Hey , she dosen't mean that. Ok. Stupid Neha" said rey comforting Sharon." Its ok rey, waise bhi she is saying all right , he never comes to meet me"tears threated to fall from her eyes." Ye sab chhod Sharon, focus on "We are going to Monte Carlo'"said neha diverting Sharon's attention to this topic." And vaise bhi agar kisi ko pata chal gaya ki SHARON RAI PRAKASH do have a soft side , to phir to tsunami aa jaaegi" said rey making her laugh.Sharon laughed at his sentence and said " I have heard that this time the Navaratri Night is organized by your father and his partner"." Yup and now you two don't waste a single minute and get ready , tum dono boho time lagati to ready hone me"answered rey. "Aye Aye Captain" said both the girls." Hey bhagwaan, ab iss rey ko kon samjhaaye ki hum iski tarah bander ban ke to nahi reh sakte "teased Neha. "U" said rey.And their Tom & Jerry fight started Again.

(Here At kriya's home)

She was trying to find a good excuse so that she will not have to attend the Navratri abruptly an idea clicked her mind, she remembered that she dosen't have any traditional outfit and this is a really good excuse. Suddenly someone rang ht e bell of her home , she got got down and opened the door only to find swayam ang Vicky grinning at her." You two here. Ab Kya hua??" she asked." You know what nanu has bought 10- 15 outfits for u and we are here to deliver it"said Vicky."Now you can't escape from Navaratri night" grinned swayam." Tum dono kya delivery boys , ho ye sab le kea aye ho"said an annoyed kriya." Nanu asked her to do so" said swayam." Naanu ka chamcha" murmered kriya." Why your Dad always organize this, why he love navaratri soo much" asked kriya." Well not alone my Dad , this time this navaratri night is organized by him and his partner and u get ready fast I don't want an excuse , and I know u'll be able to handle it" said Swayam.

Pls do read and review.

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Anshika

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Amazing...update...
lol...
neha & rey fight & sharon pov was crazy
So cute sweet nanu vicky swayam r lol
poor kriya can't make any xcuse...
now she have 2 attend lol...
awesome
but
when u gonna make them meet???? Do update soon i can't wait
i m an impatient person ;)
Edited by devilofevil_KR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
I love this.
Amazing written.


Do pm me next time please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
Nanu ka chamcha
Hahahaha
Waiting for navratri night

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilofevil_KR

Amazing...update...
lol...
neha & rey fight & sharon pov was crazy
So cute sweet nanu vicky swayam r lol
poor kriya can't make any xcuse...
now she have 2 attend lol...
awesome
but
when u gonna make them meet???? Do update soon i can't wait
i m an impatient person ;)


Thank u :)...
They will be meeting in next chapter..maybe :P..
BE patient. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: PrincessAish

I love this.

Amazing written.


Do pm me next time please.


Thank u...
Okies ..will pm u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Awesome
Nanu ka chamcha
Hahahaha
Waiting for navratri night

Thanks 4 d pm


Thank u :)
Ur wait will be over soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
hey baby...
update was superb...
nanu fav swayam
and he is totally party freak😆
neha and rey r too cute
and their tom and Jerry fight😆
sharon is also sweet in this part...
kriya is totally tomboy...
and vicky and swayam delivery boys 😆😆
when r they gonna meet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update... Swayam is a party freak and nanu ka chamcha... Rey and neha's silly fights r very cute... Sharon is strong yet emotional... oh Nanu spoiled kriya's plans to avoid navratri party... Loved it.. Waiting for d Navratri party... Thanks for d PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Heyaa
Amazing update
Kriya swayam n vicky
Ma favss
Dey r soo cute
Swayam party freak lol
Kriya bichari excuse rakhne ke pehale bhi plan gaya pani me

Neha n rey
Hehe tom n jerry.

So excited jab yeh sab log navratri nyt pe milenge
I guess sab ka jhagda types hoga
Coz sharon toh hai hi attitude wali n kri vhi kaha kam hai

Hmm vry interesting

Soo excited for kriyaansh meet

Update soon

Thanks khush di for pm

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