The Wannabe : SwaRon Drabble Series | Ch 3 - Pg 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I know I am supposed to update the bundle of stories that are hanging incomplete. But I couldn't stop myself from beginning this.

I am extremely high on SwaRon these days. Although TanHa wala, but when it comes to write-ups, it hardly matters! You are free to imagine whoever you feel like. I had TanHa in my mind, while I cooked this up.

Coming to the story, its basically a Drabble (as mentioned in the title) that would consist of 5 to 6 chapters. Thus, I would be super punctual in updating this. I face bad times writing long chapters. :((

That's it from my side. The first chappy would be up in sometime.

Like. Comment. Criticise.
-Aishwarya-

INDEX
  • Chapter One : : Page 1
  • Chapter Two : : Page 5
  • Chapter Three : : Page 9
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER ONE

The waiter placed the glass of cold coffee on his table. His hand mechanically grasped and brought it to his lips.

Her eyes.

His brain drifted off again, even before he could savour the first sip from that delicious beverage.

Those brown mysterious pools sure hid someting. From - him? Maybe. Maybe she too felt those known feelings for him. The way he did for her.

His lips captured the rim of the icy cold glass and he took a sip. The liquid in it, was colder than the glass surface.

But what had happened today? Did she have an off or something? Or was she late? Why had her daily routine of visiting the cafe at 8.30, having a cup of coffee and leaving for her office before 9 changed?

His eyes, which were constantly stuck at the entrance, widened at those thoughts. There were yet many more possibilities. He glanced at his wrist watch - 9.05. There was no way she was turning up today.

With a heavy heart, he got up from his table and began to walk out of that small building. Crossing the threshold, he let out a deep sigh.
I missed you terribly, Ms Brown Eyes.

As he'd just began to walk down the street, he heard someone call.
'Swayam Shekhawat! Can you give me a minute of yours?'

He turned to get locked up in those same brown mysterious pools.

Edited by ..MereWhisper.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice beginning. Swayam's thoughts were nicely penned and it seems an interesting read. Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey...You've penned it down really well...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The start was good
miss brown eyes nice name
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow it was awsme
Really u penned it flawakeslly


Beautiful
Loved it

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon and pm me also...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved.

^Unreserve^

Heya! It was lovely reading it. You have penned it in a cool way. Swayam missing those brown mysterious eyes. . .Her eyes ^_^ And just when he lost hope of seeing her again she called him :)

It will be interesting to know what her eyes hiding from him. :)

Chitra
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cool start Aish
Loved it

Tbanks 4 d pm

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