KR and SS Story LOVE: Wahi ehsaas alag hai andaaz part 2 10mar 15 pg1

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Guys, as it now my work, I m changing the title

LOVE: Wahi ehsaas, Alag hai Andazzz


PROLOGUE

Pyar kya hai? (What is love?)

SWAYAM: pyar! Pyar means Dosti! Jab tak main uska best friend nahi banjata boy friend kabhi nahi ban sakta. Ab tak aisi situation ayi to nahi,par apne pyar k liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hun. Us k liye agar main apni jaan de sakta hoon to kisi ki jaan le bhi sakta hoon. (Love! Love mean friendship. When I will not be able to make her my best friend how I will become his boyfriend. Till now the situation has not came but I can do anything for my love. If I can give my life then I can take a life too.)

SHARON: pyar! For me pyar is time waste. Zindagi jine k liye hoti hai pyar main marne ya marne k liye nahi. Pyar main karti hun apni family se. kisi aur k liye iss tarah socha nahi. Han. Kabhi mauka mile toh... (love! For me love is time waste. Life is to live not to die or kill. Yes I love my family. And not thought about anyone else like this. Han. If I will get a chance then...)

REY: pyar! Kabhi dekha to nahi, par sayad aisa kuch hota hai. Kehete hain ki ankhen band karne par jiska chehera nazar aye wahi tumhara pyar hai aur mujhe toh khuli aankhon se bhi ek hi chehera dikhta hai... par... kash main tumse nafrat kar pata!! (Love! Never seen it. But still there is something. Many tells that when you close your eyes and the face visible to you. Must be your love. But I can see the face in my open eyes...but... I wish I could hate you)

KRIA: pyar! Pyar ka dusra naam zindagi. Pyar kiya nahi jata bas ho jata hai, ek ehsas jise mehsus kiya jata hai. Par apka pyar apse muh mod le to? Kash main tumse mahabatt kar pati! (Love! Love is life. No need to love. Love just happens. A feeling which is to be feels and if your love doesn't accept you then? I wish I could love you.)


CHARACTER SKETCH

SWAYAM
HANDSOME DASHING RICH GUY LOVES HIS BEST FRIEND'S SIS, SHARON A LOT. HIS ONLY WISH 2 MARRY SHARON AND LIVE WITH HER HAPPILY THROUGHOUT LIFE. COOL BOY, REY'S BEST FRIEND. LITTLE INNOCENT.

SHARON
A BEAUTIFUL GIRL, VERY GOOD AT STUDIES. IN LOVE WITH SWAYAM BUT UNKNOWN OF IT. SHE HAS A BROTHER WHO LOVES HER VERY MUCH. COLLEGE QUEEN SINCE 3 YEARS. LITTLE PROUDY OF HER BEAUTY.


REY

DASHING BOY, SON OF AN INDUSTRIALIST,SWAYAM'S BEST FRIEND AND COOL BOY BUT GETS ANGRY EASILY. SHARON'S BROTHER. LOVES SHARON'S FRIEND KRIA SECRETLY, EVERYBODY KNOWS THIS BUT NEVER TOLD HER. LOVES SHARON MORE THAN HIS LIFE.


KRIA

SHE LOVES DANCING, AND SHE IS TOO GUD AT STUDIES. A FUN LOVING GIRL. LOVES SHARON'S BROTHER, REY BUT NEVER EXPRESS... BEST FRIEND OF ALL. MODERN GIRL, FRIENDS OF ALL.

All other characters will be introduced in the story..😊


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love,

Shirisha😊

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PART 1



The sun rises and its 6 on the clock. Wind is blowing through the window. Slowly the curtains are slide and a beautiful face with charming eyes and lovely smile. She then turns and starts singing and dancing:

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love


she dances round and round.

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love

She bumps to a guy. Looking him widens her eyes.

Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love


He raises his eyes brows smiling and she nodes her head saying yes smiling back..

Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

they dance together

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah

He hold her waist and she rounds her neck with both her hands.

Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love


they touches each other head by head and smiles.

Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala

Dancing, they reaches the kitchen and gets lost in each other's eyes.

Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love...

Suddenly she hears someone calling her. "KRIA"..

She looks aside"Neha!" her friend was looking at her confusing.

Neha: kya kar rahi ho kya??

Kria: wo main...

When she looks at the guy, she finds no one.

Neha: tum firse jagte hue saone dekhne lagi, come on kria, Grow up!

She leaves.

Kria: hmm.. phir wahi, "REYAANSH!"

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St. Louse College

A car stops and a boy comes out. He looks cool for his black goggles and hot for his six packs fitting.

Another boy comes.

Boy: Rey!

He turns and finds a smiling face looking at him. He was looking handsome with his red T-shirt and blue jeans, dashing for his stylist blue jacket. He was having a bag on his back and his smile was cute.

Rey: hi, SWAYAM!

Swayam: I have a good news yaar.

Rey: principal guzar gaye?

Sway: nahi! Par itni b badduaa mat de ki waqt se pehle hi... forget it. Good news ye hai k naye chemistry teacher ne join kiya hai.

Rey: god! Mujhe iss chemical mystery k bare mein koi baat nahi bol. I hate this subject.

Sw: I know. Par unka naam sunega na, then u r going to love it.

Rey: what?

Sw: yes. Her name is Miss Kareena...!

Rey: kapoor??

Sw: stupid! She is Mrs now.. our new teacher, Miss kareena Desai! Uss hot red saree mein kya lati hai yaar!!!

Rey:(waving his hand) oye! Miss kareena k Saif! Zyada ho raha hai.. chal.

Sw: chal.

They leave.

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Kria enters and searches for her bff SHARON. She doesn't know why, but her heart tells she needs her. Suddenly she hears a noise. "Sharon, Shanron" . She runs and finds Sharon standing near her car and in front of her there was a guy standing in the same position.

Kria: Sharon! Tum race...(cut by her)

Shar: hey kria..! han race kar rhi hun. Main ise dikha dungi k ladkiyan kya kuch kar sakti hain ladko k mukable.

Kria: par Sharon..

Sharon: come on kria, u too believe in self respect na? after all u r my bestiee!

Kria: thik hai par sambhal kar.

Race starts. Both cars start moving in full speed. After a while Sharon starts losing her control.

Kria: Sharon! Omg! Yeh toh unbalance ho rahi hai. kya karun... Reyaansh! Reyaansh ko bulati hun.

She runs to find him and bumps to someone. She was going to fall when he holds her. She sees her face and he was Rey! (bgm- Dil kyun yeh mera... shor kare) they have a long eye lock. But kria gets her senses back and stands straight.

Rey: ah.. are u ok?

Kria: ya!

Rey: kya hua? Kuch pareshaan lag rhi ho, kisi ko dhund rahi ho?

Kria: aap... aapko hi...

Rey: mujhe?? Achanak? Is everything alright?

Kria: wo... Sharon...

Rey: Sharon? Kya hua use?

Kria: wo race laga rahi hai...

Rey: what?

Kria: yes!

Rey: chalo!

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They reach the point. The game had already over and Sharon was sitting on a bench.

Rey: Sharon!

Sharon: Rey!

Rey: tum aisa kyun karti ho? Do u have any idea agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh... (cut by Sharon)

Sharon: I m sorry!

Rey: sorry? Why don't u understand? Tum meri jaan ho Sharon. I know tumhara ego baht strong hai, par.. try to control. Main hun tumhare saath, hamesha. Tumhe koi bhi problem hai, mujhe batao. Main har or se solve karne ki koshish karunga par... aisi risky chizen mat kiya karo.. mere liye??

Sharon: I m sorry Rey. Tum mere bhai hi nahi, mere best friend bhi ho. Main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahti thi. Aaj tumhara itna bada din hai, aur aaj jab tumne mujhe ye sab chodne ko kaha hai, toh main promise karti hun, main ye sab chod dungi. Aur aaj, tumhare gift k taur pe main yeh toufa deti hun, aaj k baad aisi risky chizen, main kabhi nahi karungi... Happy Birthday Rey!

Rey was looking at her in expressionless. After hearing all her word, he smiled and hugged her. "Thank u Barbie doll" he says.

He was leaving with a smile when:

Kria: ah.. Reyaansh!

He stops. He was surprised. In fact, he was shocked. The girl, who used to hide somewhere when he comes, called him. he turns.

Rey: ya!

Kria: Happy Birthday...

Rey(smiling): thanx! Aur kuch??

Kria: nahi.

He turns to go but again turns back.

Rey: kria!

She was surprised too. Its very little time when he comes in front of her, calls her name.

Kria: hmm.

Rey: sham ki party me toh aa rahi ho na?

Kria: party??

Rey: tumhe nahi pata?

She shakes her head with a "no".

Rey: aaj sham ko meri birthday party hai, Sharon, tumne bataya nahi?

Sharon: bas bolne hi waali thi..

Kria: wo.. aaj mujhe kuch..

Rey: naya bahana dhund rahi ho? Any way. Tum time nikal paao toh aajana, mujhe acha lagega.

He leaves.

Kria(in mind): kyun reyaansh? Kyun karte ho aap aisa? Jitna main dur jne ki koshish karti hun, aap utne kareeb aa jate ho. Kyun?

Rey (while walking thinks in mind): kab tak kria? Kab tak? Kab tak dabaye rakhogi apni feeling ko? Kyun nahi bol deti apni dil ki baat? Kyun?

Kria keeps looking on his way. Shorn sees this.

Sharon: kria!

No reaction.

Sharon: kria!!!!!!

Kria: hm... tumne kuch kaha??

Sharon: agar tum unhe pasand karti ho, toh batati kyun nahi?

Kria: kya bakwaas kar rahi ho? Aisa kuch nahi hai.

Sharon: kisse jhoot bol rahi ho kria? Mujhse, ya apne aap se?

Kria: come on Sharon, tum bhi kis baat ko le kar baith gayi. Leave it.

Sharon: han! Main hi toh hamesha bakwaas karti hun. ( she starts moving) jab dekho mujhe sunati rehti hai. Sharon yeh karo, Sharon yehmat karo. Sharon aise bolo, Sharon aise mat bolo. Sharon... ( she bumps to someone and falls downs.

Sharon: ouch!!!

She then hears someone laughing and looks up. There was swayam laughing loudly. She gets up.

Shoron: shut up!

But he continues.

Sharon: I said stop it!

He stops. She glares at him. but again he starts laughing.

Sharon: tum hamesha mujhe girate ho, aur hamesha haste kyun ho?

Swayam: main nahi girata, tum khud hi gir jati ho.

Sharon: just shut up! sadha hua bayngan( rotten brinjal)!

Swayam: tumne phir mujhe sadha hua bayngan kaha, tikhi mirchi!

Sharon: don't call me that!

Swayam: that u r! tikhi mirchi!

Sharon: you... (in mind) relax sharon! Calm down. Take a deep breath. Ise ladna, toh khudke pair me kulhadi maarna. Yeh already mujhse itna upset hai, k iss baar College Queen contest mein iske wajah se haarne k chances baht hain... so. No more fight!

Swayam: kya hua?? Bolne ko words nahi bache kya?

Sharon shows her teeth to him.

Swayam: apni iss stupid si shakal ko, aur stupid banana ki koshish kar rahi ho?

Sharon( with a o expression): meri shakal stupid hai???

Swayam: tumhe aj maaloom pada?

Sharon: tum khudko samajhte kya ho? Main tumse ache se baat karne ki koshish kar rahi hun taki tum mujhe College Queen contest mein vote do, aur tum... (cut by him)

Swayam: ek sec.. kya kaha tumne, main aur tumhe vote dunga?? Haha.. nice joke!

Sharon: its not a joke! I m perfect for it.

Swayam: in ur dreams. Agar tum aisa sochti ho na, then I challenge you, iss baar tum college queen nahi banogi.

Sharon: fine! Challenge, accepted! Main bhi dekhti hun, mujhe takkar kaun deta hai.

Both of them look at each other in a challenging expression. Then Sharon leaves and kria comes from Swayam's behind.

Kria: kya hua swayam?

Swayam: kuch nahi yaar... yeh jo teri bff hai na...Rer ki behen...

Kria: kaun? Sharon?

Swayam: han... pata nahi khudko samajhti kya hai, baht charbi chad gayi hai ise. Sayad utaarni padegi..

Kria: tum karoge kya?

Swayam looks at her and smiles.😉


to be continued...

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 10 years ago
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Part 2

Party

Swayam enters and bumps to Sharon.

Swayam: hosh! Tum dekhkar nahi chal sakti?

Sharon: tum dekhkar nahi chal sakte?

Swayam: tum...

Sharon: kria! (She goes and swayam too leaves)

Kria: hi Sharon..

Sharon: kya hua?

Kria: main thik toh lag rahi hun na??

Sharon: u r perfect! Chal come in.

After some times

Kria was going with two glasses of drink and she suddenly bumps to a lady.

Lady: oh my god! What have u done!

Kria: I m really sorry ma'am galti se... maine dekha nahi.

Lady: andhi ho jo dikhta nahi?

Sharon: usne kaha na galti se hua... aap itni choti si baat ka itna bada issue kyun bana rahi hai?

Lady: aapko shouk hoga naukron ko sar pe chadhane ka, mujhe nahi hai.

Sharon: excuse me!

Lady: bura mat manna, par in logon se aise hi baat karni chahiye warna inki bartameezi badh zati hai.

Rey: enough! Enough is enough! Aap badi hain, issliye aunty main aapse request kar raha hun, jane dijiye. Pehli baat, kis angle se kria aapko servant lagti hai? wo b aphi k tarah hamari mehmaan hai. aur dusri baat, agar aap meri party main insult nahi hona chahti toh yahn se chale jayiye. she leaves angrily followed by othrs.

Sharon: I m sorry Kria, meri wajah se tujhe kitna kuch sunna pada...

Kria: Sharon! Isme teri kya galti? Paglon jaise baat mat kar.

Sharon: maine hi toh kaha tha tumse drink lane ko. Anjane me hi ssahi, par mujhse galti hui hai kria!

Rey: yes! U r right! Galti tumsse hui hai. tumhe itni b akal nahi Sharon k mehmanon ki khatirdaari karni chahiye, naa ki unse kaam krwana chahiye?

Sharon: sorry Rey...

Rey: sorry? Sharon tumhari wajah se hamare party me kria ki inslt hui, verma aunty ne use servant kaha, and u r sorry???

Swayam: calm down rey, usne jaan baajh kar thodi kiya?

Rey: exactly! Soch samajhkar karti toh yeh sab nahi hota. I can't believe k tum itni irresponsible ho sakti ho!

Sharon's eyes fill with tears and she runs away.

Kria: Sharon...!

Reyam looks. Rey becomes tense and keeps his hands on his hips. Swayam looks at kria and leaves.

Kria: reyaansh!

He turns.

Kria: yeh aapne thik nahi kiya.

Rey: kria...

Kria: apko Sharon se aise baat nahi karni chahiiye thi.

Rey: par main...

Kria: wo apki behen hai, kamse kam is baat ka toh khayal karte.

Rey: haan lekin...

Kria: kya bit rahi hogi uspar jo bewajah apne use daant dia, aura b aap...

Rey: stop! Meri baat suno!

Kria: reyaansh...

Rey; main gusse me tha iss liye control nahi hua aur Sharon par chilla diya.

Kria: par main...

Rey: I know mujhe use iss tarah baat nahi karni chahiye thi par main kya karta?

Kria: haan lekin...

Rey: use zaroor baht boora laga hoga par sirf wahi toh meri apni hai, issliye sara gussa uspar utaar dia. Lekin tum ho ki meri koi baat hi sunna nahi chati... tumhara naam Kria nahi "Baat Cutter" hona chahiye tha!

She looks at him widening her eyes.

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Sharon was sitting in the garden, crying. Swayam comes. He requests his hanky to her. She looks up and takes it.

Sharon: tum yahan kyun aye ho?

Swayam: (sits beside) tumhara dukh baantne.

She looks at him he smiles.

Swayam: mazzak kar raha hun... Sharon, main rey ka dost hun, use baht achi tarah janta hun aur yeh b k uski baton ka tumhe bur laga hoga par...

Sharon: par?? Par kya? Tumne dekha nahi usne mujhe kaise daanta?

Swayam: wo tumhara bada bhai hai, tumhe daantna fatkarna, uska haq hai..

Sharon: han.. wo mera bada bhai hai, mujhe daantna fatkarna, uska haq hai... par mere dil ko chot pahunchana, kya yeh b uska haq hai?

Swayam: rey ka apna kehne ko tumhare alawa aur koi nahi hai, apna samajhkar dil ki bhadaas usne tum par utaar di, aur jinse hum pyar karte hain, unhise toh ladhte hain.. agar tum use nahi samjhogi toh kaun samjhega?

Sharon stands up and swayam too.

Sharon: sayad tum thik keh rahe ho... kabhi kabhi samajhdaari ki baatien kar lete ho...

Swayam looks her widening his eyes. Sharon turns to go. Then again turns.

Sharon: swayam... thank you!

She leaves. Swayam smiles and leaves too.

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Kriyaansh standing facing each other. Kria widening her eyes.

Rey(in mind): yeh tu kya bol gaya rey! Tu aise hi kria ko koi b nickname kaise de sakta hai? pata nahi wo kya soch rahi hogi...

Sharon comes.

Sharon: rey!

Kriayaansh looks. Sharon comes and hugs rey. Swayam comes.

Sharey: I m sorry!!

Sharon: tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho

Rey: main bewajah tum par chillaya, bhai behen k riste ka lihaaz tak nahi kiya.

Sharon; tumhari koi galti nahi, aur phir jinse hum pyar karte hai, unhise toh ladte hai..

Swayam smiles hearing this.

Rey: sayad meri Barbie doll sach much badi ho rahi hai...

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Night

Rey: yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Lakh koshis karne par b kyun nahi chipa pata main kria k liye apni feeling s ko? Agar use mera saath nahi chahiye, toh mujhe use force nahi karna chahiye.. par kaise chupayun main apna pyar?

Kria: Yeh sab kya ho raha hai? Jitna main rey se dur jane ki koshis karti hun, wo utna hi close aa jaate hain... main chahkar b unke kareeb nahi jaa sakti. Wo samajhte kyun nahi? Unhe kisi b tarah apni feeling dabani hogi,,, meri tarah!!

Swayam: Sharon! Choti Choti baat per o leti hai, ghamand me toh sabki maa hai! aur akad! Akar sirf mere samne hai... par kuch toh hai, jo bahut sweet hai... yeh tu kya soch rha hai swayam? Mat bhool wo opposition hai! tujhe usse jitna hai!

Sharon: Swayam! Hamesha ladta hai, par kabhi kabhi samajhdaari ki baat b kar leta hai.. Sweet hai, par idiot b! hamesha ladta hai, but ab toh uske fight ki adat ho gqayi hai!!! shut up Sharon! Tu yeh soch rahi hai? mat bhul, wo kabhi b attack kar sakta hai!

Kya yeh badalte riste layenge inki life me koi naya twist??????

Love

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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will comment when i come online through pc :)
need to say the banner is beautifull
prologue and character sketch intrestuing
updates are awesome
do continue and pm me ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is awesome ... just read your concept cs and parts 1 & 2...
wonderful and fantastic banner... do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey buddy...
long time
update was awesome
kriyansh and swaron...
loved their bonding
and rey's batcutter...
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome concept

both d parts r lovely


pm me when update
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Awesome

Ye badalte rishte kamaal krege

Update soon nd pm me
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Continue soon n pm me when u update 😊
Edited by KriyaanshManan - 10 years ago
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Nice n sweet start of story.. 😊
update next chapter

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