SwaRon OS In The City Of Love - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wow
Fabulous OS
Sharon and Swayam are video chat friends but they love each other
But she thinks he has a girlfriend
Loved the way her misunderstanding was cleared :)
Their kiss and confession was great <3
Really a treat to read :D
Keep writing...and thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
That was such a cute os
Loved it
Aww the confession was wow
The thought of online friends in love ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
It was such a cute OS.. 😊
Poor Sharon it was her dream.. 😆
Swaron online friends.. 😊
Sharon gayi surprise dene but khud shock ho gayi, but Swayam ne uski MUs clear krdi..😃
A simple, sweet story.. 😊
Loved it.. 😊

Thanks for PM.😊




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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
amazing n cute os
full on swaron
keep writing
thanx for pm
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
such a cute n lovely os
gr8 concept
superbly written
n i lyked sharon's character a lot in this
keep writing more such stuff
n thanks fr d pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
mai for a second sach mein chali gayi thi
aur kaha dream world mein!!!!!!

how can a story be so damn cute!!!!

i was going awweee throughout...

how sweet yaar... loved it...

ps: i knw chotu comment and pata nahi kaha kaha mane comment nahi ki
but mera xams mujhe maar dalega kabhi lag raha hai...i'll get back to the ff soon

love ani
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Thankyou mansie for this cute cute story...do write more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Oh my bff this was awsmest os ever
Wah ! Wah ! Shran n swayam chatting bff n fell in love ...oh young love !! Lol
Sharan giving suprise visit n damn!! Twist a gal kissing swayam n misunterstanding n den milna , confront karna n finally confession n end wid romance ...ahh!! Maza aagaya

I loved dis os

Love bff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
A beautiful OS.
I loved the idea and concept. Amazing. 👏
Keep writing. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
heya mannu
really nice os
sharon getting hurt after seeing
someone else kissing swayam
and that too b4 their first actual meet
and sharon getting dizzy
amd waking up to find hersef
at swayams place
their kiss and confesssion thereafter
was really nice
thnx 4 d pm
keep writing\
and congo your exams got postponed

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