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Chitra.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dekha nhi? Upar Unreservekiya hai na!Pagal 😛

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Dew..

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Posted: 10 years ago

loved this os
its emotional one
thanks fr d pm :)

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-spongy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

It was extremely beautiful.
The emotions were so well penned down. I just can't imagine Sharon without Swayam or Vice-Versa.
Beautiful story. Thanks for the PM.
Keep writing more. Would love to read them as well.

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very well written OS..😊

Sharon missing Swayam..😊

You very Beautifully shown Sharon's state of mind, her pain, fear after she got the news of Trains accident.. 👏

Finally Swayam reached home safely.. 😊

Loved last Swaron part.. 😊

Sharon's emotion throughout the OS, was very well described.😊

Loved it..😊

Thanks for PM. 😊

Edited by Vani20 - 10 years ago

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anubhutijain

@anubhutijain

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awww!such a cute os..srry fr late reply..bt anyway thanks fr dpm ;)

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_SHyNE_

@_SHyNE_

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Posted: 10 years ago

Going to read this os...
will definitely comment again after reading...
Thanks 4 pm...

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

welcm bck shini

really nic os

swayams and sharons

phone convo was nice

sharons tension was well evident

and for once even i thot

sharons fear wud turn true

she frantically searchd 4 him

and he was not even picking d call

and finaaly wen swayam was back

sharons happinesss

and relief was well expressed through

the kisss

thnx 4 pming me

really it awas a treat to read

keep writing

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 10 years ago

Shiniii

So emotional one...

Loved it...

Loved the way ur penned sharon's character...

Her fear, her tension everything was so super

Do write more ohk...

With lots of love

Keechu

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