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Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful OS.

It was something very unique. And the last line was ❤️

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 10 years ago

the story of
how much the sun loved the moon... so much that
he died every day to let her breath...

Such an impressive line :) :)
I totally loved it :)

This was kinda different from the rest of your works but yes it was such a pleasurable read :)

Great work Ani :)

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 10 years ago

it was good
nice start and a beautiful end
it was simple yet magical
thanks for the pm

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Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey

it was soo emotional yet too crisp

the feel and the emotions were well written

sharons fear and swayams soothing words were too good to read

the last line was soo gud

it was heart touching

all in all a gr8 work with a different touch

keep going..

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