A KRIYAANSH OS- **Love or Fear? What Controls u? **

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome diyu...

just loved it...

Amazingly written..

wonderful...

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Angel_Anu

@Angel_Anu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Its amazing...loved the way u described her grief & sorrow...she couldnt save him & that was pricking her soul but thankfully it was not Rey...they are one now & forever

nothing could seperate them

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Diyu, Meri Jaan 🤗

Ah-mazing OS.

Loved it.

Beautifully written. I loved the way u portrayed everything.

Kria's nightmares, they were scary. You described it well.

Felt kriya's emotions deeply.

Fear and Love. I understood it after reading why this title.

And I srsly thougth Rey was dead But It was his Twin.

He's alive and finally they were one.

Diyuu, You write so Good.

Keep writing. ❤️

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Diyu..!🤗

The title itself was just.. mesmerizing..👏

and you know what, everything was so quintessentially written... I loved loved loved reading the OS!😳

my mature sis😉

Last part made me blush... *uhhu uhhu*☺️

Kriyaansh Rocks!😃

The first part was so scary.. god! mujhe heart attack dene ka plan tha kya diyu?😡😆

I was about to cry...Rey mar gaya😭

but thank god, he was alive.. warna😡

Accha sun.. see am commenting here.. ab ek aur apni story ka title de.. I'll comment today..😳 try karungi ki sabhi pe kardun😃

Love you love you love you!🤗

And you know what.. you're writing is super duper amazing!⭐️

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Diyu superb jo

From her nightmares to the eventual peace at end...her emotions were beautifully portrayed!

Her battle b/w physical and mental weakness then her decision to find her way rather than rely on BFF was shown so well

And then when finally her nightmare ended...the fear of it being unreal and the feel of his presence beautiful

Loved the entire storyline portraying hatred would end someday but love would always haunt you

Awesome diyu

sorry for the late comment🤗

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wonderful os

Kriya was living such a lifeless life
Finally Rey came
The person who died was rey's twin

Finally they are together

Waiting for next update

Thanks for pm

Continue soon..

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome jaan 🤗

Beautifull
greatly writen

sorry for late replying

thanx for pm

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Yo Girl..
You are too good in dis..
From where do you get such great concepts..
Lets write somethn together.. 😉
We wil rock If.. 😆
Kidding re..
Keep writin baby..

Love Rupanshi 🤗

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

its soo beautifull!!!!!!! hey btw 1stly i should say a big sorry to u,i couldnt read ur works for soo many daysss!!!!! but it wasnt my fault,my id is malfucntioning,my pm box not eopning,not showing new messages!!!!! miraculously to day it opened and read meghna's work and ur work!!!! will defntely read more of ur works now dhire dhire😊😊 and this os was greatt!!!!! 1st part was scaryt even i was in a dilemma ke kaun asli hai kaun nakli,but love did conquer!!!!!